Hi it's me again.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~ Bulma: Jabin U suck at writing. Jabin: That does wonders for my self-esteem. Goku: I think Jabin writes pretty good if u ask me. Bulma: Well nobody asked u, bon-bon boy. Goku: Sorry B-chan. Bulma: U better be. Jabin: *Sigh* This is my life. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~ "Bulma wake up I'm hungry and the robot wont give me breakfast." He said as he shook Bulma as softly as he could. "Go away Goku I still have a good." She looked at the clock "4 hour's of sleep." She said in a groggy voice. "But I'm hungry NOW." Goku whined. "So what." Bulma said. "If your not going to get out of bed I'll get out for u." Goku said as he picked Bulma up out of bed. Goku then found out how many shades of red it was possible to turn. Bulma had no under were on. "Sorry bulma. I didn't mean to." He said as he put her down. As soon as her feet touch the ground he zoomed out of the room. ~ A while after that Bulma came into the kitchen only to see Goku shooting ki blasts at the robot. "I want my breakfast NOW." Bulma just walked over to the robot and pressed a button and a feast came shooting out of the robot. "Thanks Bulma." He said. Bulma just grabbed his collar and started bashing him over the head with a metal pole. "What did I do?" He asked. "That was for before." She said
Was it good bad, horrible, stinky, review and give me some ideas, K?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~ Bulma: Jabin U suck at writing. Jabin: That does wonders for my self-esteem. Goku: I think Jabin writes pretty good if u ask me. Bulma: Well nobody asked u, bon-bon boy. Goku: Sorry B-chan. Bulma: U better be. Jabin: *Sigh* This is my life. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~ "Bulma wake up I'm hungry and the robot wont give me breakfast." He said as he shook Bulma as softly as he could. "Go away Goku I still have a good." She looked at the clock "4 hour's of sleep." She said in a groggy voice. "But I'm hungry NOW." Goku whined. "So what." Bulma said. "If your not going to get out of bed I'll get out for u." Goku said as he picked Bulma up out of bed. Goku then found out how many shades of red it was possible to turn. Bulma had no under were on. "Sorry bulma. I didn't mean to." He said as he put her down. As soon as her feet touch the ground he zoomed out of the room. ~ A while after that Bulma came into the kitchen only to see Goku shooting ki blasts at the robot. "I want my breakfast NOW." Bulma just walked over to the robot and pressed a button and a feast came shooting out of the robot. "Thanks Bulma." He said. Bulma just grabbed his collar and started bashing him over the head with a metal pole. "What did I do?" He asked. "That was for before." She said
Was it good bad, horrible, stinky, review and give me some ideas, K?