Ok, so this will be my first poetic thing I've EVER posted... not that I posted much... ahum
ummm, disclaimer: not mine... well the rhyme is, what it's associated with isn't... well I actually wrote this without the intention to associate it with anything, when I re-read it I was like; "whoa, dude, that's like Gundam SEED Destiny, wicked" (not that high though) ... You can decide for yourself which charecter is chanting this... hihi
anyways moving on:
when you read it, you HAVE GOT TO MIND THE PUNCTUATION OR ELSE IT SUX, A LOT!
Freedom
So you came with your fancy dreams
Your words so true, so free
Your actions; your deeds framed with love
All I wanted, all I needed
There with you
In you...
Yet still, I doubt your intentions
Your ideas so passionate, so strong
Your soldiers; your followers blinded by speach
And speach alone
All I wanted? All I needed?
How can it be so easy
How can you make it so easy
For us?
No, for me
Now I know
Clouded your words were
Half trues, half lies
Never in darkness, never in light
So deceiving, so manipulating
Blinded by lust, I followed
A path, a road set free
To you
By you
Used
Wounded, not broken
My intuition, my own instincts telling me to leave
To run, to hide
But I refuse them
I turn and face you
Your lies and your truth
I will refuse your love
To find my own
For me
For Freedom
Review please? I really wanna know what you guys thought about it...
xMar