Okay, here is the next chapter of this fiction please review for me and give advice on how I can improve this. And sorry about the old English in the last chapter, thank you for correcting me on it!
Chapter Two
The night's mysterious whispers in the darkness,
A boy cries in fear.
Will no one,
Hear his cries of pain.
Of the scars that will never heal.
I hear my child's whispers,
For I will always love him.
- Yukionna-
Link; thankfully only lost his shirt, he also lost his favorite hat. He forced himself up with a lot of effort. He wasangry now, he tightly griped his sword, the energy was there again being charged insidethe creaturesmouth.
Link grabbed his bow and arrow and fired it inside its mouth when he opened it, the creature stopped. It started to bleed from the inside, it clasped on the ground, when it was on the ground Link lifted up his sword to its eye and stabbed it.
Link grabbed his chest in pain and collapsed with one knee on the ground. The man threw Zelda aside and walked over to Link.
"Who the hell are you!" asked Link angrily, the man smiled.
"My name is Rosuto." he laughed at Link.
"So you're the Hero of Time I've heard so much about." he spit on the ground in front of Link,
"Well, you're a pathetic sight to bad. I've met worthier opponents then you." Link smirked, his eyes hidden beneath his bangs.
"I wouldn't take me so lightly." Link charged at Rosuto's stomach, the wind was knocked out of Rosuto. He grabbed Link's shoulders and burned him.
Link panicked and jumped back, he grabbed his shoulders in pain. Rosuto lifted up his hands and fire started appearing out of them.
"Damn it!" Link yelled in pain, suddenly as if from no where Impa came and jumped in front of Link. She put her arms in front of her face trying to protect herself from being burnt.
After the flames had died away, she dashed toward Rosuto, he took out a sword; Impa took out her concealed dagger.
"Ah, a shiekah haven't seen one of those for a long time." Impa smiled.
"Well, you must consider yourself very fortunate." she replied. Rosuto swung his sword down, Impa blocked it with her dagger.
Link, ran up to Zelda. He sat down beside her to see if she was alright, he checked her over she didn't seem like she was bleeding or even bruised for that matter.
Link turned back to Impa, Rosuto did a horizontal slash Impa jumped over the sword and stood on the blade.
"Please, I think you can do a bit better." Impa said almost mockingly. Rosuto looked outraged his left arm was bleeding.
"Your right you deserve a better challenge." he held up his hand and grabbed Impa by the neck and zapped her.
Link grabbed his sword and stabbed him while his back was turned. Rosuto turned around to look at Link.
"Little bastard!" he smacked Link in the face throwing him right threw a tree! Impa got herself off the ground and tried standing herself up. Her neck was bleeding a little bit, and she looked very pale.
Link fell against another tree, one of his eyes were now bleeding, and trying to stand was now one of his hardest tasks. Link felt some sort of burning feeling in his chest he opened his eyes to see someone standing over him.
He looked to be no more then a 17 year old boy, he had blond hair that was a little messy and he wore a black suit and he had looked like he was a ninja or something. He put one of his hands on Link's chest it started to glow a weird white color, Link's bruises were slowly disappearing, the gash he now had on his back was disappearing also.
The boy stood up he was very silent and strong looking. Rosuto looked angry at the boy, he grabbed his sword and looked as if he wanted to tare him apart but something was stopping him.
Impa appeared beside him, they were both ready to fight now. Impa and the 17 year old ran in separate directions charging at Rosuto, Impa grabbed her knife and stabbed into Rosuto's back, the boy their new partner reacted in a way that looked like he was in pain. Rosuto pushed Impa out of the way, and threw his sword at the boy; Link got up and ran in front of him.
Links sword blocked Rosuto's sword from hitting them; Link threw it back at Rosuto and charged at him the boy fallowed him with determination. Link stabbed Rosuto in the side and the boy once again reacted in pain, but he ignored it and he too stabbed him.
Rosuto in frustration pushed them all away and pointed his finger at Zelda; Link had no idea what he was saying to Zelda, it was an unknown language that he had never heard before. After he was done he disappeared into the chilling night.
Link walked over to Zelda and picked her up off the ground. He turned to Impa and the boy, the boy was now coughing up blood.
"Let's go back to the castle before something else happens." said Link. Impa, the boy, and Link all rode back to the castle. Unknowing that there was a new adventure unfolding before them, one that will hold many tears and pain.
… The Next Morning…
Zelda woke up seeing a woman with silver hair, which had been tied into a pony tail, and boy that had bandages over his chest area, and arms, he also had blond hair, and blue eyes. They were both standing over her.
"She's finally awake!" yelled Link happily. Zelda looked at him clueless of what was going on, Zelda turned to Link and asked.
"Who are you people, where am I?" Link looked at Zelda kind off puzzled.
"Oh Zelda, quit messing around." Link hoped she was joking around. Impa looked closely at Zelda.
"Zelda sweetie, what is the Triforce and what is your favorite color?" Zelda looked at Impa very puzzled, a little later her eyes started to water in frustration.
"I don't know…" she said. Impa's eyes softened and she looked up at Link.
"I don't think she's joking around Link." Said Impa, "I think we lost "our" Princess Zelda." Link stopped for a moment, Zelda started crying. Link grabbed Zelda and hugged her.
"Here, don't cry Zel." Link tried with his best efforts to comfort her.
"Is Zelda my name?" Link laughed a little bit and looked down at Zelda.
"Yeah, it's your name…" He said gently, Zelda looked up at him.
"Who are you then?" Link smiled at her, his eyes almost filled up in tears as she said that. He let go Zelda and sat her back down.
"My name is Link, remember you and I have been friends for a very long time, since we were just kids." Link looked back at Zelda; he could tell that she didn't remember him at all. Impa grabbed Link's shoulder and squeezed it.
Impa knew Link was feeling pain from Zelda not remembering anything, because she knew Link loved Zelda but was too afraid to tell her how he felt.
He looked at Impa trying to keep Zelda from seeing him cry. Impa grabbed Link's arm and started to walk him out the door.
"Princess, rest a little maybe your memories will come back to you." Impa closed the door behind them and walked Link into the courtyard below. Tears were coming from Link's eyes.
"How could I let this happen to Zel." asked Link, Impa turned to Link.
"It's not your fault Link, I think that man erased Zelda's memories somehow kind of like brain washing." Link looked up at Impa.
"Link, tomorrow morning I'm going to bring you and Zelda to a village Elder he will know what to do." said Impa she pat Link on the back reinsuring him that everything will be all right.
When Link was ready, he went back to check up on Zelda. He forgot to knock on the door before coming in, and found Zelda in the middle of dressing. Link blushed heavily when he saw Zelda (Sorry about this part but I was so tempted to do this).
"Link, what's wrong." asked Zelda when he was at the door, Link blushed even worse the heat was rushing to his face. Link slowly turned around and walk out the door blushing badly.
"On second thought it's late why not go to bed." said Link out loud to himself.
WOW, my boyfriend is right our relationship is exactly like Zelda and Link's. He is so going to kill me when he reads this XD. Sorry if this chapter gets really bad I'm not really good at doing action stuff...
Well anyway please R&R!
