Ok guys, I'm all the way up to Chapter twenty-two in my notebook, and I finished the climax of the story. You may see Chapter twenty-one by Saturday, You may only get to see up to Chapter eighteen by then. Just to let you know, ok? Oh, and I haven't read Starlight yet, but I heard that Ashfur and Brambleclaw were fighting over Squirrelflight, so should I change Ashfur to Rainwhisker, or just keep him? Please let me know!


After hunting from Sunhigh to Moonhigh, the cats still hadn't caught much prey. Tsunamipaw and Ashfur caught a vole, a squirrel and a mouse. The she-cats had caught two mice and a blackbird.

"Twenty-four pieces to go," Ratpaw commented sadly, looking at thier meager catch for half a day's hunting.

"Tsunami!"

Ratpaw's brother turned towards the voice. "River!"

A gray tom bounded towards the cats.

"How have ya been?" River asked.

"Well enough. You remember my sister, Ratpaw."

"Of course! Milady," River bowed his head respectfullyto her and Whitepelt. "And who is this lovely young kitten?"

"I'm Whitepelt, and that's Ashfur," She replied.

"Well, it's nice to meet you both."

"Same here," Ashfur meowed.

"I heard your cousin wants ya to catch thirty pieces of prey," River commented.

"Yes," Ratpaw answered.

"Well, I'll help ya."

Whitepelt was stunned. "Why?"

"Thirty pieces of prey? That's more 'an we need. An' it's outrageous. Night's an old mousebrain. You and I both know it, Tsunami."

"Thanks, River, but Night will catch you."

"Night can go chase her own tail. My friend needs help. And you know all the toughness in Night is just an act. She wouldn't have the heart to punish one of her own."

"Well, thank you, River, but we need to get some sleep."

"Come on, I'll show you where your going to sleep." River led the way to a den on the other end of the camp. The tired ThunderClan cats followed him and fell gratefully asleep.


Yeah, I know. That was pretty short.