Sorry, guys, but I was kind of busy in the last few weeks, which include dentist, middle term exam practice, and so on. More importantly, I can't believe the most scholarship that a student can get is in grade 11, not grade 12. Oh, god helps me.

Well, since I am new at story writing, so I barely got few reviews, but thanks anyway. Because they are better than nothing, right? Besides, I need lots of help about how to improve my story. And here are few of them:

FireemblemPRO: ok man let me lay this on you... i hate ocs paired up with lyn, eliwood, etc! you have to make the characters fall for other characters like eliwood with lyn.

Ok, good suggestion, but I am gotten tire of original pairings. Besides, it is a Lyn, Sin, Ninian and Eliwood love triangle, so I am sure that will satisfy your liking, right?

DespairSpreader: The romance feels a bit rushed...
You DO notice that your character's a Gary-Stu, right?
A story does not need overpowered author-created characters. It needs ordinary people... People who us readers can relate to. It might be grand, but a tactician who knows magic is not as satisfying as a person who can use their head instead of their "powers." That's the kind of person any reader would agree to follow.

First thing, what is a Gary-Stu? And then Sin will only use his power when it is necessary. Besides, if you read carefully, you should notice that in the first chapter, Sin had been mentioned as a weapon instead of human, so there must be some story about it, Right? (Also, I like those people with strange past.)

So, there are some reviews, so thank you all for reading my story. And now for the 7th chapter, enjoy.

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Chapter 7

Sin stares at the Ninian for a long time. None of them seem to notice their surroundings, as if that they have lost in their own world.

Who is this girl? Why am I having a feeling that I had met her before? And why the heck am I feeling relief? Sin immediately excuses himself from the room, and left the room.

The room is completely silent, until Sain breaks it. "Ah, such beautiful young woman. Why haven't we met earlier? My name is Sain, the honourable knight of Caelin. Please, when if you ever need any kind of help, just say my name and I will be by your side." Everyone stare at Sain as if he had gone nuts. Everyone except Ninian, who is looking at the door and Nil, who pulls a big hammer out of nowhere ready to smash Sain into the ground.

"What were you says, mister?" After a moment, Ninian finally notices others' existence in the room, and asks Sain politely.

Sain is taken quite back since THIS is an answer that he never expected. When he is about to continue his ridicules speeches, Kent comes out and knock Sain out cold.

"Please excuse us." After that, Kent drags Sain out of the room.

"OK, anywaaaaaay, let us introduce ourselves." The red hair lord comes to the front, follows by few others and says, "My name is Eliwood, son of the Marquess of Pherae. The people behind me are Erk, the mage with blue hair and many books, Sara, the girl who can kill even the toughest guy with her mouth, and Sara, please don't try to kill me with your stuff anymore. And last my best friend, Hector, Brother of Marquess Ostia. The big man with big axe and blue armor."

Lyn follows the suit, also comes to the front, introduces her team and tells her tale. Just that moment, Sin comes into the room quietly. He scans the room quickly, and spots the Ninian. He sneaks his way to her and pulls her out of the room without anyone notice them.

--In a dark castle far, far away from Lyn and the others--

A huge man sits on the throne of the castle with one of his hand on his chin, looking out of the window. His face looks no older than twenty years old, but his body is at least ten feet tall. He wears a large black robe with symbols of many different kinds of dragons.

Two men and two women, all wearing the same thing as the their leader expect with less dragon signs come into the room and sit on each sides of the table at front of the big man. They, too, look no older than the big man himself.

"It seems your plan had failed us again, Seth. Just as usual." Their leader says coolly to the man on his left side. The leader is very angry in the moment, because not only did they lose the girl, they also almost been find out about their plans. "However, one thing you did right was killing all those humans you send AFTER they gave you all the information. But now there is another problem, Nergal is beginning to notice our movement. We can't afford to let him withdraw the plan now. We need his foolishness to complete our new world."

Seth has long brown hair on his head, and a very pale face. He looks much like a ghost. However it was not him who replies, but the woman sits across from him. "My lord, we might fall this time, but we had gain much information. We had found another one of our brothers, awakened."

"Is that so? Who is he?"

"Yes, but he seems to forgot his past, because if he had fully awakened from his slumber, then none of our soldiers could come back. As for his name or his power, I really don't know."

"Very well then. What is your plan, Mara?" The leader looking at the girl on the end of the right side table, "You are my most trusted servant and one of the elite soldiers. What is your option on the matter?"

The girl stays silent for a while and finally takes off her cloak revealing a Ninian look like feature except with blue eyes, replies "I will try to convince him to join our side, and if he dare to resist us, then I shall kill him without mercy."

--Back to Sin and Ninian--

Sin comes to the inn's back with Ninian following him. After Sin reaches his destination, he turns toward Ninian and says "Ok, Ninian. I don't why, but some how I felt that we had meet before? Did you feel the same thing?"

Ninian doesn't answer Sin's questions. She cringed slightly and backed away from Sin, while looking everywhere but him.

Sin looks at the nervous girl for a moment, finally lose his cool and takes a big step forward, locking Ninian in a corner. "Ok, I am not REALLY forcing you to tell me anything personal. How about this, since you are being chased by those weird guys, I will convince Lyn into letting you and your brother come with us, and when you are ready then you will tell me everything about the past?"

Ninian thinks for a while, and finally gave up since there isn't really any way for her to escape. "Fine. However why are you so eager to know about the past?"

"Ah, didn't I tell you that I lost almost all my memories?"

"Oh, I see." Ninian and Sin were both staring at each other like nothing else mattered. Neither of them noticed the shadows hidden around: Nil and Lyn. And of course, they never saw the hate on their face.

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Sorry, if you feel the story is kind short. I wasn't very successful at finding new ideas so that's that. Also, so far the story is around Lyn, Sin and Ninian, there will be more pairings after Lyn find her grandfather, because…because I suppose there isn't very many things to write about since all the characters don't know each other that well, and there aren't really many characters. I think you would understand, right?

So, If you feel my story is either improving or need more changes, please tell me in the review, OK?