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(Meanwhile with Sesshy and Rin)
Sesshomaru and Rin had gone out into the gardens and were talking together (well more like Rin was talking and Sesshomaru was talking back with one word answers.) Then Sesshomaru smelled Aku he turned around and there she was in all her menacing glory.
"Aku, I do not have patients for you at the moment, leave." He said.
"Excuse me Sesshomaru? I thought you were supposed to be trained in ways of NOT being rude to your guests," Aku said with a smirk.
'Ya know she IS right.' Voice Two said to Sesshomaru.
'Silence.'
"Aku, you are not 'a guest', you are a pest." (HE he he! Fluffy made a rhyme!) "Now either leave or explain yourself."
"Very well, I will explain… I came here to see if the alter to your spell worked and if the spell I placed on the girl, Rin, who you love, worked as well."
Rin, who was standing slightly behind Sesshomaru and had been standing there since Aku arrived, was shocked. 'Love'? Had she heard right? Had this demon who just appeared before them said that her Lord Sesshomaru loved her? And what was this alter to Sesshomaru's curse? Did this mean that not all of the women who saw him would fall in love with him? Or that there was no way to get rid of it? And what was she talking about with the spell this demon put on Rin. Rin didn't feel any different nor did she look any different and she was sure Sesshomaru would have told her if a curse had been placed on her. As these questions were buzzing around in head Sesshomaru started to talk to Aku.
"The curse you put on myself has changed, but the curse you tried to inflict on Rin did not work."
"Sesshomaru don't make it sound so negative! I put 'spells' on you both not 'curses.' I mean I would think that you would know that spells are positive and curses are negative. I have never cursed anyone! Except for that one guy, but I had a good reason! Besides what do you mean the spell on the girl didn't work?"
"She was protected." Sesshomaru said as Rin's hand reached up and grabbed the stone on her necklace and twiddled it in her fingers.
"Protected! That's too bad I think that you would have really loved the spell I tried to put on her, even though you are old-fashioned. You would have found it hard to resist not telling her you love her."
Sesshomaru was about to tell Aku that he did not love Rin when Voice One said something.
'Not now! Don't be in denial now when Rin is right behind you!'
'I, Sesshomaru am not in denial. I do not love Rin.'
'Yes you do! You don't have to admit it now but if you say you don't love Rin right in front of her she will never forgive you!' Said Voice three.
For some reason that made Sesshomaru rethink what he was going to say to Aku.
"Aku, leave. Now."
"Sesshomaru, I will leave now but remember if you ever need me to put a spell on ANYone for ANYthing, then I will be of service." And with that Aku turned around and left Sesshomaru and Rin there alone in the garden.
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I know it was short but it was a good place to end a chapter! And I'm sorry, I know I said I'd post on Monday and it's Tuesday, but I had a lot of homework yesterday.And I was thinking Sesshomaru's personality in my story, how he won't say he's in love with Rin when everyone knows he is! Well it's a lot like that one song that Meg, off of the Disney Hercules movie, sings,that 'I won't say I'm in Love song.' The only difference is that Sesshomaru won't admitout-loud or in his head that he lovesRin because there's three voices in his head that would just love to make fun of him!