Thinking of You
Tonight I look at my treasure
That reminds me of you
Hoping to see you again
When my body goes six feet under
And my soul goes to heaven
I remembered you well
When you were happy
Or sad
I wonder you even think of me
Up there in the sky
Where the golden moon shines
And when the orange sun burns
I look at my treasure
A crystal of memories
Of your love and care
Its beauty show your true soul
Its light green color show the color of your eyes
Its chain shows the chain of your heart
My soul weeps because you're not here
But I know one day
I'll see you again
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AN: So what you think:
1 is super bad
2 is just bad; needs improvement
3 is ok
4 is good
5 is super great