Thanks again for the reviews. I fixed name and delete the nose piercing (which was only in there cause my friend insisted it was I don't like it either.)
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Hermione didn't know how he knew all the stuff that he did. All she knew was that she now had a sudden hatred for the muggles she used to call her family.
Ch 4.
(3 days before Hogwarts.)
After a while with her real father, Hermione grew into the death eater look and took the name Amelia Hermione Narcissa Riddle. She got a tattoo of a moving snake on her left hipbone. She grew to love her new father and hate her old life. Very slowly the attitude of Hermione Jane Granger changed into the sarcastic mean attitude of the Amelia Riddle daughter of Voldemort. One of the only things that stayed the same was her voice, even though now it sounded meaner.
"Father? Where are you? Mixie told me you needed to speak with me?" Amelia yelled thought the castle.
"I'm in my office." Came her reply.
"You called?" She asked when she stepped in the office. She looked around and saw many death eaters. She looked to her Father
"Amelia, today is the day you get your Darkmark." He said simply but with a proud tone to it.
Amelia smiled.
"Really? Awesome! Well come on Father its not like we have al day." she rushed him. He laughed.
"Alright. Do you pledge allegiance to me?"
"Yes"
"Will you fallow my every command?"
"Yes"
"Do you detest the light side and all who follow Harry Potter, The boy who dishonored me?"
"Yes"
"Do you understand that once you get this mark you will be a death eater for life, no going back?"
"Yes."
"Do you understand tat if you betray me you will be put to death."
"Yes"
"Very Good daughter." He said and pushed his wand into her wrist and muttered a spell. Soon pain shot through her arm but no mark was present. She looked at him questionably.
"I will not make it visible in less you say 'silhouette fidèle' and it shall appear say 'être parti' and it shall disappear. I did this because you will be going back to school in 3 days and it will not be visible. Inless you need it to be." He said.
Amelia looked down and said "silhouette fidèle" a skull with a snake coming out of its mouth with a black heart has on her wrist. She smiled. Then said "être parti'" and it disappeared.
"Thank you Father." She said and bowed.
"It is a very proud day when a Father has his daughter follow in his foot steps. I expect you all to treat Amelia like Royalty." He instructed and slowly they all nodded and a few said, "yes milord"
"You may leave." He instructed and they did. "Now Amelia, We have your school to think about I have decided to get a resorting so you will not be in Gryffindor, but seeing as I am the Dark Lord you will pose as a girl named Amelia Narcissa Tobby, a distant cousin or Lucius Malfoy's. You will pretend to be under his care since your "mother and father" died. I expect top scores form you or you will be punished." He said and Amelia nodded and said, "Yes Father."
"Good, you are excused to go shopping for school. You will need new robes, and such.
Goodbye." He said and turned to his work.
"Goodbye Father." She said and walked away.
OK! That was Ch 4 moving right along here aren't we? Heh
OK TRANSLATION TIME!
Silhouette fidèle means, "appear loyal (or faithful to a person)
Être parti means, "be gone"
They are both in French.
Ok well like always reviews are love, flames are Satan. (Not satin cause like one of my reviewers said that's a fabric.)
