For the people who reviewed, I'll try my best to make my chapters longer, and the random demons weren't so random when I thought about it. I'll try and write better, even though it didn't come up. I thought my intro was a little cheesy.
I'm staying at KC's for the first time. Instead of a nice comfy bed, he set me up a hammock! We were lying in our "beds" talking. "KC, can I ask you something?" He replied, "Shoot, Dante."
"You never told me why you need my help or who you are really. All I know is your name!" KC paused for a minute. "OK, I'll tell you. I called you here because I was testing out one of my inventions, the ISBN Portal. You type in an ISBN number on any game and the door would take you there. I kept it open for a little longer than I was supposed to. While I was practicing my sword fighting, I didn't realize my door wasn't hidden. The demons walked in and saw my room. Whatever population didn't die from the smell walked out of my bedroom. They saw my parents and attacked them. They're in hospital right now. I visit them every day, knowing it was my fault they're in that state. They still say they love me but I feel so rotten it's not funny. You knew them best. So I came to you for help."
That's when I realized something. He meant business. I said, "What are we doing lying here? Get your swords! We're going to kick some Demon butt!" We were out the door, and saw that the balloon had moved. We walked down the steps and drew our swords because we knew we would get a VIP pass to the swarms of Demons. Except, the Demons didn't try to fight us. The balloon floated to our general direction and ate us!
KC fell into the gooey pit this thing called its stomach. KC was clenching to the walls, trying not to scald himself in the acid. Agni & Rudra weren't helping either. "Master! You can swim, can't you?" Agni asked. "Yes! Can't you swim?" Rudra added. KC replied, "CAN YOU SHUT UP? I'M TRYING NOT TO GET US KILLED!" All that heard after was the echo on the word "killed".
We heard something tearing. We looked at the wall, and it seemed to be opening. A girl wearing a blue dress and had long pointy ears said, "KC, I can see you're in a bit of trouble. Should I get Dart and Lavitz to help you out of this one?" KC looked shocked. "Rose?"