HeyI really need your help here peeps! I need some one yto PQP (praise question polish this poem for me by friday:runs around pulling out hair: plz somebody help!
L-G
One day….
I stand alone;
Surrounded by them,
I know that this,
Will be my end.
They step in closer;
Some fast, some slow,
They think they know,
The way the wind will blow.
I fall down;
One knee holds me up,
Hand clutched to my heart,
Hiding my chalice, the saviors' cup.
They're closer now;
Only four steps away,
I throw my hand back,
And toss up my fey.
They stop stunned;
Eyes wide on their face,
The tables have turned,
And now I have faith.
It falls back down;
And latches on me,
An explosion erupts,
Their death I shall be.
But the horrors that happened to they
Will be donned on me one tragic day.
Plz some body review this with
-what they liked about it
-what they didn't understand
-and what needs work!
ohhh and your first name!( so that my teacher thinks it legit!)
Ja Ne
Loser-Girl / SCHOOL GIRL IN DESPRATE NEED OF A P.Q.P!