SilverLastsForever: YAY! Go MU! This was completely written by her. The only thing I did was capitilize and punctuate(I didn't spell check though, I suck at spelling) I'm so proud of her! Is good, so read!
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Tohru looks brightly at Kyo,
"Is there something wrong, Kyo?" Tohru asks gently.
"WHY THE HELL DOES SOMETHING ALWAYS HAVE TO BE WRONG!?" Kyo yelled irritably.
"Oh, I'm sorry I didn't mean...." Tohru says sadly.
"I'm sorry ok I didn't mean it, I'm just mad got it."
"What abo..?"
"DON'T ASK ANY QUESTION'S OK?!"
Tohru turns to look at the sunset.
"It's beautiful," she says quietly. Kyo just gazes on ignoring her so they sit in silence
Yuki walks in with a gigantic smile on his face. "What are you so happy about," Shigure asks
"I just gave Miss Honda flowers, that's all," Yuki says bashfully.
"Oh, so you like her I see should I go tell," Shigure says eccentrically.
Yuki blushes, "No, no, don't do that!"
"So it's true," Shigure says defiantly, "You like her!"
"Well, yes, but there's nothing really between 'us'," Yuki says simply.
"Sure, sure, so when's the wedding? I'll have Ayame design the whole thing. Wait, no bad idea."
"Shigure, control yourself"
"Yes, I'm sorry you're right," Shigure says trying to control his glee.
Ok I'm going to do it, I'm going to tell her, come on you can do it just say it don't be a wimp, Kyo thought to himself in the darkness "Tohru?" Kyo says reluctantly.
"Yes, Kyo" Tohru asks.
"I'm sorry I wanted to tell you something ......" Kyo said slowly. Come on you can do it, he thought to himself.
"Yes, Kyo?"
Come on! Kyo thought, You can do it just tell her.
"Um...we should probable go inside," Kyo said sadly.
"Oh, ok right it is getting kind of late,"
Damn it Kyo you idiot! You had your chance, Kyo scolded himself. Once again the recent morning's episode flashed in his mind.
-------Flashback-------
"Oh, I love daisies, thank you!"
-----End Flashback------
"Why?" Kyo whispered to himself.
"Did you say something Kyo,"
"Uh...no,"
As he watched Tohru climb down he found himself longing to hold her in his arms, to kiss her cherry red lips and to run his hands through her auburn hair.
"I know what you mean. I'd like to wring the little neck of our beloved Ayame too sometimes, but what would all the ga...look who it is our own ferocious kitty," Shigure said waiting for a snide remark. Kyo, still in deep thought, didn't even notice Shigure or Yuki as he walked to his room. Why hadn't I told her, was I scared that she would reject me? Should I just let Yuki have her? Kyo chided himself, No I can't give up!
The next morning, Kyo was out on the roof on this chilly morning thinking about the last night. He couldn't sleep at all, all he could think about was Tohru and the daisies that were sitting on the table. He hated them; they stood for the feelings from Yuki towards Tohru. As he sat there sitting, something moved at the edge of the roof he didn't move until I was close enough to grab. With one swift movement he grabbed the white snake that had tried to sneak up on him.
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HERE AYAME?!"
Kyo swiftly jumped off the roof still holding the snake in his hands walked towards the house. Forcefully opening the door and throwing the snake towards Shigure, Kyo yelled, "Take this worthless animal!" From the shock of the warmth of the house, in a puff of gray smoke he turned back into a human. "Now is that any way to talk to family?" Ayame said in his dreamy voice.
"Sorry to interrupt this little moment between you two, but I'm getting a little uncomfortable can you get some pants on at least?" Shigure asks lazily
Kyo ran out side into the fresh air and took a deep breath.
Tohru walks into the room and she blushes deeply at the sight of Ayame and turns around.
"Oh I'm so sorry Ayame! I'll leave! I'm so sorry!" Tohru says still blushing
Yuki walks in and hands a robe to Ayame. "It's ok to turn around now Miss Honda," Yuki said. Tohru turns around slowly, still blushing deeply.
"I'm so sorry I should have left," Tohru said quickly "Oh, no please Miss Honda stay," Yuki said pleadingly "You, Ayame, get out!"
"Now, now, Yuki can't I stay for a litt..."
"No," Yuki said calmly "Get out!"
"Well then, farewell, I shall visit soon," Ayame slowly walks out and in another puff of gray smoke turns back into a snake and quickly slithers off.
Kyo is sitting thoughtfully at the stream. In the corner of his eye he sees Ayame slithering past. "Yeah get out of her," yelled Kyo while throwing a rock at him. The snake stopped a raised its head and looked at Kyo and then continued on.
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My Unreality: hey this is chapter one really on my new story A SINGLE RED ROSE.
I hope you like it, but I need you to help me with something 1:send lots of reviews and 2: tell me if you think my stories are long enough. Thanks so much.
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