Hi!
Well,something that came to my head...and I had to write it! Apart from my other story 'Say I love you',this story will show how Keira stayed after the kiss between Jak and Ashelin,in this story I'll try to show that Keira is not the little girl..she can be the 'sexy-girl-with-a-gun' just like Ashelin,and I'll make Jak suffer!
Well I had this idea whilst i was reading some forums about the couples of Jak and Daxter games, and I want to say that I loved talk about it with anybody who talked with me on the forums D
Oh and...I'm brazilian,please don't falme me about my bad grammar...
Enjoy...( Leave reviews too /o/lolo)
Keira's POV
So,he thinks he can go out and kiss everybody?I can't even look at him right now.The problem is:
I can't look at him not because I'm upset...but because I'm really mad!
''Oh,stop Keira! he's not yours...you can't say what is good or bad for him,is his life and he do whatever he wants.''
''I'm not upset,because I don't love him.I never loved him,I though I loved but I don't love him!
I don't love him! I never loved him!I don't love him!I don't love him!I never loved him!I DON"T LOVE HIM!''
I screamed this by my mind,I couldn't stop thinking...does I ever meant something for him?
If I did,why he kissed her?
It's that the way we stand?He knows I'm just a fool for him,and I know that too.
I should find a guy who really likes me,and treat me like someone and not like a trash.
And kept goin' like this,many thoughts passing trough my head. I heard a knock on my bedroom's door,I kind stayed a little surpised..it was midnight already...but anyway. "Come in" I said.
I'll adimit it.I tought it was Jak,I tought he would come here and say sorry..but for my surprise it wasn't him.
Torn.
"Hey" He said smiling to me,he closed the door,I mean he didn't close the door..he let it a little opened.
I didn't mind he was seeing me with my sleep clothes..that were a white tank top and a black shorts.
Anyway,I didn't mind about anything now,I just wanted to find relief with someone...and I think I did.
I smiled to him saying a 'hey',I knew that Torn knew about that fucking kiss,yeah..that horrible and stupid kiss.But I can't
blame Ashelin,even knowing she knew about Jak and I...I kind didn't do anything to stay with him..
Torn walked towards the bed and then,he sat next to me ,we knew we were thinking the same thoughts.
We stared at each other for a few minutes,we weren't speaking any words,because words weren't needed on that moment.
His arms pulled me into an embrace,our mouths were very close,and than it happened.We kissed each other.
I,Keira Hagai kissed Torn. My mind was empty,I wasn't thinking in anything,except in Torn's mouth.That kiss made me forgot about Jak.
We only broked the kiss in search for air,but then we started kiss each other again,over and over again.
We searched for our clothes and took it off.
When he started to touch me,it was amanzing...I never felt something like this,I mean..I had already touched myself but..nothing compares to that.
His fingers inside of me...was driving me insane.
The room was filled of moans.
I needed him insinde of me and not his fingers,and when I told that for him..he said:
"Keira,I think we should stop here" I looked at him surprised.
"Why?" he blinked a couple of times,stared at me and then he spoke:
"Because,we don't have feelings for each others,we both know that we're only doin' this because we're hurt about the whole thing with Ashelin and Jak,and I'm pretty sure that if we go any further this will be your first time right?" I nodded to him.
Yeah he was right,but I didn't want to stop...not now,I don't care about Jak now...I just wanted tofeel how is to be loved.
"And Keira..I don't want take advange on you"
Torn was about to get up and put his clothes on again,but I entrelaced my legs around his waist and didn't let it go.
I touched his face,making he look at me and said:
"Don't stop now,please,I wanna feel you,I wanna feel how is to be loved.Please I'm begging you"
For my happiness,he gave up and did my wish.
That night I lost my virgnity,but it wasn't with Jak,like I though it would be..it was with Torn.
We were very tired,Torn were already asleep,and I deicided to sleep too.
But what I didn't know was that a guy with blonde and green hair named Jak,was on the other side of the door,wacthing Torn and I probably the whole night from the little opening of the not-fully-closed-door;
I didn't expected what came next...
End of chapter one.
Hi again!
No,this is not a Torn and Keira fic,you don't belive me? wait and see,this is totally Jak and Keira romance!
Well so how it was?good or bad?
On more time,please sorry about the grammar!don't flame me because of that ok?
please R&R
Bye guys!till next chapter!