"Last time on Total Drama Domination," said Chris.
The camera shows the Rhinoceros hunters grabbing their guns, followed by the Zebra deer getting their reindeer accessories put on them.
"We brought back another canon challenge favorite: the Paintball Deer Hunter challenge!"
The camera shows Jay trying (and failing) to shoot Mickey five times.
"Since Jay played the Lance idol at the elimination the night before the challenge, he got to shoot five of the Rhinoceri's deer before the challenge started," said Don.
The camera shows Chris announcing the Zebras as the winning team.
"Not like they needed it, since the Zebras would have won without it anyway!" said Chris.
The camera shows Junior helping Carrie, followed by Brody helping Bridgette.
"Junior and Brody were helping girls that were already taken…" said Don.
The camera shows Taylor pretending to be upset to make Kelly look guilty for shooting her.
"...while Taylor tried to make Kelly look bad!" said Chris.
The camera shows Jay trying to shoot Mickey, only for Sam to shoot Mickey instead. This was followed by him making his elimination speech.
"But it was Mickey's continued fear of, well, anything really, that sent him flying," said Don.
The camera shows the hosts.
"Who will go 'Boom Boom Pow' next? Find out right now, right here, on TOTAL!" yelled Don.
"DRAMA!" yelled Chris.
"DOMINATION!" yelled Don.
*cue intro*
RHINOCERI - ROOM #1 (BOYS)
Mike was dead asleep. We then zoom in on his subconsciousness.
INSIDE MIKE'S SUBCONSCIOUSNESS
Vert was asleep, but the other personalities were wide awake.
"OK, so here's the plan: we all jump on him and beat him with our fists!" whispered Mike.
"You idiot! Have you forgotten one of us came prepared?!" whispered Chester.
"Huh?" whispered Mike.
As if on cue, Manitoba Smith took out five knives, one for each of them. He then whispered, "One...two...three!"
Unfortunately, right when they stabbed him, Mike woke up in the real world. Oh no, I hope Vert died! Mike thought to himself.
THE NEXT MORNING
The occupants of the first male Rhinoceros room were now awake.
"How did killing Vert go?" asked Cameron.
"I don't know," said Mike. "We all stabbed him, but once we did, I woke up. I don't know if we actually killed him."
Max seized the opportunity to cause trouble. "Well I'm sure no one's using the bathroom right now. Just a nice place to relax, you know."
"Don't even think about it," hissed Cameron. Max looked surprised, then shot a glare at Cameron.
MESS HALL
The cast was gathered in the mess hall.
"Alrighty, we're just about ready for our next challenge, which is what, Sierra?" asked Chris, leaning in on the "what."
"Ooh, the cooking challenge!"
"Correctamundo! Now, as I was saying, we're gonna take that challenge and give it a twist! Please welcome...Gordon! From London!"
A redhead dressed in chef's whites from head to toe appeared. "Hi mates," he said in his squeaky voice. [1]
Everyone just looked at him in silence.
"Say hi to Gordon from London!" yelled Don.
"Hi, Gordon from London," everyone said monotonously. [2]
"Gordon here is a master chef who just got his first Michelin star today!" said Chris.
"I thought Michigan was a state. Or was it a tire?" said Lindsay.
"No and no, and the first one you said is Michigan. And would you mind not interrupting me here? KTHXBAI." [3] Lindsay gulped.
Chris resumed. "Anyways, we will be hosting a dinner service tonight! There are many people in attendance, so you'll need to prepare yourself in terms of quality and longevity!"
"Chris and I will be sous chefs. I will be the Zebras' sous chef, and Chris will be the Rhinoceri's sous chef," said Don.
"Now, please be warned about Gordon. He's very foul-mouthed in the kitchen, and he's VERY hot-tempered; worse than you, Eva!" said Chris. Eva's unibrow rose. "He also holds the right to eject you from service if you really mess up!"
"Gordon, have anything to say?" asked Don.
Gordon walked up. "You will have this time to come up with your menus, but please don't make your dishes until service starts at 6 PM tonight! There are shitloads of utensils provided in your kitchens, so you should also have no excuse to use your hands! Taste your food too, but only one small bite!" Noah raised his hand. "Yes Noah."
"Do you think it's possible to sit people out? We've got a heavy eater and a couple strict vegans here," Noah said while pointing his thumb at Owen, Laurie, and Miles.
"Are you shitting me, mate?! What do you want me to do about it?! They're your teammates; you control them, not me!" Noah frowned. "Now, do NOT piss me off; if I get pissed off enough, I'll just kick you out of the kitchen. If it gets really bad, I'll shut down service, and you'll ALL go to elimination to eliminate one person on each team!" Everyone gulped. "Now. Are, you, ready?"
"Yes chef," said the 82 campers.
"I said, ARE, YOU, READY?!"
"YES CHEF!" the 82 campers screamed back.
"Good! Start writing your menus!" said Gordon.
BLUE KITCHEN (RHINOCERI)
An easel was placed in the back corner that didn't have the back exit. "Who wants to be head chef?" asked Jasmine. Noah and DJ raised their hands. "OK, do Rock Paper Scissors then."
The boys shook their fists three times, then drew their gestures. Both drew rock, so they went again. This time, DJ drew paper while Noah drew scissors.
CONFESSIONAL: Good thing they didn't play Rock Paper Scissors Dynamite…[4]
"Yeah, I've mastered the art of Rock Paper Scissors," said Noah. "You have to be able to think about your past moves, and although it's luck-based, the other person is most likely to draw whatever gesture beats the one you just drew in a tie. I used this tactic to beat him fairly easily."
*STATIC*
Noah stood next to the easel. "Alright, any ideas for our menu?"
"I'm cool with anything, as long as there's no meat or fish dishes," said Miles.
"Sorry, but we have a whole station dedicated to meat as well as one for fish, so no," said Noah. Miles looked angry while Laurie looked worried. "Any other ideas?"
"I know a good creme brulee recipe passed down from my momma," said DJ.
"K, good." Noah wrote DJ's idea on the easel. "Any others?"
"Oh yeah. Lots of ideas," said DJ.
Noah smiled. "Perfect."
YELLOW KITCHEN (ZEBRAS)
Courtney stood next to the next easel. "Alright, any ideas for our menu?"
"Woah woah, who said you could lead us?" asked Jo.
"Hello?! I, am a CIT!"
"We've heard this story a million times!" said Heather.
"Ladies, please, she stepped up to be leader, so let her lead," said Brick.
"Of course you take her side, Brick for brains!" spat Jo.
"Jo, that is enough! Respect your teammates!" said Ernesto.
"This is an A-B conversation, so CTFU!" Jo yelled at him. Ernesto raised his eyebrows.
"Can you seriously not, girl?" said Stephanie.
"Alright alright, Courtney. Let's get this team in shape," said Brick, trying to stop a fight.
"Gladly. Now, are there any ideas?"
"I know a good crab cakes appetizer," said Shawn.
"OK." Courtney wrote Shawn's suggestion on the easel. "Anything else?"
BLUE KITCHEN
The Rhinoceri had ten things listed. "Alright, we're making good progress," said Noah. The vegans weren't smiling, but Noah didn't notice. "Anyone else have an idea?"
"Ooh, a beef wellington!" piped in Lindsay. The vegans looked pissed as Noah wrote her suggestion on the easel.
YELLOW KITCHEN
The Zebras only had seven things listed due to their earlier bickering, but they seemed to be functioning much better now.
"Anything else?" asked Courtney. She noticed Spud's trademark blank stare. "Spud? How about you?"
After his usual pause, the obese rocker snapped back to life. "Huh? Uh, something with potatoes!"
"OK, we'll add mashed potatoes to the garnish station!" Courtney added Spud's suggestion to the list.
BLUE KITCHEN
The blue team currently had 21 dishes. "Alright, we're looking good. All we need is desserts. Any ideas?" said Noah.
"Ooh, cheesecake!" squealed Sierra.
"With strawberries!" chimed in Katie.
"Okay, a cheesecake with an optional strawberry sauce with strawberries." Noah wrote the high-pitched girls' suggestions on the board. "Alright, we're good!"
"Mmmm, that looks yummy," said Owen.
"Easy, chubby buddy. We'd have to make it, which we can't until service starts. And even then, you still can't eat more than a small taste. That's why I'm proposing this."
Although Noah's quote ended with a period, he actually wasn't done talking.
"A proposal? But...I love Tyler, not you!" said Lindsay.
"That breaks my heart. If, I had one," said Noah. He tried again. "Here's what I'm suggesting: you, you, and you," he pointed at Owen, Laurie, and Miles. "I can't have you three causing us to lose, so I'm gonna have you three mess up on purpose so Gordon can kick you out."
"Aye aye, captain!" yelled Owen, seemingly unaware of the absurdity. The vegans shrugged at each other.
YELLOW KITCHEN
The yellow team also had 21 dishes. "OK, what are we gonna do for dessert?"
"Thy can cast a spell to make instant brownies!" said Leonard.
Courtney looked confused. "Uhh, yes to the brownies; the rest, I'm not so sure. Alright, we're good!"
MEETING
The two teams were gathered with Chris and Don in their respective positions. Gordon and Chef faced them.
"OK mates, I've printed out your team's menus to be used in tonight's service," said Gordon. "Now, instead of letting you guys pick stations, we're gonna pick them for you." Everyone gulped.
"For the Rhinoceri, I want Gerry, Tom, Ezekiel, Kelly, Ellody, and Topher on hot apps, Sammy, Pete, Harold, Amy, Sanders, and Jasmine on cold apps, Cody, Crimson, Cameron, Lindsay, Dara, and Laurie on meat, Veronica, Noah, Ella, Zoey, Miles, and Izzy on fish, Dave, Katie, Max, Blaineley, Gwen, and Rock on entrees, DJ, Owen, Sierra, Leshawna, and Eva on garnish, and Ennui, Sky, Ryan, Abby, and Mike on dessert." Miles and Laurie shared horrified glances.
"For the Zebras, I want Heather, Lightning, Stephanie, Jay, Carrie, and Taylor on hot apps, Bridgette, Scott, Shawn, Sugar, Beth, and Beardo on cold apps, Brody, Ernesto, Josee, Dakota, Jen, and Lorenzo on meat, Chad, Jacques, Chet, Mary, Brick, and Leonard on fish, Devin, Emma, Geoff, Trent, JD, and Scarlett on entrees, Courtney, Dwayne, Alejandro, Tyler, Spud, and Dawn on garnish, and Tammy, Kitty, Sam, Rodney, Jo, and Junior on desserts."
Gordon continued. "One final thing: make sure you communicate between stations! Talk to each other!" He faced Chef Hatchet. "Chef Hatchet?"
"Yes chef?"
"Open Hell's Kitchen please."
"Yes chef."
Several cars started piling in outside the mess hall, and soon the Wild Things [5], the interns, the Warner siblings, SpongeBob, Patrick, Jeff Probst, and Mark Burnett entered the dining area. [6]
Chef Hatchet brings tickets up to Gordon, who walks to the blue kitchen. "Alright, listen up. We've got three capellini, two risotto, one lobster spaghetti, one tagliatelle, and one scallop."
"Yes chef!" yelled the Rhinoceri.
Gordon was then greeted by the rest of the app tickets given to him by Chef. He walked to the yellow kitchen. "Alright, listen up. We've got three clam chowder, two halibut, one swordfish, one cod, one lamb, one seabass, one tuna, and one wellington."
"Yes chef!" yelled the Zebras.
BLUE KITCHEN
Noah could see Owen's eye already twitching. He signals for him to send out the tagliatelle completely raw. Instead, he eats it. Noah facepalmed.
"What are you doing, you idiot?! Those are for the customers!" yelled Gordon. Owen then belched in his face. Gordon smashed a plate against the counter, then yelled, "Get out!"
Owen left the kitchen, with Noah smirking. So far, so good, he thought to himself.
YELLOW KITCHEN
"We're walking with the fish!" Brick called to the meat station as he, Chet, and Leonard brought their fish dishes up.
"Coming with meat!" said Jen as she and Dakota walked up with their meat dishes.
Gordon looked at their dishes. He brings back the tuna. "Everybody come here!" The team obliges.
Gordon holds up light pink tuna. "Raw tuna!" he yells.
Leonard knew what to do in this situation. "Roastius marinus!" he yells. Nothing happened. A couple of his teammates facepalmed.
"Get out!" yelled Gordon. Leonard left in a huff.
CONFESSIONAL: If you can't stand the heat, get out of Hell's Kitchen!
"What Leonard did was so cool! I wonder if it would work if I did it," said Lorenzo.
*STATIC*
BLUE KITCHEN
Eva gave Miles the spaghetti. All she had to do was cook the lobster in front of her and put it in. She looked at the lobster, then back at the lobsterless spaghetti. She then took the spaghetti up without putting the lobster in. Gordon noticed the lack of fish almost immediately.
"Where's the lobster in the lobster spaghetti?!" yelled Gordon.
"I'm a vegetarian," said Miles.
"You have five other people on your station that could've cooked it for you!" At that point, Veronica, Noah, Ella, Zoey, and Izzy's faces fell. "All six of you, piss off!" The entire fish station complied. "Hot apps!"
"Yes chef?" said Tom, Gerry, Ezekiel, Kelly, Ellody, and Topher.
"Get on the fish station!"
"Yes chef!"
YELLOW KITCHEN
"Walking with clam chowder!" said Devin as he, Emma, and Trent walked up with their clam chowder dishes. Gordon returned with them.
"I've got one that's perfect, one that's gooey, and one that's runny!" yelled the redhead. "Devin!"
"Yes chef?" Carrie smirked at a nervous Devin, which a worried Junior noticed.
"Yours was perfect!" Carrie promptly glared daggers. Gordon pointed at an unhappy Emma and Trent. "It's a shame these two fuckwits messed everything up for you!" The two raven-haired teens sighed. "Get out!" yelled Gordon. The two complied.
Devin refired his clam chowder with JD and Scarlett now taking over. When JD wasn't looking, Scarlett dumped pepper in his clam chowder, which quickly dissolved in the substance.
"Coming again with clam chowder!" called Devin as they brought their dishes up. Gordon stuck his tongue out after eating JD's.
"Who put pepper in their clam chowder?!" yelled Gordon.
"JD, I think that's you," Scarlett said like she didn't do anything.
"What?" said JD, oblivious to the sabotage.
"You don't realize you put pepper in the clam chowder?!" yelled Gordon. "Get out!" A bewildered JD left the kitchen. "So help me god, if you mess up one more time, I'm kicking you all out."
"Yes chef!" said the team.
BLUE KITCHEN
Topher delivers the lobster spaghetti up to the pass. Gordon tastes it, then puts it on a plate in front of him. "Service please!"
"YES!" Topher screams out. He gets shushed by many of his teammates.
"Hey, don't start pissing your knickers yet; that was only the first order!"
"Right, sorry."
YELLOW KITCHEN
Devin, Scarlett, and Geoff walked up with clam chowder. Gordon puts them on the plates in front of him. "Service please!"
AN HOUR AND A HALF INTO SERVICE
The teams had finished apps and entrees, and now they were focusing on desserts.
BLUE KITCHEN
Ryan took the cheesecake out of the oven, and Abby put the strawberry filling over it. She then delivered it up to the pass. "Service please!" said Gordon. "Shut it down."
YELLOW KITCHEN
"Brownies are ready!" called Kitty. Rodney plated them and took it up to the pass. "Service please!" said Gordon. "Shut it down."
MESS HALL
"Great job, Gordon. You get $100,000 for all your hard work today," said Chris.
"Where would that much money be coming from?" Don asked confused.
"Uhhhhh…" Chris said while rubbing the back of his head.
The camera shows the inside of the winner's briefcase, which now contains $900,000.
Gordon collected his money. "Thanks mates."
"Now Gordon, you have the honor of deciding which team wins. Remember, you're allowed to declare both teams losers if you want to."
"Yeah...I'm sorry, but both teams were pretty rubbish in spite of the completed dinner service. Both of y'all lose."
Everyone alike groaned.
"Oh, save the groaning for when you're in bed!" said Chef. Everyone looked disgusted and appalled by his dirty joke.
"Anyways, both teams will vote out one person!" said Chris. "Now piss off."
"Hey, don't steal my quote, mate!" said Gordon. Chris rolled his eyes.
OUTSIDE THE RHINOCERI CABIN
"Noah, you didn't tell me what I needed to do to get sent out," said Owen.
"Well, that was one way to get sent out. But I wanted you to send it out raw, not eat it. What if we kept messing up the tagliatelle? We'd run out."
"You also didn't tell me someone else could have cooked the lobster for the lobster spaghetti," said Miles.
"OK, admittedly, I was thinking too much about one problem. Besides, shouldn't we bring Jasmine into the picture as well?"
"What?! What did I do?!"
"You didn't try to choose between me and DJ as head chef. Maybe if you hadn't resorted to us doing Rock Paper Scissors, I wouldn't be head chef."
"Why you—?!"
"Save it, girl; he's not worth it," said Leshawna. "It looks like we have our decision."
OUTSIDE THE ZEBRAS CABIN
"I still don't know how pepper ended up in my clam chowder," said JD.
"Easy. Scarlett," said Mary.
Scarlett gasped. "Mary?! How could you?! We're roommates! We even fucked each other once!"
"I was only using you for your own personal gain, bitch," said Mary.
Everyone went silent. DEAD silent. Even the crickets flying around stopped chirping to see what was going on.
"Oh, I should have known," said JD. "I fucking knew you would be back to your old tricks."
"At least we have room for one more." Everyone turned to look at Josee.
"Why thanks," said Scarlett.
"No problem. We already know who's going home, too," said Chad.
Everyone but JD, Mary, Chad, Scarlett, and Josee looked at each other, unsure of what to do next.
CAMPFIRE
In place of the usual stumps were two extra-large peanut gallery booths, one for each team. The campers sat down inside them. Chris, Chef, and Don walked in between the booths.
"Alright, you've cast your votes. Whoever doesn't get a marshmallow must take the Fireworks of Shame," said Chris. Chef held up a lighter as he said this.
"Since you're all here, you get to watch the other team's elimination in action. Consider it a little gift to make up for your joint-loss today," said Don.
"Rhinoceri, let's start with you. Tom, Gerry, Ezekiel, Kelly, Ellody, Topher, Sammy, Pete, Harold, Amy, Sanders, Cody, Crimson, Cameron, Lindsay, Dara, Laurie, Veronica, Ella, Zoey, Izzy, Dave, Katie, Max, Blaineley, Gwen, Rock, DJ, Sierra, Leshawna, Eva, Ennui, Sky, Ryan, Abby, and Mike!" said Chris, throwing a marshmallow as he called each name. "Noah, you had a very unconventional strategy as head chef today. Owen, you were the first one tossed from the kitchen on both teams combined, and you misunderstood Noah's signal. Miles, you refused to break your principals, and it got your whole station kicked out. And Jasmine, you were pretty much responsible for Noah being head chef by resorting to a lame decision maker. I mean, Rock Paper Scissors? Really?! The next marshmallow goes to...Miles! And after her is...Owen! Noah. Jasmine. This, is the final marshmallow. Congratulations…
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...Noah." The bookworm collected his marshmallow, smirking at an angry Jasmine as he did so.
No! A horrified Shawn realized as he saw his girlfriend stand up.
"Whatever. I really don't need this show anyway," said Jasmine.
"Stand right here, Jasmine. We're gonna blast both you and this next person at the same time," said Don. He turned to the Zebras, and he instantly noticed the uncomfortable looks all but five of them were wearing. "Must have been a very heated discussion, I take it? Anyways, you heard what Chris said; I'm not gonna plagiarize him. Marshmallows go to...Heather, Lightning, Stephanie, Jay, Carrie, Taylor, Bridgette, Scott, Shawn, Sugar, Beardo, Beth, Brody, Dakota, Jen, Lorenzo, Jacques, Chet, Brick, Devin, Emma, Geoff, Trent, Courtney, Dwayne, Alejandro, Tyler, Spud, Dawn, Tammy, Kitty, Sam, Rodney, and Junior!" He threw them their marshmallows. "Ernesto. Jo. You voted for each other. Maybe a marshmallow for the each of you will settle it." He threw the two their marshmallows. Ernesto looked away from a glaring Jo. "Leonard, despite your early fuck-up, you're also safe!" He threw the wizard cosplayer a marshmallow. "Now. You five. It appears you've formed different voting blocks, with JD and Mary against Chad, Josee, and Scarlett. The question is, whose side did your teammates pick? Josee and Chad, you're safe!" He threw them their marshmallows.
At this point, Scarlett was smirking at Mary, who was glaring at her. JD watched them with a look of indifference.
Don continued. "Scarlett, you're safe!" He threw the brainiac a marshmallow. Mary and JD gasped. "Mary. JD. This, is the final marshmallow. Congratulations…
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...Mary." Mary caught her marshmallow with her thumb and index finger. "Do you know what you just started?" she asked Scarlett.
"Hell yeah I do."
Both teams were shocked at what they just saw.
CONFESSION: Hell's Kitchen's eliminations have got nothing on this! [7]
"I feel really bad for the Zebras," said Zoey. "It doesn't look like they can get along at all. At least here I have Cam, Gwen, and Mike." She swoons at the last name.
*STATIC*
"Yep, it's official. Our team is in hell," said Junior. "My dad's not gonna freak out about that last word, will he?"
*STATIC*
"Why do I get the feeling my son said something he shouldn't have said?" asked Dwayne.
*STATIC*
JD sighed and stood up. "Well, it was fun while it lasted. It sucks some people had to ruin it for me."
Chef strapped Jasmine and JD to a firecracker, and he lit their fuses. After three seconds, they went soaring.
"Now, we are still not done," said Chris. "Every ten eliminations before the merge, we're gonna do a little something…" Everyone on both teams looked at each other anxiously.
*TO BE CONTINUED*
[1] Yep, that indeed, is Gordon from London (Ontario). He appeared in an aftermath in TDA.
[2] South Park reference. They did it twice, one of which was to Sexual Harassment Panda.
[3] Just an acronym I use that many Sucksters (and people similar to them) use. It means "OK thanks, bye" without any enthusiasm. Sucksters are people on survivorsucks, and many people into Total Drama, Survivor, Big Brother, and BFDI on YouTube/Google+ talk like them.
[4] Rock loses to dynamite (gets blown up) and scissors beats it (snuffs the fuse). Paper however, ties it. Paper could get blown up, but it could also snuff the fuse. RPS-101 (Rock Paper Scissors with 101 different choices) resolves it by having paper beat it (snuffs the fuse) and rock and scissors losing to it (they both get blown up).
[5] Remember, the Wild Things are the cast of Total Drama Dirtbags minus Alejandro (meaning the Killer, Billy the intern (at least in this story), a bear, Sasquatchanakwa, and an Eskimo), Robo Scuba Bear 4.0, and a random number of Chris robots.
[6] In the original version (only readable on fanfiction dot net), there was a subplot involving Dot and Jeff rallying against the show. SpongeBob was also going to, but I never finished the chapter where he does so. That's why I picked them and their entourage to be guests in service.
[7] Gordon Ramsay (who Gordon from London is based off of) tends to eliminate people who don't cause drama in comparison to weaker chefs who boost ratings. These eliminations were (hopefully) legit eliminations that were even more intense than Hell's Kitchen could ever dream of.
ELIMINATION ORDER:
#90: Staci
#89: Duncan
#88: Anne Maria
#87: Sadie
#86: B
#85: Justin
#84: MacArthur
#83: Mickey
#82: Jasmine
#81: JD
RAMBUNCTIOUS RHINOCERI:
Sanders
Harold
Cameron
Lindsay
Tom
Veronica
Pete
Ezekiel
Ennui
Crimson
Izzy
Owen
Gerry
Leshawna
Sky
Eva
Mike
Katie
Noah
Sammy
Dave
DJ
Rock
Abby
Amy
Blaineley
Miles
Ellody
Kelly
Topher
Ella
Zoey
Gwen
Sierra
Dara
Laurie
Cody
Max
Ryan
ZESTY ZEBRAS:
Geoff
Ernesto
Chet
Jen
Lightning
Scarlett
Spud
Alejandro
Sam
Jay
Josee
Dawn
Jo
Brick
Devin
Beardo
Chad
Bridgette
Taylor
Brody
Scott
Sugar
Shawn
Tammy
Tyler
Emma
Leonard
Carrie
Dwayne
Trent
Kitty
Mary
Stephanie
Jacques
Beth
Dakota
Lorenzo
Heather
Junior
Rodney
Courtney
...aaaaaaaaaand that's the chapter! Our first double elimination this season! And what do you think Chris is gonna do to the campers next?
Now let's talk about the eliminations. Jasmine was fodder. She didn't really have too much interactions with anyone else in TDPI, and pretty much everyone she did interact with was either on the other team, or had plots of their own that didn't need her. JD is the first of my OCs to go, because it turns out he really didn't have much to offer. He was added solely to bring a unique character to the table.
Another shockingly quick chapter. I haven't had very much homework lately, and I only had "uptime days" ever since the last chapter was posted. You see, there are some days where I have the utmost urge to write and do whatever I need to get done. Then there are some where I really don't feel like doing it at all. "Uptime days" are the days where I feel like working. "Downtime days" are days where I don't feel like working.
Huge change in plots regarding Scarlett and Mary, with the latter revealing she was only playing Scarlett for her own gain. Now we have two different villain alliances taking place.
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