"Last time on Total Drama Domination," said Don.
The camera shows Gerry and Dawn finding out the former had to drink laundry detergent.
"Our campers were chained to the rhythm I like to call the Tri-Armed Triathlon!"
The camera shows Wizard Whitebeard drinking bleach and subsequently dying, followed by Alejandro holding up a Cascade Complete square.
"Thanks to one of our new interns, the first part of the challenge meant nothing," said Hawkeye.
The camera shows Ezekiel complaining about Boney Island, followed by Chef unhooking him and Veronica.
"But the last part, a trip to Boney Island, meant too many bad memories for Ezekiel, and he and Veronica opted out of the challenge," said Chef.
The camera shows Ellody and Owen's tower of eliminated contestants falling over, followed by their canoe toppling over, and finally them getting blasted off.
"But it was Ellody girl and Owen boy's performance that sent them over and out!" said Rolf.
The camera flashed to the hosts getting in a canoe together. "While we make our way back to Camp Wawanakwa, we'll take the time to visit our fallen friends! Yep! We're going to Playa de Losers, to see how everyone there is doing, right now, right here, on TOTAL!" yelled Don.
"DRAMA!" yelled Hawkeye.
"DOMINATION!" yelled all four hosts.
*cue intro*
The scene opened at Playa de Losers, with the resort music used in canon played in the background. The camera cut to Staci, who was sitting in one of the lounge chairs.
"Am I disappointed I got eliminated first again? Totally! My great great great great great aunt Rhonda invented getting disappointed for a reason!"
The camera panned over to the chair next to her, revealing an annoyed Anne Maria with her arms crossed. "Ugh! You try going the longest puttin' up with her and going without any hairspray!" The camera replayed her getting blasted off with her can of spray falling away from her. "Maybe then people would understand why I focus on my hair so much."
The camera cut to Sadie, who was sitting where she sat at the pool bar in TDI. "Oh, I do hope Katie's doing OK. I heard from Taylor when she got eliminated that she [Taylor] was the first to go out after the merge, so that means Katie's made the merge! EEEEEEEEE!" she cried. "Go Katie! Kick some more ass, girl!" DJ, who was next to her, sighed, which Sadie noticed. "You alright, DJ?"
"Yeah, I'm…" DJ remembered Katie getting him eliminated, but he didn't want to tell Sadie, so he lied and said, "...just disappointed, because I was the one eliminated right before the merge. See, I haven't made the merge since season one, but then you've got people like Duncan who have made it five times now."
"Yeah, I really don't see why he got to come back in the first place," said JD, who was in the pool with the pool bar.
"He made it all the way back here from his home! That's determination!" said Zoey, who was in there with him.
"Really? Well either way, he registers as the cockroach that won't die in my book," said the OC.
"Die? That's a little harsh, don't you think?"
"I can't tell you all that crap that guy's pulled throughout the series."
"The locked door was Chris's fault!"
"True, but Duncan wasn't exactly a saint in the matter either."
Just then, Gwen walked over to where they were, sat on the edge, and dipped her feet in. "Hi guys. Having a great time?" She got positive answers. "I'm so glad I'm here without Duncan breathing down my neck."
"Mm-hm, true," agreed JD.
Zoey sighed, which Gwen noticed. "Something wrong, Zoey?"
"I kind of had a thing for him since All-Stars."
"Woah Zoey. You do not want to get involved with him."
"He seemed kind of nice that season, even if he was a bit troubled."
"A bit troubled?" Gwen fake chuckled. "He ended up causing problems for both me and Courtney."
"At least with him I won't have to deal with more than one personality."
Everyone around her gasped, causing others at the resort to pay their attention to her as well.
"Is this about me and my disorder?" asked an irritated Mike. Zoey just sat there, stunned, while Sadie, DJ, JD, and Gwen nodded. Mike huffed. "I told you, it's not something I can't control!"
"Like I said, it can't be cured with the push of a red button," said Chad.
"Exactly!" said Mike. "I learned firsthand it's a lot more complicated than that! I almost got sent to prison after my last episode on the island! I had to promise to go to therapy to get MPD cured to be acquitted! Now I'll be able to have a part of my personalities all as one. Think of it as having new and different fields of expertise."
Everyone else at the resort clapped at Mike's speech. Zoey just said, "Whatever. I'm still done with you."
"I don't need you anyway. You've done nothing helpful to me this season. If anything, you're the one who needs improving. You were always the little damsel in distress the past two seasons before this one. You also want to make friends, yet you called Dawn weird, voted Dakota off because you were worried about you, and tried to pick a fight with Anne Maria all because she was telling you to stop standing on the air pump! If it wasn't for her, Jo might not still be here!" As each of their names got called, Dakota, Anne Maria, and Jo nodded their agreement. "You also apologize over the littlest things, yet whenever you actually do something offensive, you show no remorse over the matter."
A shocked and stunned Zoey tried to defend herself. "I apologized about me keeping the case!"
"Sorry doesn't always fix everything, Zoey. Would it work in court? Because that's exactly where I ended up, and I can assure you, it would not have worked. Face it, Zoey. You, are, NOT, a MARY SUE! You, have, mistakes! Get it through your head! Everybody hates flawless characters, but they hate people who are in denial about it! You are an insensitive and selfish hypocrite! Forget being eliminated by a jock, or even being bullied by one; good luck finding anyone that'll let you hear the end of this!" And with that, Mike was finished. Eventually, everyone else started clapping and cheering wildly. Zoey sobbed, and when she saw no one giving a shit about her plight, she ran off. Laughter then joined in with the applause and cheering, as fingers appeared pointing at Zoey, who ran out of the sight.
The camera then flashed to Jen, who was sitting in a chair. "I'm still shocked I got eliminated. I thought I was in a comfortable position with the Devin and Carrie conflict going on at the time." She then turned to Justin, who was sitting in the chair to her left. "By the way, who needs that olive colored shirt? You're perfect without it."
"I need it in case something happens to my body," said the male model.
"Oh, Justin baby, you look hotter without it."
Justin blushed. "I suppose I could start going without it." Jen giggled.
MacArthur and Bridgette sat at the hot tub. "I can't believe I forgot about Brody," said the police cadet.
"I'm pretty sure he forgot about you, too," said Bridgette. "Geoff was an insensitive asshole to me, then tried to play the innocent card on me whenever I tried to call him out! And Brody took Geoff's side because you know them! They obviously like each other more than us girls!"
"Oh, that tears it! We are so going against them the next time we meet!"
"Yep, I agree."
The camera now cut to Mickey, who no longer had his headgear. "It feels so good to be curse-free! It's nice to know Jay's made it past the merge and the halfway point!" He then waved and said, "Good luck, Jay!"
The camera cut to Jasmine and Emma. "I don't see all the appeal surrounding Noah," said the Aussie.
"Excuse me?" asked Emma, a glare plastered on her face.
"Have you forgotten he got me eliminated?"
"Why would you use rock paper scissors anyway? Plus, Noah had to save his butt some way or another. What would you have done in his position?" Jasmine breathed in, but couldn't come up with an answer. "Exactly," said Emma.
Rodney was in the main pool. "I'm disappointed I got out early again," he said. "And the worst part is, I'm still single!"
The camera cut to Scarlett. "I am utterly humiliated at my subpar performance. If I get a third chance, I hope I can make a significant enough improvement."
Kelly and Taylor were at two chairs together, each with a drink. "How have you been doing away from me?" asked Kelly.
"Oh, I entered a relationship with Rock, and he made me start seeing the world differently."
Kelly spat her drink out. "My daughter, a boyfriend? Now you're gonna tell me you've been thinking about me."
"Actually I have. I once refused to jump onto a horse surrounded by horse shit because I didn't want to get the boots you bought me dirty." The camera played a flashback of her doing just that.
Kelly's eyes lit up. "Awww, sweetie!" The two then happily hugged each other.
The camera cut to Blaineley in a chair. "I'm honestly surprised I lasted as long as I did, actually. I never wanted to be on this show anyway, so I really don't care what I do on here."
The camera cut to Eva sitting up in a chair. "I still can't believe homeschool is still there! What kind of messed up world is this?"
The camera cut to Dakota. "Yeah...it stinks I got eliminated as early as I did. But at least I have a superpower...sort of. I know Sam loves a girl with kickass superpowers, so...I hope he wins the biggest game of his life right here!" She chuckled.
The camera cut to an angry Jo. "Those wimps will still pay for voting me off! I can't believe there's not more of them here!"
The camera cut to Pete lounging in a chair. "Eh, I've never been a math guy, but I'm pretty sure I did better this season than on the Ridonculous Race. Now I can get better sponsor deals. I wonder what kind of deals Gerry would be getting with how far he's made it."
The camera cut to Sugar, who was fuming. "This show turned into absolute trash! Remember on Pahkitew Island when I was the creator's favorite? What the HELL happened?! Then that fucking wizard cheats on me for that fatass!"
As Sugar continued to rant, Leonard and Tammy overheard her. Leonard said to Tammy, "Oh boy, here she goes again."
"We made it closer to the merge than she did. What does that prove?"
"That we don't need her!" The two then hi-fived, with Leonard saying, "Huzzah!"
The scene flashed to Jacques and Josee sitting in chairs with their arms crossed, not happy. "The Ridonculous Race was so much easier!" said Jacques.
"We were the authors of our own fates there! This is not fair!" agreed Josee.
The scene flashed to Stephanie, who also sat with her arms crossed angrily. "Those bitches on my team are such hardasses! There's nothing wrong with supporting someone on the other team! They're nothing but hypocrites!"
The scene flashed to Beth, who sat at the edge of the big pool with her feet dipped in. She looked confused. "I don't get it. How am I the least relevant person? I was the runner-up in Total Drama Action! It's like no one even knows me anymore…"
The camera cut to Carrie. "I've heard from the people out after me that Devin turned a new leaf. Yeah, no, I'm done with him. Junior is my new homie."
"She's 13. In this country, the age of consent is 16, so that would count as statutory rape no matter how Junior feels," pointed out Mary.
"Oh no, I'm not gonna go that far," said Carrie in mock surprise. When Mary turned away, Carrie whispered, "Yet."
The camera cut to Izzy, Leshawna, Lindsay, and Owen, who stood at the snack bar. Izzy was angry at Owen. "How dare you! This was all your fault for not accepting I was in a relationship with Topher!"
"Izzy, you should have told Owen earlier," Leshawna said bluntly.
"I forgot, OK? It slipped off my tongue!"
"Well, that 'slip off your tongue' made things miserable and split our team in half."
"We actually did get both sides to reunite," said Owen. "Looking back, I did overreact. I'm sorry."
Izzy looked at Owen for a bit, then hugged him. "Oh, Owen. I'm sorry too."
Lindsay awed as Leshawna clapped.
The camera cut to Miles sitting in a chair. "Laurie is overstaying her welcome, and the tiebreaker challenge was obviously rigged. I sensed nothing but negative auras as I was getting eliminated."
The camera cut to Lorenzo, Taylor, Chet, and Abby together. "So, why did you turn the majority against us?" Taylor asked Abby.
"I had a deal with Topher," answered the kind girl.
"Topher is not someone you want to hang out with," said Chet. "He got me eliminated, remember?"
"Woah. Topher got you eliminated?!" Lorenzo punched his right palm. "That does it! In whatever way possible, we are making sure he doesn't win!"
"Uhh, yeahhh…" Abby said unsure.
The camera cut to Heather, who sat at a chair a little angry. "That was unfair! Making me fly to the Arctic without a jacket that STILL hasn't come in! I honestly don't care who wins at this point. I am done with this show."
Finally, the camera cut to Ellody. "That obese behemoth got both of us eliminated! And he thought I was being nice to him!" She huffed and said, "There is too much idiocy for me to handle."
The scene now flashed to Don arriving at Playa de Losers. "Hello campers! Can we get everyone to stand facing me, please?" Everyone did as told. "So today, one of you will be coming back on the show." Everyone gasped excitedly. "This was done via fan vote, so now is a chance to see where you all currently stand with our viewers. But first, you guys will be voting someone out. To avoid a repeat of last time," he said, recalling how things went down in season one. "You all will come to a consensus as to who goes. Now, four people won immunity from the last challenge, and therefore can't be voted off. Those people are Geoff, Brody, Ella, and Topher. You have until you're ready to think of someone. Go!"
The scene flashed to the eliminated contestants gathered around in a huddle. "Since Topher's gone, how about we vote out one of his closest allies?" suggested Lorenzo.
"Word! How about Dara? She's too quiet," said Chet.
"I want Tom," said JD.
"Why him?"
"You don't know if Dara being quiet is if she's being sneaky or if she's just simply not as involved as him."
Chet sighed. "True...so Tom then?" Everyone nodded except Jen, who had an uncomfortable look on her face. No one noticed, though.
"We've made our decision," announced Chet.
"Who did you decide?" asked Don.
"Tom."
"Alright." Don pulled out a walkie talkie and said, "Chef? Tom." He put his walkie talkie away and said, "While we wait for Tom to come here, let's find out who's getting a second chance. If I call your name, take a step forward. Mike, Abby, Taylor, Sadie, Gwen, DJ, Eva, Carrie, Zoey, Izzy, and Lindsay." All of those people took a step forward.
"You all received at least one vote to come back. If I call your name again, take another step forward. Taylor, Sadie, Gwen, and Carrie." The four girls stepped forward again.
"You four received more than one vote. One of you received a whopping ten votes to come back, while the other three only got two. Congratulations…
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...Taylor! You are officially back in the contest!" Everyone cheered and applauded as Don left with Taylor. After they left, a screaming Tom (attached to the Fireworks of Shame) crashed into the big pool, making a big splash. "NOOOOO! My clothes are RUINED!" he cried.
ELIMINATION ORDER:
#90: Staci (Z)
RETURNS: Duncan (R)
#89: Anne Maria (Z)
#88: Sadie (R)
#87: B (R)
#86: Justin (R)
#85: MacArthur (Z)
#84: Mickey (R)
#83: Jasmine (R)
#82: JD (Z)
#81: Rodney (Z)
#80: Scarlett (Z)
#79: Max (DECEASED) (R)
#78: Kelly (R)
#77: Blaineley (R)
#76: Lightning (DECEASED) (Z)
#75: Eva (R)
#74: Jen (Z)
#73: Dakota (Z)
#72: Emma (R)
#71: Jo (Z)
#70: Pete (R)
#69: Sugar (Z)
#68: Jacques (Z)
#67: Zoey (R)
#66: Stephanie (Z)
#65: Bridgette (Z)
#64: Beth (Z)
#63: Chad (DISQUALIFIED) (Z)
#62: Carrie (R)
#61: Izzy (R)
#60: Leshawna (R)
#59: Mary (Z)
#58: Josee (Z)
#57: Lindsay (R)
#56: Miles (R)
#55: Mike (ARRESTED) (R)
#54: Leonard (Z)
#53: Lorenzo (DISQUALIFIED) (Z)
#52: Tammy (Z)
#51: DJ (R)
*MERGE*
RETURNS: Taylor
#50: Chet
#49: Abby (QUIT)
#48: Gwen
#47: Heather
#46/#45: Ellody
#46/#45: Owen
#44: Tom
STILL IN:
Sanders
Harold
Cameron
Devin
Taylor
Trent
Ezekiel
Ennui
Crimson
Gerry
Sky
Noah
Junior
Dave
Katie
Tyler
Courtney
Topher
Shawn
Sierra
Dara
Laurie
Cody
Geoff
Ernesto
Spud
Alejandro
Sam
Jay
Dawn
Brick
Beardo
Brody
Scott
Duncan
Ella
Rock
Amy
Dwayne
Veronica
Kitty
Sammy
Ryan
...aaaaaaaaaaaaand that's the chapter! My senior year of high school has ended, and now I should hopefully pull in some quick(er) updates!
Tom went because he was, in my opinion, the second in command after Topher, so his elimination was necessitated for the plot.
Rock's got his girlfriend back, and Topher lost three allies in a row, the last of which was in his core group. Could things be starting to turn around?
I hope I did good enough with each character, giving all of them (except the two dead contestants of course) at least one line in, no matter what it be.
Now we meet our third of five quintuplets from GirlPower54, and it's Cole, the Hypnotist!
*STATIC*
A black and white striped room appeared with a black and white stripes bed. In the front stood a white boy with pitch black neck-length hair, a white jacket with a black shirt underneath, black and white striped pants, white Nikes with black check marks, and black socks. But the most eye-catching was his green eyes, which appeared to be very hypnotizing.
"My name is Cole, and you will obey my every order," he said in a hypnotizing voice. "You can start now by picking me to be on your show. It shall be my key to success! I will end my audition tape here, for you are now under my hypnotizing spells and you will be picking me to be on your show!"
*STATIC*
And that's Cole for you. GirlPower54 was originally gonna call him Connor before deciding on Cole instead. We'll see how his behavior plays out. It could make him a potential antagonist or potential fodder as a joke character, or of course, somewhere in between.
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