Here I stand

by Savvyy

An old man reborn as a young bear in a cold land will attempt to make a better life for himself and those he calls family. With a blessing from the old Gods, will he be able to stave off the coming winter?

15. Quick update

I've recieved a lot of backlash and criticism over the last two chapters, and whilst I think some of it is needlessly harsh, I admit that the quality has dipped considerably. It was sloppy and rushed in my opinion, and I mischaracterized both my established characters and the new ones.

As such, I will keep writing the story, but you can disregard the Iron Bank story line, besides the end results. I plan on going back and rewriting chapters 13- 14. When that'll be done I will remove this update.

Please PM me if you have any idea of how to make that particular plot line better. I'd blame my mistakes on being new to writing( this is my first story ever, lol), but that is a cope out, so yeah, let me know.

Thanks for reading my story, lads. I'm glad a lot of you like it enough to let your criticism be heard.

I'll try to plan the story better going forward.

And thank you to SC CloudStrife for reaching out to me, that was really helpfull

Anyway, cheers to you all and have a good day :)

Savvyy out