Here goes chapter 4! Review and tell me what you think and be truthful. I can take flames, it's the only way I'll learn.
(at the racetracks)
They set there plan strait into action. Hellon want to the driver, Amex began to rig the camera to Goodwin's suit case. Emily was near the track, entertaining herself with looking at the Angels race car.
"do you like fast cars?" the driver asked Hellon while looking at her in amazement.
"no! I don't really like cars unless it's my car and I'm driving it," Hellon said then looked at his expression. " I mean… I like fast… things…?"
"your not really that good with this hole being 'sexy' thing are you?" he said eyeing her in disappointment from lack of sex.
"no but you are a twat!" Hellon said in a 'I'm proving a point' tone.
"well do you want sex anyway?" he asked smiling at her.
"fuck you!" she said then thumped him in the face knocking him out and then walking out of the car.
Amex then met up with her as she began to walk back towards there race car.
"have fun?" she said laughing.
"shut up!" Hellon said growling.
"well we completed the mission and the camera is…" Amax started till they both looked at her hand.
"…still in your hand. Very good Amax!" Hellon said patting Amex on the head like a dog and then grabbing the small camera out of her hand. "I'll put it on!" she ran back and looked in the car to see that the driver was still unconscious and so opened the boot.
"did you do it?" Amex asked as Hellon came back to her.
"no thanks to you," Hellon said storming of.
"guy's!" they both suddenly heard.
It was Emily speaking to them through her mic. She was looking at the creepy hair man who looked like a rat that was getting into a black car with a bright red eye on it.
"creepy hair man who looks like a rat at six o'clock!" she said and so Hellon and Amex looked round confused. "look at the red eyes car!"
"oh!" they both said looking at the race car.
"hey! Why does he get a cooler car than us?" Hellon said angrily.
"it's not really the time Hellon!" Emily said.
"oh no! what are we going to do? What, what, what?" Amex said running round in circles like she was chasing her tail.
"Emily! Chase him!" Hellon said through her mic as the creepy hair man jumped into his car.
"what! I can't even drive on the play station," Emily argued.
"just believe in your self and you can do it!" Hellon said back as Amex still ran round in circles in the background.
Emily thought for a second as the creepy hair guy who looked like a rat started to rev up his car. She nodded more to herself than to Hellon and then jumped in and fastened her helmet on. Creepy hair man began to drive so Emily drove after him. They chased round the track for three tracks till hair man who looked like rat drove through the opening and onto the main road. Emily turned her wheel to follow but turned to slowly and so ended up in the wall.
"aw!" she said through the mic and Hellon began to run to her.
"I know! Chase after him!" Amex said through her mic to Emily as Emily got out of the race car and looked at her. Helen turned round while still running to Emily and so fell over the curve.
They all got together and then looked round. "at least I got the camera onto Goodwin's breath case!" Amex said and then Hellon eyed her.
"I'm sorry, who did?" Hellon said.
"I can't believe we let him get away," Emily said as Hellon eyed her.
"I'm sorry, who did?" Hellon said.
"would you shut up!" Emily said before thumping Hellon in the face.
"aw!" Hellon said lying on the floor.
