So I don't have a lot of reviews yet! But come on people review I need to know if I should keep writing or not.
I have some new characters…
Coach Crandall: he is Kacie's main Softball coach (also called Coach C)
Coach Johnson: he is the assistant coach (also called Coach J)
(Outside on the softball field after school on Friday)
After a long day at school it was finally time for Kacie's favorite part of the day it was Softball time. But Kacie still had one thing in her mind. Her talk with her mom this morning.
Lorelai: what wrong with you?
Kacie: nothing just tired that's all
Lorelai: well ya you have been tired lately
Kacie: well Softball has been taking up all my free time and homework is endless and sometimes I feel like I can't do this anymore.
(she walks over to Lorelai's bed)
Kacie: I I just wish (tears start falling from her eyes) I wish I could be a teenage girl sometimes…
Lorelai: Kace come here.
(Kacie walks over to her mom)
Lorelai: I know this must be hard on you. But look what great of a athlete you are. You're the best on your team. Heck you're the best Softball player I've ever seen.
Kacie: yea but that's because I don't have a life. All my time is spent on softball and school. I don't get anytime to spend with Jamie.
Lorelai: how bout we talk to your dad after school today. Now lets wipe those tears away and put on a happy face.
Kacie: thanks mom I better go
Lorelai: bye Hun see you laterCoach C: come on girls lets go out to the field and throw
(All the girls start running to the field)
Back at the Danes house
Luke: come on Lor we don't want to be late. We need to see are star player in shape
Lorelai: ya Luke about that
Luke: yea?
Lorelai: well I talked to Kacie this morning and she well she kind of had a meltdown
Luke: what do you mean meltdown?
Lorelai: she was upset because she doesn't think she has a life
Luke: of course she does she has a perfect life
Lorelai: she means she was to spend time with that boyfriend of hers
Luke: oh I see well schools almost over so then she should have some more time
Lorelai: yea o crap it 5 till come on we have to go
Luke: yea come on
(At the softball field)
5:00pm game time
Coach C: on the count of 3! 1 2 3. Go Bears!( by the way that's the only name I could think of as a mascot lol)
Coach J: ok Kacie your going to pitch, Jenna you go to first, and everyone else go to your normal positions and Kacie you can warm up with me
Now the first batter is up to bat. And the pitch. Strike 1!
Lorelai&Luke: way to go Kacie!
Kacie: I can do this I can do this
And the next pitch. And she hits it. Meadow gets the ball and throws it to Jenna! And she's out of there.
Kacie: Come on girls! 2 outs play a first!
Here we go. Ball 1. 1 and 0
Strike 1
Strike 2
And a strike 3! Woah great job Kacie (the bears scream)
(Now the girls are waiting to bat)
Jenna: here lets start a cheer. Kacie you start one
Kacie: ok here it goes
Kacie: HEY NY NAME IS KACIE AND YOU KNOW WHAT I GOT?
The whole team: WHAT DO YOU GOT?
Kacie: I GOT A TEAM THAT'S HOTTER THAN HOT
Whole team: HOW HOT IS HOT?
Kacie: GRANDSLAMS AND HOMERUNS TO
Whole team: uh huh uh huh
Kacie: were going to beat the whoopee's out of you!
Whole team: ALRIGHT OK
Coach C: k Kacie your on deck
Kacie: ok
Kacie watches as Jenna bats and hits a double. Then she goes up to bat
The ball is inside. Ball 1
The pitcher unwinds and throws a
Ball Hit batter takes first base
Kacie got hit with the ball and is have trouble running
Coach Johnson is on first base
Coach J: are you ok?
Kacie: uh I guess
Coach J: ok just making sure
Now Meredith is up to bat
And she it's a line drive straight to second base
Now Kacie is running full speed to second base as the ball goes slamming into her ankle and she falls straight to the ground.
Lorelai: oh my god is she ok?
Coach C: TIME OUT!
Coach Crandall runs to second base to see Kacie holding her ankle
Coach C: Kacie can you hear me?
Kacie: it kills I need I need
Coach C: you need?
Kacie: I need my my my MOM!
Coach Crandall goes running to get Lorelai
Lorelai: what's happening is she ok?
Coach C: she says she needs you
Lorelai: Luke come with me
Lorelai&Luke and Coach Crandall go running to second base
Kacie: mommy my leg it won't move
Lorelai grabs Kacie into a hug as she is lifted into the ambulance
It was the longest chapter I wrote so far
Hope you like it
Review please!
