Disclaimer: No! I do not own DBZ. If I did then GT would have have a better story if you know what I mean.
I'm still new into the system of fan writing. Anyway this story is called Dragonball MT (Miracle Tour). Reminder it sort of deals with the same plot as GT but only different. It will have several sagas into the story. Like you know it was Goku, Trunks, and Pan that went into the grand tour right? Well only this time is different because Goten is coming along. Note: there will be some TP later on. So we'll began the story right after Pan stowaway and pressing the button that send her along with Trunks, Goku, and Goten into space for the hunt of the black star dragonballs. Note: Trunks can go level 2, Goten is an Ultra SS, and Pan has mystic ability. Made her stronger than Goten and Trunks, (well in power where Trunks is concern). Trunks: 28, Goten: 27, Pan: 14, Goku: 12
1. This is rated T
2. This a Pan story filled with suspense/action/humor/drama/angst
3. Eventual TP- other words one of these TP get together
4. Every time I finish a saga I will put up a special preview of the next one.
5. I'm willing to fulfill your wishes of each of my stories especially this one.
6. As the story progress I will the 411 of MT.
7. I was inspired to write a rewrite of GT from Lauraneato's GH.
8. MT will sort of be a combination of GT and GH, but with my own ideas
Chapter 1
The Grand Tour Begins
In the ship for the two hours after Trunks got control of the ship handling. He and Goten has been chasing Pan to get the key so they can change courses and send her home.
"Aw come Pan give us the damn key. I don't want to keep chasing you. Besides I'm tired" whined Goten. "That just proves the fact you're turning into old age uncle Goten." sneered Pan, as she continues running... "Hahahaha! She has a point man!" laughed Trunks "Who asks you besides aren't you little older me, so in other words. She's insults you with the old man comment as well" reassured Goten "Wow Goten! That's the smartest thing I ever heard you say in my years." said Pan, sarcastically. "Look brainiac I'm not gonna tell ya again. So give us the damn key." threaten Goten, annoyed "And I'm not gonna tell ya again either. The answer is no and it's gonna stay that way no matter how much you like it or not."
And with that Pan put the key inside her bra scaring the shits out Trunks and Goten as they watch the horror. Pan raises her head with a mischievous smirk. "So it your call." "I'm going to my room." said Goten, in defeat. Goten goes into his room where he shares with Goku. To put his stuff away leaving Trunks to deal with his outright smart aleck niece.
Note: Yes Pan is 14, but she is a genius who happen finish high school and college within 4 years. Sometimes even Bulma considers her to be even smarter than her at times.
"Trunks don't even think of giving me a pep-talk, because I'm not hearing it." said Pan. "Look Pan I don't think this trip is safe for you to come along. (Thinking) Besides Goten and I feel like we'll be babysitting you for a whole year." Trunks replied "Honestly Trunks, I'm stronger than Goten considering the fact I am not a super saiyan. And I've been through scenarios you can't even imagine. Damn it Trunks my dad was only 5 when he went into space so don't give me some story of why I can't be of any help in this trip" Trunks sighs "I just don't want you to get hurt Panny. Cuz if anything happens to you I'll feel it's my fault because I wasn't there protecting you. Plus Gohan would kill me and Goten if he ever finds out some bad had happen to you..." "I'm big girl Trunks. I can take of myself, which that is if you're willing to give me a chance." assured Pan, crossing her arms " "I'll try." Pan just nod and walk away.
Meanwhile after finish unpacking, Goten heads into kitchen to fix dinner and meet up with Goku.
"Hey dad." said Goten, as he cooked "Hi Goten. What ya making?" asked Goku, excited: "Chicken perhaps. Man I can't believe Pan snuck up onto the ship like that. Gosh she sure knows how to burn my edge with her smart aleck comments" "Aw Goten I'm sure she didn't mean it." " Dad you weren't there for the last 10 years. So believe it or not, you little Panny has grown up to be Pan the genius of evil. Goku laughs" I'll admit I love her as if she was my own sister, but my god she can be quite a handful. It's like a combination of mom and Bulma with her." "Well from the looks of things she definitely inherit Chichi's attitude. Actually she's a younger but smarter version of Chichi matter of fact" Goten Sighs "And that sometimes scares me "
The next day the ship the alarming like crazy is having everyone rush into the control room. Trunks check the main flame and computer to figure what's going.
"It seems like the ship has identified a planet." said Trunks, checking the computer
"THAT'S WHY IT ALARMING LIKE CRAZY! OH HELL NO!" Pan hollered
"If that's the case then I'm going back to bed." said Goten, exhausted.
"Right behind ya." agreed Pan, as she and Goku follow Goten back to their rooms.
As the three Sons are about to leave the control room Trunks discover something.
"Hey wait a minute you guys!" yelled Trunks "What is it now Trunks?" asked Pan, sounding very annoyed. "There appears to a missing part of the ship" " A missing part?" Goku and Goten repeated "Yeah a very important part." "What's so important about this part Trunks?" asked Goku "This part is called hunblum. That controls the very thing of the ship that keeps it all together. So without it the ship will eventually fall apart." "What!" shouts the Sons "I think the hunblum fell out while were blasting off." "Gee I wonder whose fault was that." Goten gritting his teeth, as he gave Pan the glare that says 'this is your fault'.
"Alright, alright I think I'd got the picture Goten. Stand aside Trunks." Pan order, she pushes Trunks from the computer and start typing real fast, and looking at the monitor of the ship's situation. Everyone was confused of what she's doing. "Uh… Pan? What are doing?" Trunks question while raising his eyebrow. "Researching." She replied. "Researching on what?" Goku remark "The hunblum." "Why are you researching for?" asked Goten, confused. That made Pan chuckled as she turn around and look at them and said "Because silly I'm going to make one." "WHAT!" "Pan, you can't be serious?" panic Trunks "Trunks I'm genius alright. I'd finished high school and college within 4 years. I've made things through work of computers. I build my own base, I'd made portable gravity chamber, and I helped Bulma to build this spaceship before I'd left for college. So yes I can make one, or at least it can temporary until we get a better one" "For the first time in years I'm speechless" said Goku "Same here." Goten nodded in agreement.
"Pan may at least help out so it can be done quicker." suggest Trunks "You need to be here anyway to check out anymore damage to that is harmful to the ship's database. So course you can Trunks, besides I need to know more about this hunblum and I have a feeling that you hold all the information that need." Trunks smirked
Orignally chapters 1 &2 was together but now seperate. I figure MT may be too long for readers so I'll separate few chapters into small bits of chapters of thier own. Please reivew!
