Thank you for reviews, I really appreciated. Also your suggestions are really handy too. In chapter there will be more Goku and Goten than Trunks and Pan. While TP are fixing the ship, the father- son, go out safe Imegga from Lord Don Kee.
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Also like I said ch. 11 will not be updated until the rewrites are complete. However I just realizes that it probably won't be up until November, because at the most ch. 3- 6 will be rewritten by the end of the month. Plus it is getting close to my due date of updating ch. 2 for Secrets can bring love again. Yes people by the end of the 2nd week of October, it will be up. So you must be a little more patience till then.
CHAPTER 4
SAVING IMEGGA
The next day, Pan send Goku and Goten out to get some parts while she and Trunks work on putting the hunblum in the ship.
"Pan how many parts do we have to go to put the hunblum into the ship's core?" asked Trunks "Cording to my calculations about 30 at least that. We should be done with all of this in hour in half. That is without any interruptions." Pan calculated "Oh now I see why you sent Goku and Goten out so we'll be done faster." said Trunks playing with the tube "Now you're getting it boxer boy." " 'Boxer Boy' you haven't called me that in over two years. Man I thought you grew up Panny." "Stop yourself." Trunks just wave her off "Whatever. Hey do you know when your uncle and grandfather will be back?" "Huh... I told them to be back by dinner." Trunks blankly stare at her and given his confusion look of 'have you lost it'. "Trunks this is my uncle and grandfather we're talking about. It will be different if it was my dad and Vegeta. "Well I can't deny that factor." "Yep I wonder what those two are up right now."
Meanwhile in town Goku and Goten are struggling to get anything. Every time they ask or say something people would just run off. It has been that way for the last two hours. Until they notice their faces along with Pan and Trunks on the wall.
"Turns out we are Imegga's most wanted." said Goten "But we didn't do anything I think." Goku replied as he scratches his head "You think it's because we took the ship back without asking?" "Maybe."
Then a crowd of angry mob found them and ready to attack. Even the cops were there trying to arrest them and figuring the whereabouts of Pan and Trunks.. The next thing they knew the crowd was making fun of Goku when he told them to lay off his granddaughter, laughtering create a deversion for Goku and Goten to escape unfortunately the mob of people notice and were catching up to them.
"Why can't they leave us alone?" asked Goten panting cuz of the running "Because they think we're the bad guys when it really is reverse." Goku panted as well "We need to lose these guys." "Definitely." "Come on dad lets fly." "No Goten, if we do that we can possibly some how lead them to Pan and Trunks. Believe me they can take that chance in stealing our ship again. We probably won't be as lucky the second- time around." "Alright let's at least pick up the pace to lose mob of guards." He and Goku jolt the speed and the guard lost them and began a search party.
Back at the ship Pan and Trunks finished with the whole hunblum saga. And were about to put the ship together until Pan stop them and came with a idea that can benefit them for the entire trip. Obviously the idea got Trunks triippin' all over
"YOU WHAT! OH MY GOD PAN I CANT BELIEVE YOU!" "Come on Trunks, honestly I do not plan to get any weaker during this trip. So if any you are bored you train in the gravity room. Trust me I already test this portable with Vegeta couple months ago." "Goten's right you are like my dad. Sometimes I believe you're actually related to him after all because you act like it more like him than Bra and I do." Pan let out a small laugh "Well I remember him saying the I am 'A true Saiyan' " "I think he's right." "Come on with you being the son of Bulma Briefs the genius and me being the daughter of Gohan Son the scholar, we should have this baby up and running by morrow." I don't know about that genius part because I think you stole that title. Anyway we might as well get started while it's still light out."
Five hours later, Goten and Goku had lost the guards. Even though there is a whole bunch of them scouting them out.
"What are we going to do now dad? We can't attack them thing will only get worse. We can't even go back to the ship without worrying they'll only comeback to take it and probably if they have the chance take Pan and Trunks as prisoners." Goten worried "I know remember what the villagers said about Lord Don Kee taking over and raising taxes just enough that people cannot even afford to live here." imply Goku "Yeah." "Why don't we stop him and save this planet." "That's a great idea dad! I just hope we don't get into too much trouble." "Don't worry Goten. Just stick with me and you'll be just fine, besides we're super saiyans and I highly about there is anyone on this planet that can even be a match for us." "I'm not talking about the people of this dad. I'm meant her." "Her?" "Yeah you know her, the genius of evil." "Oh yeah Pan. Boy she did made it clear for us to be back by dinner, but at this rate we'll probably have to make it by breakfast." "Knowing Pan, she's probably having a fit right about now." thought Goten
Back at the ship, at Goten's precise prediction, Pan is having a fit. So far she broke some glasses, kick and punch at the wall. Now she is getting a drink of water. During that whole Pan's madness insanity, Trunks has been hiding in the gravity room for protection, as he finishing its preparations onto the ship. Now just needs Pan to make the finial prepare (that is if she's calm down). Trunks slowly and carefully steps out of the GR and into the kitchen finding Pan.
"she's calm, too calm that is. At least it's easier for me to talk to her. (Speaking nervously) Hey Pan. Err the GR is almost done, all you need do is put in the finial touch then it's ready for use." said Trunks, cautiously. There was silence and it was scaring the shit out of Trunks. "Pan are you are right? (Thinking) That is a very stupid thing to ask her Trunks. (Speaking) lookPan, I know you're angry at your grandfather and uncle for not coming come back but remember you know how their minds work. They probably still out looking for parts or grab a bite to eat."
"I guess your right. I'm just so worry. Honestly Trunks its one thing do this back on earth but another on a planet that we do not even know of." Pan stated angrily "I know but you just gotta have some faith in them." Trunks replies "Okay I just miss them. So what do you want have?" "Hamburgers, salad, orange chicken meal, and steak." "Well to get it done quicker why don't you help me out?" "Ok." "Poor Goku and Goten they won't even be here to have this great food we're making. I doubt there will be any left for them." "Too bad they know they should be in by now. Gee I wonder what they could be doing that is more important than food."
Meanwhile in the castle of Lord Don Kee , as Goku and Goten continue their trip there. Lord Don Kee is having meeting with two of guards that attack the saiyans yesterday.
"What is such a very night? The star have never looked beautiful so romantic, can easily make someone's day. For whom? For me?" "Sorry milord but we try our best to stop them." said the man. Lord Don Kee hit his desk in pitiful anger. "obviously it wasn't enough." "Milord if you give another chance I promise we'll…" the woman trail on "Do better next time. Oh plez I heard that sappy storyso many times. Guards take them away." Don Kee finished.
The guards carry them away and he calls for his top solider Ledgic. "I want you to find these thieves and bring to them to me." Don Kee orders "Don Kee you know I hate being boss around. Especially by you." Ledgic threaten. Lord Don Kee nervous apologies "I'm sorry Ledgic but there's thieves that's on the loose." "Not my problem. Obviously you need better guards. Considering I'm the best of best and have the power to kill you, I'm free to do whatever. "Ledgic will you please look into it." "Mmmm… I'll think about it." With that he left the room.
Half hour later, as Don Kee finished his call. Suddenly Goku and Goten jump from the sealing into his office. "Who are you? What do you want?" Don Kee demanded "We want you to stop these high taxes, give the people their money and property back." Goku declares "And what if I don't." Don Kee sneers. Then Goku and Goten got into fighting position "then we'll have to use force." Goku imply "Now I recognized you. The both of you aretwo the thieves from last night. Ha and aspect me to listen the you got another thing coming." "Oh yeah and what your gonna do about it. From what I can tell you cannot even fight because your chi is so weak." Goten proclaims "Then perhaps I can be of challenge." said a voice.
Goku and Goten turnaround and find Ledgic standing in the door way. "Oh Ledgic thank goodness you're here. Now I want you eliminate these intruders now." Don Kee command "What have I told you about giving me orders?" Ledgic snaps "uh please Ledgic." "I'm only doing this for my own benefit." He stare at Goku and Goten with interest "I must say I am impress to see half of these pathetic guards are out cold. See Don Kee that's the kind of guards you should have instead of these moron's." "Sorry but we are not interested." said Goku in a serious tone "Now let's see what you can do."
Ledgic and Goku jump and tie into a punch, they spar their way out of the building. Ledgic then kick and elbow Goku on the neck to send him flying to the ground. Only be follow thanks to Goten's quick attack. Ledgic jump up and punch Goten's chin. Goten then zanku fist him, as he's defending himself.
Note: these moves I'm using is from the budokai game, except Pan. Since I don't really know her fighting moves.
Then they spar each other, unfortunately Ledgic is quicker than Goten and smash to the ground, giving Goku attack with his Kamehameha wave from behind. Ledgic teleports and jackhammers Goku and ki blast him. He appear upfront while Goten from behind both attack with Kamehameha hitting Ledgic hard. He got up as the 2 saiyans landed in front of him.
"I must say you guys are pretty good." said Ledgic as he wipes blood from his mouth "You're not too bad yourself Ledgic." Goten compliment "Tell me what your names are?" Ledgic demanded "I'm Goku Son from the planet earth." Goku introduce himself "My name's Goten Son and I am also from earth." Goten introduce himself "Wow! You earthlings sure do intrigue me. Now I know my speed won't be enough so I must use my full power." said Ledgic as he powering up "I must say it's pretty high but not high enough to beat me at least. (Speaking) Then so do we your ready Goten?" Goku remark "Ready as I'll ever be." Goten replies proudly. He and Goku transform into super saiyans. "Now let's go." Goku commands.
Ledgic pull out his two tonfas and attack the two super saiyans. Goten jump up, Goku stop his assault and back flip kick him then punch his gut. Ledgic move back spar with Goku and soon Goten join in to make it 2 on 1 match. With the coming blows being so hard causing some rocks to explode, Don Kee had to duck for cover because of the fight. To end it once and for all, Ledgic attack with Equip Gun as Goku and Goten did the father- son Kamehameha wave.
Remember this move was performed by Goku and Gohan during the cell games and again along with Goten to beat Broly in the DBZ movie (which I cannot remember).
By putting more power into it they defeated Ledgic, as he was blast into Don Kee's office. The 2 saiyans power into their normal from and fled down into the office to confront Don Kee as he came out of hiding.
"Please don't hurt me! I beg of you. I will do anything just don't hurt me." Don Kee cries Goku cross his arms with a smirk on his face "anything huh? Alright you give those people back their homes and ships. You will also lower the taxes so they have a chance to live here." " 'Lower the taxes' but that's how I get all money. I mean come on." Don Kee complains Goten rolling his arm around "I don't know about you dad, but I'm itching for another fight. "Alright, alright I'll get right on it."
Goku walks to the beaten Ledgic "Hey Ledgic your feeling any better?" Goku asked with concern "Yeah I'm fine but I have to admit you guys sure put up a fight." said Ledgic "If you think this is bad boy you should have been there when we fought Buu, now that's a challenge." stated Goten "Even Cell." Goku added "Well it looks like I have my work cut out if I'm to ever beat you guys. "Well if you want a brute fight then you probably see Vegeta trust me, he has major ego was it comes down into fighting." Goku laughs "You can say that again dad." Goten agrees. The next day Goku, Goten, and Ledgic flew into town with money, property, deeds, and ships. After four hours of helping out, Goku and Goten make their way towards the ship."Uh… dad don't you think Pan will be mad at us do you?" Goten asked fearing of Pan's temper "not a chance." Goku assured
Later that day once they arrive guess what happens
"WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN!" Pan screams "Um out." Goten answer profoundly dumb " "OUT WHERE?" Neither say nothing because they'rescare of her replies. Pan puts her hands on the hips giving them the 'You better say answer because my patience is low' look and said "Did you get the parts like I told you. ""OH SHIT!" Goten thought "uh oh." Goku nervously thought "Well did you? Because you guys were out all night so you must have." Silence again then Trunks enters the room with the robot in his hand while Goku and Goten begins to sweat. "you mean to tell me that you haven't. THEN WHAT THE FUCK HAVE YOU TWO BEEN DOING ALL NIGHT!" Pan yelled furiously "Well we were until we was chase by some people who accuse us of stealing." Goku began "Which technically we did. Then we discuss of what the villagers told us about their problem and Lord Don Kee." said Goten "So we snuck to Don Kee's Castle. Defeat Ledgic and have Don Kee make Imegga an better place." "So you guys saying you guys have been out playing hero." said Trunks, catching on. Goku and Goten nods. "Are you out of your mind! Honestly anything could of happen to you. Not saying you can't take care of yourselves but my god! What if they came here or something?" Pan furiously panic "That's why we didn't return, because we're afraid something like that might happen." Goten replies "Pan we're sorry really." Goku apologies "Damn I can't believe I miss it. Seeing you two fight I bet the fight was good huh?" Goku: smile and putting his hands behind his back "yeah it sure was." Pan walking to the Control room "I'm out of here."
"Trunks don't finish what she started." Goten cried "Well she is right about one thing though you guys could have got hurt." Trunks implied "But were fine now. I know Pan was just worried." said Goku " "Believe me I know." Trunks insured, thinking back how Pan nearly destroy everything in sight for worrying herself to death "Dragonball detecting dragonball detecting Giru, Giru!" reported the robot "Huh?" said the guys confuse. Pan enters into the room "Hey guys what's going on?" "Somehow the robot detected a dragonball." Goku told Pan "He detected shit!" "Pan you really need to watch your language." said Trunks, giving her a disappointed look "What are you my father?" "Hey look obviously he work like the radar." Goten reported "So that's what happen to the radar. (Thinking) The earth is save." thought Trunks happily "Ah great so he's stuck with us." Pan pouts. The guys laughed and head to the control room preparing to lift off. "Okay is everyone ready?" Trunks asks "Ready." the Sons replies "Ok let's go!" Soon they blast off into space and in their hunt for the first dragonball.
What do you think? Please review so I can improve this story better and make it more interesting. So you romance people there won't be till later on. Maybe I should change the summary because in this saga there is no TP Romance, but it's one of the eventual pack where it could lead to TP. However there's TP fling/get together. To let you know they probably won't be together until either the baby or hell saga, which is saga & 2 way.
