Mercuriancat thank you for your opinion, but to let you know Pan will not find out she likes Trunks until possibly the baby sega so you gotta be patient. Besides it is too early for anything TP romance going on. I already have that going on with my other story; speaking of which I have just finished the 1st chapter of Secrets can bring love again. To let you know the next chapter of that story will not be updated until sometime in October because I will be starting school and I will be more focus on this story since it's longer. However I will take you other advice with Goten. Now on to the story!

Chapter 8- The terror of Luud part one

Not to long after Pan and Goten left, Trunks and Goku began questioning the Para brothers of their whereabouts. So far the brothers refuse to say anything and believe it or not Goku's patience is getting thin.

"Do you have any idea where they could have gone?" asked Goku, sternly "No and even if we did we wont tell you." Son sneered. Don & Bon laughed

"LISTEN I'M NOT JOKING AROUND WITH YOU GUYS! THAT'S MY SON AND GRANDDAUGHTER ON YOUR SPACE SHIP FLYING OFF TO GOD KNOWS WHERE. IF WE DON'T FIND THEM ALIVE THEN IT'S GOING TO BE YOUR HEADS!" Goku threaten.

Trunks smirk to himself in amusement "Wow who knew Goku had it in him. Well if father was here he would probably be proud and say he is finally acting like a saiyan or something." he thought

"Ok we'll tell you where your brats are. You see our ship was already program sends to our planet called Lex. "inform Bon "Yes in our planet the people are very religious and follow by our lord Luud." Son added "That's why we are trying to get dragonballs to help revival him." said Don "Even if you fail you will get turn into dolls and will be sacrifice in return your energy will be granted to Luud." Bon finished "So you're saying if we don't get there soon Goten and Pan could possibly be sacrifice to that thing." said Trunks "That is only if they have the nerve to show up at the ceremony otherwise they should be alright." "Okay but why do I get the feeling that they will think otherwise." "Because they will Trunks. Anyway we better get going if we want to safe them. With that hyper speed Pan built in the ship and you three guiding us we should get there in no time." said Goku seriously "Ok let's move!" Trunks orders "Right!" the brothers replied


Meanwhile later shortly after Pan, Giru, and Goten arrive on planet Lex, they explore the planet. As walk they start hearing weird sounds coming from Goten. Pan and Giru tries to ignore it but after while it got real irritating. Then found Goten behind a rock when they turn around.

"Uncle Goten, what are you doing?" asked Pan, putting her hands on her hips "Uh… nothing." Goten replied embarrass "Then quit fooling around we got to find some parts so I can fix the ship and get back to grandpa and Trunks." "Why can't we wait for them to get us? With the Para Brothers helping they should be soon." "Goten, I honestly do not trust them, for we know their probably leading them into some trap." "What's that noise?" Giru asks "I don't know it has been coming from Goten. Uncle stop acting foolish and come from behind that rock and let's go!"

Goten face was so red that it must be really that bad for him to even show himself to Giru and his niece. However Pan is so focus on getting out of here to even notice her uncle's problem. "I can't." "What do you mean you can't?" "Well you see I need to use the bathroom since the chase with the Para brothers, but it looks I don't have to go any more hehe." Goten admitted.

Pan & Giru amine sweat drop, and thought to themselves that is the most embarrassing thing to hear about. Sadly enough Pan felt even more embarrass to be related to Goten. Here is her 27 year old uncle still wetting himself as if he is still in need wearing of pampers. Not a moment to soon they just walk on acting if nothing has happen. Hour later…

"Dragonball detected dragonball detected giru, giru." Giru detected "You sure Giru?" Pan question "Certainly. It's detected right inside that cave." "Let's go!" said Goten, excited "Hold on if anything we're floating." Pan stated "Why?" "Simple just look at yourself Goten." Pan pointed Goten of his position, as he madly blushed in embarrassment while he look down at himself ashamed "Oh I got think I got the message. "he replied dully

As the three float into still searching for the dragonball they hear noises. They two guards one tall one in black ninja suit and short one in an aqua ninja suit. As the two passed their way, Pan put them unconscious. She and Goten took their clothes and continue on the journey. They saw exit and found a crowd that are doing some religion. However they found a dragonball by the man with a whip. Next thing they knew a man got hit by the whip and was turn into a doll and was sacrifice to the stone. Giru left and just as Goten was about to follow until Pan grab his arm and told him that they need the dragonball. He stays and they form up a plan. When no one was paying attention for a moment Pan quickly grab the dragonball and jump back to the cliff where Goten is at. Everyone starts looking for it as they got scare until….

"Hey looking for this." Pan yelled, holding the dragonball in her hand. When she could have taken this time to run off with it. "Give me that dragonball you traitor." the man demanded "Traitors we were never with you to begin with. We came here by accident." Goten explain, then Pan covers his mouth and told him to shut up "That's it guards get them." the man ordered

The ninja guards attack them and the two saiyans power up and fought the guards. As the battle was about finished Pan and Goten was about to escape until the man got in their way and blast them to the ground separately. Pan flies into him for an attack however the man teleport behind her grab her legs and threw back to ground and he whips her into a doll. Leaving Goten to wonder how he'll be able to save himself from turning into a doll, getting Pan back to normal, and getting out of here all in one piece.


Meanwhile Goku and Trunks had finally on planet Lex as they start searching around for Pan and Goten. They saw Giru flying towards them saying "Pan and Goten danger." With that he led them to the cave where they are located. Unknown to them the Para brothers follow them. As soon as they got there they saw Goten fighting Cardinal Mutchy Mutchy in his real form. But he was having trouble just about Goku and Trunks were to help they were too late. Goten was into a doll and was sacrifice to Luud, there the two saiyans and took on Mutchy. Once the Para brothers made a scene, Mutchy turn them into dolls and sacrifice them as well. Then he blasts the two saiyans outside and spar with them.


Meanwhile watching on the one behind the Luud cult, Dolltaki was playing with the Pan doll. He was call up to meet up with Dr. Myuu and another creature called Vemon. The three was talking about the saiyans power, Luud and how Vemon already has two saiyans working for him. Right then Pan got curious on how there can two more saiyans. She knew the only saiyans left were those from her grandfather and Vegeta's bloodline. Yes there was something more into the story. Then they got talking on how Dolltaki should sacrifice Pan on making Luud stronger, possibly stronger than Goku since she has mystic abilities. He refuse and later the meeting finished and it was off to watch it close up and bring out Luud as he sacrifice all the cults into Luud. Now he is waiting for Trunks and Goku to finish their battle with Mutchy which they eventually did.


"Alright we had enough of your games it obviously your behind this so quit now give us the dragonball and…" Goku started "unfortunately little boy you are in no position to give out orders." Dolltaki interrupts "AND WHY NOT?" Goku screams angrily. Dolltaki stood there, sneers at them with amusement, and show them a Pan Doll "PAN!" Trunks and Goku cried "What did you do to her?" Trunks worried "Oh nothing except I'll soon make her my bride." Dolltaki snarled Trunks gritted his teeth, squeezing his fist as if he is ready to lay the smack down "over my dead body you. " "We already lost Goten and we will not lose Pan too." "Humph too bad now Luud awaken."

Dolltaki activated Luud and he starts crashing the place. Goku and Trunks jumps and teleports out of his way. They tried attacking him but Luud always comes back in reverse. With the power of a super saiyan they knew it won't be easy. Goku detracts it by flying around for Trunks to go super and attack with his infamous Burning Attack; however the damage was second to none. Luud slam Trunks to the ground and grinds him luckily Goku fires a Kamehameha wave to get him to stop. Suddenly Dr. Myuu and Vemon made plans of their own they turn Dolltaki into a doll as he and Pan fell into the bowl making Luud powerful than his limit.

"Ah shit he has Pan now. Just when things were hard enough when it was just Goten's power not Pan's too." Trunks whined "with power of mystic super saiyan, we can be in for the fight of our lives Trunks. "Pan, Goten, I hope you guys are in there alive because I feeling that we might need ya if we want to beat this thing." Trunks thought "Luud is too powerful there is no way Trunks and I can beat alone. Pan, Goten, if there is ever a time we your assistances, now would be the time." Goku thought.

To be continue…

Finally I finished this chapter sorry I took so long but with school and everything it sort of gets distracting. Please tell me what you think of the story so far? I must admit there is more of paragraph than dialogue because I wanted this to get done. Plus the chapter is short so you could I was in a rush, because I want to get to interest part in the Vemon Sega coming up. I would also like to thank everybody, especially Mercurian Cat for your reviews on my other story. I promise I will work on it again next month just right now it's all MT. Preview: To be free will take the power of 4 saiyans to o so. Also someone has interest in Pan for some reason (not in a romance way).