DISCLAIMER: I DON'T OWN NARUTO...I wish I did...but I don't.

Oh, and for the record, if the characters are a bit off from the original acting ...tell me how it should be.. and I'll most likely change it.

And I was kinda busy for the past week and I probably will be for a bit longer because of all my school work, so I'm writing as much as time allows, midterms start soon and I haven't even started studying and I have no idea what to do, also I'm the type of person that does everything last minute,so I'm trying to change that for the sake of my marks, so yeah. On with the story (ahahah that prob sounded so lame).

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"DOUTEN:YUUEN BAKUHA NO JUTSU!" shouted an overly exhausted Naruto.

Naruto had gone through serious chakra control training the day before and as he just started to try and issue the technique...he failed miserably. Nothing came out but the wind blown from Naruto's mouth. So Naruto tried again.

As soon as he made the proper hand seals, he gathered a large amount of chakra into his mouth and blew.

This time it worked. Well kind of. Naruto had shot the beam... but it was way too small. It like a string travelling (more like flying) straight towards the trees and shooting right through them, at the speed of a turtle. It was nothing compared to what Jiraya had shown.

"DAMN IT ALL TO HELL!" shouted Naruto.

"Why can't I do it?" thought a frustrated Naruto.

"OI, FOX I NEED SOME CHAKRA!" thought Naruto.

Since the fight with Sasuke, Naruto had tried to get stronger to try and bring Sasuke back to Sakura. He had considered the fact that Sakura loved Sasuke. So instead of trying to act all immature for no reason he had decided to help for the sake of their friendship. And he wasn't planning on breaking a promise to one of the people he cared so much about. It was second year and Naruto only had about a year and a half to bring Sasuke back.

"DAMN BRAT, WHY SHOULD I GIVE YOU CHAKRA? WHAT DO I GAIN FROM IT BRAT?" said the Kyuubi.

"Nothing fox! But I get stronger get it? Now fork it over!" said Naruto.

"TCH.DAMN IT! YOU OWE ME BIG TIME BRAT!"said the Kyuubi before giving a boost of demon chakra.

Naruto then did the required seals and shot another of the blasts. The results were frightening. The blast had blown Naruto back and made him brace himself for tumbling and such. The blast itself was more thanten times the effect of Jiraya's move and was the colour red not the original blue. The damage was incomprehensable. The single blast had destroyed beyond the eye's view of forrestry in front of him (NOTE: he's surrounded by a forrest).

"ALRIGHT, I DID IT! HAHAHAHHAHAH!" Naruto shouted in glee.

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Hey I'm still open for more suggestions on how the events should turn out in the leaf village when Naruto returns. I hope you'll review and I also need help on the romance parts cause I stink at that stuff, but I also thin that a story would suck if it had no romance or such whatsoever. -