DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN NARUTO, I WISH I DID, BUT I DON'T. ALSO, THE STORY LINE MIGHT BE A BIT MORE DIFFEENT THAN THE ACTUAL ANIME, AND IN THIS PART OF THE STORY. AND ALSO NARUTO DOES NOT KNOW THAT MANY TECHNIQUES. UP UNTIL NOW, HE LEARNED UP TO TWO DIFFERENT JUTSUS, NOT INCLUDING THE THING HE COULD DO TO MAKE A PHISICAL FORM WITH HIS OWN CHAKRA. NARUTO DID NOT ATTEMPT TO PREFORM THE TECHNIQUES THAT THE FOX TOLD HIM ABOUT, BUT HE MIGHT LATER ON IN THE CHAPTERS.
Also, I've read my stories over again, and quite frankly, in my eyes they suck, so I'm gonna ask for sugestions and such, and try to make the story much better.
"talking"
"thinking"
"KYUUBI TALKING"
"Naruto taken over by kyuubi(the chakra takes form of fox), and shukaku one tailed raccon demon (i think)"
"unknown person talking, or naruto in first stage (Naruto's appearence changes or he's just using red chakra)"
SOUND EFFECTS
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"Snow country? Why are we going there?" asked Sakura.
"The snow are allies with the fire country," said Jiraya, "they can offer us some protection until we are ready to set off again,"
"Alright!" shouted Naruto, "I'm gonna see Koyuki-nee-chan again!"
"Oi Naruto, are you talking about the queen of snow country?" asked Jiraya.
"Yeah, team seven had an A rank mission there before," said Sakura, "and we were supposed to protect the princess."
"EUH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, isn't she the actor in a movie for my one of my famous books?" laughed Jiraya.
"Jeez," Naruto sighed in unison with his other companions.
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"WHAT?" shouted Tsunade.
"What do you mean an unknown nin stole the forbidden scroll!" shouted Tsunade once again.
"How is it even possible? What were the guards doing?" asked one of the jounins.
"There was eye witness, Uchiha Sasuke," said another Jounin to Tsunade.
"Damn, that Sasuke kid is causing this much problems," said Tsunade.
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"Naruto, have you gotten stronger? Have you surpassed my abilities?"
Uchiha Sasuke was reading the forbidden scroll of the leaf and was memorizing some of the techniques that were shown, with the sharingan.
"I will get stronger," said Sasuke as he packed up his things and setting off towards the horizon.
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"We're finally here!" shouted Naruto.
Gaara, Sakura, Akira and Jiraya had all followed Naruto towards the castle of snow country. But if you were to look, you probably would not see any snow at all, only a place filled with vegitation and wildlife.
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"Wahahah!" laughed Naruto, "this isn't anything like the snow country I knew before!"
They were all still on a boat by the coast, slowly drawing nearer to the snow/spring country.
"Well technically you can't call it snow country anymore, you'd have to call it spring country now Naruto-kun," said Sakura, "they must have finished the generator."
"Say gaki, do you have any pictures or something of the queen or something?" asked Jiraya.
"Yeah I do, wait it's in by bag, let me look for it," said Naruto.
"Take your time," said Jiraya in an akward tone.
"You carry a picture of a woman in your backpack?" asked Gaara.
"Yeah, wait I think I found it," said Naruto as he pulled out a book (can you guess what?) Akira was blushing and Sakura was pissed off and was making a fist readying herself to punch Naruto.
"Hey where'd that come from?" asked Naruto aloud, confusion showing on his face.
"Na-ru-to! What are you doing with that book!" asked Sakura in a very menacing voice.
"I swear Sakura-chan, I don't know where that came from! Honest, I swear!" said Naruto in desparation as he was backed up against a wall.
"WHAM!"
The next second Naruto was launched high off into the air and landed in the water, several meters from the boat.
"MAN OVERBOARD!" Cried one of the watchmen.
"Jeez, the kids these days, so violent!" said the watchman to his companion.
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"So this is the picture I was talking about," said Naruto with a slurred accent from the hit to his jaw.
The next second both Jiraya and several other people surrounding them began to gawk and some even got launched into the air from nosebleeds.
"KID I"LL PAY YOU FIVE HUNDRED FOR THAT PICTURE!"
"NO DON'T GIVE IT TO THAT GUY, I'LL GIVE IT TO YOU FOR A THOUSAND!"
"KID I'LL PAY A TEN THOUSAND FOR THAT PICTURE OF THE QUEEN!"
"Oi, Gaki, how'd you get that picture? And you even got it signed!" said Jiraya.
"OK! We're starting the bid for ten thousand!" shouted Jiraya.
"TWENTY THOUSAND,"
"THIRTY!"
"FORTY"
"SEVENTY!"
"MILLION!" shouted a person from the back of the crowd.
"SOLD! For the million!" shouted Jiraya.
"Oi, what the heck, I never said that you could sell that picture you perverted old man!" shouted Naruto. He had been traumatized when Jiraya had taken the picture from Naruto, and had been more so when Jiraya had duddenly disappeared after a person from the back called million, while Jiraya was holding him by the back of his shirt.
"Thank you good sir, nice doing buisness with you!" said Jiraya.
"WHAT?" shouted Naruto, "I'll kill you, you perverted hermit!"
"Here you can have a third of the cash and I'll have the rest," said Jiraya.
"ERO-SENIN! That's my money!" shouted Naruto, "what the heck do you mean that you get two thirds? You shouldn't even be getting a single penny!"
"Fine then I'll take it all," said Jiraya.
"AAAHHHHHH!" shouted Naruto aloud in frustration.
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"Finally, we're here!" shouted Naruto in exhaustion.
"Wow, and it's hard to believe that this country was once covered in snow and ice!" said Akira in facination.
"I know, eh?" replied Naruto.
"It's quite beautiful," said Sakura.
"Hmph," grunted Gaara in response.
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I promise to put more fighting in the next chapter (not like i put in any) but this story was just to direct the story so that Naruto and co. will be in snow/spring country. There is a reason for this all. Oh, and still open for suggestions and such (in detail) on how the stories should turn out and such.
