DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN NARUTO, I WISH I DID, BUT I DON'T. ALSO, THE STORY LINE MIGHT BE A BIT MORE DIFFEENT THAN THE ACTUAL ANIME, AND IN THIS PART OF THE STORY. AND ALSO NARUTO DOES NOT KNOW THAT MANY TECHNIQUES. UP UNTIL NOW, HE LEARNED UP TO TWO DIFFERENT JUTSUS, NOT INCLUDING THE THING HE COULD DO TO MAKE A PHISICAL FORM WITH HIS OWN CHAKRA.

Also, I've read my stories over again, and quite frankly, in my eyes they suck, so I'm gonna ask for sugestions and such, and try to make the story much better.

"talking"

"thinking"

"KYUUBI TALKING"

"Naruto taken over by kyuubi(the chakra takes form of fox), and shukaku one tailed raccon demon (i think)"

"unknown person talking, or naruto in first stage (Naruto's appearence changes or he's just using red chakra)"

SOUND EFFECTS

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"NARUTO-KUN! YOU'RE BACK!"

"Oi, Koyuki-nee-chan, long time no see eh?" replied Naruto as he was wrapped in a gigantic bearhug.

"Idiot," mumbled Sakura in a low tone while slapping her forhead with her hand.

While this was all happening some of the guards of the castles and maids were watching wide eyed, or just giggling at the behavior of the queen.

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"Oh, so, the cloud are after you?" said Koyuki, in a monotone voice, "you know I have no interest of making the cloud an enemy."

"Yes we know, and if something were to happen, we would leave depending on the situation," said Jiraya.

"But as of now, I humbly ask of your nation's hospitality," continued Jiraya.

"It will be done as you have requested, on one condition," said the Koyuki.

"You are to leave if something were to happen, not to meddle with the affairs of this country," said Koyuki.

"It shall be done, but I highly doubt I could do anything about Naruto here though," said Jiraya as he patted Naruto's head a little too hard.

Presently, the group were at a long table and were enjoying a dinner with the queen of spring country. The queen was in a deep discution with Jiraya while Naruto was chatting with the rest of the group, while Gaara was sitting by just listening. Naruto was quite startled when Jiraya had patted his head quite harshly out of nowhere.

"Gaaah, Ero-senin what the heck was that for!" shouted Naruto.

"Oh nothing!" replied Jiraya with a huge grin on his face.

"Eh," grunted Naruto in reply.

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"Hmm, so Naruto, you have come to this place once again,"

With that said out loud, a dark figure had leaped out from the cliff and disappeared.

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"Itachi, your brother has come to this place as well," said a man in cloak.

"I know, don't mind him, he is not strong enough yet," said another man in a cloak, "focus more on the fox and sand brat.

"Tch,"

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"Sir we cannot persue them any longer,"

"Why is that?"

"Our spy was killed and we have lost their tracks,"

"It seems they have mislead us,"

"Damn!"

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"Naruto come over here for a moment," said Jiraya as he motioned for Naruto to come over to the clearing by a wall of mountains.

Naruto was training with Jiraya and was currently revising all the techniques he had learnt and was practicing on the rasengan to further increase his performance with it.

"Hmm? What is it Ero-senin," said Naruto.

"Stop calling me that, brat!" shouted Jiraya.

"It's time for me to tech you the secret technique of the hidden leaf village," said Jiraya, "although, it is alot harder than the techniques you know so far,"

"Eh? Really? How powerful is it? When are you going to teach me?" interupted Naruto.

"Eh? What is it called?" shouted Naruto in question from excitement.

"I will show it to you in good time," said Jiraya.

"When?" asked Naruto in confusion.

"Er right about... now!"

Just as Jiraya had said that a barrage of kunai had rained down on them from above. The figure was hidden because of the height the person was at and the sun was positioned directly above them so the sight was limited to a shadow of a person.

"Damn!" shouted Naruto and Jiraya in unison.

"KAGE BUNSHIN NO JUTSU!"

A large group of shadow clones had appeared in front of Naruto (covering him from above since the assasin was targeting him by running down the cliff).

"Katon, Goukakyu no jutsu,"

"Shit I think I know who it is," thought Naruto, "damn it!"

All of the clones had blown up in a cloud of smoke, covering everything from view, but as the smoke cleared, a faint whirling sound was heard.

Just as the clone beside Naruto had finished with the chakra gathering into Naruto's hand, he flew out from the cloud of smoke and ran straight at the assasin in front of him with a great shout.

"RASENGAN!"

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"Hello sand brat,"

"Who are you?" asked Gaara.

"Your worst nightmare,"

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Still open for suggestions.