Thanks for all the reviews, it's great.
Also I will try to put dialogue on separate line, SKYE WILL NEVER DIE SKYE IS IMMORTAL!
6 assignments in one week for year 9, too many, complain to the teachers!
(this is real it is my life i have already had 12 assignments so far)!
R&R
Winkler
Connor opened the door and stood completely still it was quiet until the arrivant let out a small gasp.
"Connor, you look so different to the last time I saw you," Carmella let out a small chuckle before contiuning, "You are so much more... feminine."
"It's not what you think, it's Toadie's idea to get more people to come to the general store."
Connor ran round the corner and stripped off the top of the bikini and put his shirt back on then put his pants on top of the bottom half.
Whilst this was happening in front of her eyes, Carmella did not look away, nor did she shade her eyes, instead she concentrated her attention solely on the figure that was Connor. She admired his figure as she never had before, even when she was his girlfriend.
This was a special moment for her as she new there was no Serena to get in her way this time. She would be his girlfriend once more. Then again maybe he was more suited to a boyfriend, she chuckled at this thought.
Stingray got up, he was feeling the best he had in ages and he really needed a walk. He looked out of the window and saw Rachel Kinski walking along the street. She looked Radiant, beautiful and Radiant.
He ran, or as fast as he could run out the front door and to her. Their friendship had blossomed over the last few weeks as she had helped him with his film course, he was doing this from home while he recouperated. She had also helped him getting over his illness.
"Hey Rach, you look great today". Stingray babbled a bit while Rachel looked at him with her soulful eyes. You know what they say your eyes are the window to the soul.
"You don't look to bad yourself". Stingray mightn't have know it at the time but Rachel was in desperate need of something, she felt the need to be like the others, to bea rebel, she needed a boyfriend. Stingray had attracted her attention because he was kind to her.
"Are you gonna help me with that assignment on juxtaposition, it really needs somthing"
"Sure come over to my place tomorrow at 5 and we can work on it". Although she didn't show it Rachel was secretly pleased that Stingray liked her help, well she liked to help him too so it's a win win situation.
"I'll see you then?"
"Yep".
Dylan came over to stingray when Rachel had gone.
"I saw the way you looked at her mate, don't be ashamed she is hot although do consider the fact she is only in Yr 9".
"She is way mature for her age andshe is really funny and nice, she actually appreciates my jokes".
"Now she is devoted" Dylan laughed quietly at his own joke.
"I like her too but not in that way so could you please drop it 'cause as much as you would like to be able to laugh with Skye at my love life I will not crack on to her".
"Whatever" Dylan shrugged his shoulders, he knew at some point Stingray would give in and that would be funny.
Stingray turned around so as to strom off to show his anger to Dylan when he saw Rachel run crying from behind a wall. Oh my gosh she must have heard me he thought and I didn't even ment what I said and now I will have to explain to her.
Stingray ran after Rachel to try and correct their relationship when Dylan saw what Stingray was doing and followed him.
Katya stared, Susan had just handed over the children over without a fight and without telling her horrible secret.
She was eternally greatful and thanked Susan likewise before returning to her own state of mentality. This had to be one of the best days in her life. She had to go and thank Toadie, she thought.
He must have played some part in helping to convince Susan to give up the children she loved so dearly. She excused herself and ran across the road to visit Toadie.
As she approached thefront door she saw Connor and some strange woman kissing in the back yard. For a moment she wa amazed that someone hadn't snapped up Connor sooner but soon dismissed this from her mind.
She approached the front door, purse in hand ready to thank Toadie in her own way. She rang the doorbell and after about 20 seconds Toadie answered.
He had only just got back from the law firm so he was still in his suit (with his pants on). Katya sat down on the chair with Toadie. She needed to thank him.
R&R Winkler
U guys R great I love hearing from U. I have put them on more lines, I have also dicoved recently that this DOES make it easier to read.
Till next time CYA
