Ok, here it is, sorry for delay but I been busy, ill and other stuff. Also Im trying to get as much written as I can. But heres the big Chapter, Long one - 'good things come to those who wait' - anyway few things

I based the caveon goonies, but since it not important Ive just done basic., um ok Not much dialogue but thats in next chapter and a few Secreats/things in past chapters have beenAnswerd (you worked it out yet)

Ok here goes (hankies ready)


I wanted a perfect ending. Now I've learned, the hard way, that some poems don't rhyme, and some stories don't have a clear beginning, middle, and end. Life is about not knowing, having to change, taking the moment and making the best of it, without knowing what's going to happen next. Delicious Ambiguity.
The Descent

Saturday, it was the BIG Day, the Birds where not chirping, the Sun did not shine, rain fell to the watery ground, the wind howled through the streets, lightning flashed and thunder rumbled, yet Zack woke to a smiling face and happiness was around him.

"Zack, time to get up," shouted Carey from the door, Zack opened his eyes and looked around, Cody was already up and there was a smell coming from the kitchen. As Zack entered the living room he saw Carey sat at the table

"Morning Zack" greeted Cody

"Morning, what u doing" asked Zack, seeing him in the corner

"Making you breakfast, now sit" answered Cody

"He making us all breakfast," corrected Carey,

"Ill get it, bit early for guests" said Carey as a knock on the door was heard, she opened the door to see Moesby

"Morning Mr Moesby, what can I do for you," asked Carey

"Nothing, Cody invited me to Breakfast" said Moesby, Carey and Zack looked at Cody who just smiled

"Why not, morning Moesby take a seat" said Cody, Moesby entered and smelt his Favourite Breakfast

After breakfast Moesby went downstairs to the already busy Lobby to begin preparations, Zack and all the kids got ready for the moment.

"Cody what's going on" asked Zack

"Nothing, why should there be" answered Cody, still in his smiley mood

"Well you've acted weird all week, you been in a chirpy mood since Breakfast, and you made breakfast for me and Moesby, something's going on," Cody made a small laugh and looked at his brother,

"Zack, you know I realised that we will never always be together, so I thought, Ill just do one good deed for my Brother" Answered Cody,

"OK, but I not understand" asked Zack

"You will, you will, just trust me, you do trust me right" Cody responded in a loving way

"Yea, I trust you, but……." Answered Zack, Cody placed his hand over Zack's mouth

"Ok, lets just leave it at that ok," said Cody, leaving Zack in the bedroom, Cody left and got ready to go down, Freddie and Oliver met him in the Corridor

In the Lobby some media had gathered, a few had already gone to the cave entrance, there where also a few others just in case, but their where a lot of people moving around, Zack looked around and noticed that the Old man was not around, he kind of expected he would turn up, Cody was talking to other in the group and the press.

It was almost 12:00 and everyone was ready for the grand opening, the kids had been briefed and awaited at the entrance with 2 adults who would lead them.

Zack stood with his group, Oliver, josh and one of the youngest, Declan, they where to be the first in, behind would be Cody's group, Jimmy, Freddie and Joey.

The room was well different, you could tell it was built around the cave as the rock covered one side, the rest was brick and stone, the hole was about the same size as Zack, although he would have to bend a little. The brownish colour disappeared into the dim lit darkness, a few lights had been fitted but it was still dim, they had torches to help. Zack followed the staff as they began their decent.

The corridor was narrow, enough only for one, so they had to be in a single file, it was steep, old man made steps helped them to descend. the gap was high and the walls where dry and jagged. It took them 25 min to reach the first level. It was here the cave opened up its first secret; it was wider and lit up. Carvings had been made into the walls, pictures and words, small chambers the six of the show box had been calved into the wall. The main part was almost round and it continued up, narrowing. There was the sound of trickling water but no one really bothered about it.

"Wow this is really cool, hay look at this" said Zack, as he pointed to a picture of two people and an object which could not be made out

"Cool, wonder what the object is," asked Cody

"Or the people" said Oliver

"Hay you lot seen this" shouted Freddie

"What," asked Zack following Freddie's torch, there was another chamber, it was small but could fit a few others, there where a few objects, like pottery and utilities that where Very Very old, a piece of rope stopped them from entering

"Wow, this is cool, looks like there's stuff years old

"Probably down here since before those kids came." Said Cody

They continued to go along the corridor, it was again narrow but it was a little wider, although it was straight they realised at occasions they where still going down. The walls where of interest and small carvings still lined the walls with small holes and other holes that when looked through you could see other small chambers. The tunnel widened after half an hour, they came to a stop, but Cody was looking onwards not at the tunnel but something else, the area was wide, but there was something blocking the way.

Zack saw Cody's face and looked on, he had seen it in his dream, the giant boulder sat in front of them, the area had been supported with Beams but it had been where it had collapsed years before. They all climbed around it and over other smaller boulders, the people had decided it best not to move them and keep it as a challenge and tribute, on the other side they noticed the carvings. One read

Jacob knew the way, we should have waited. This boulder is in memory of all those who died here.

"Hay Cody, you ok" asked Zack

"yea fine, just a bit spooked" answered Cody, they all looked around, more carvings, small chambers, artefacts and a few non real bones.

"Think we all are, it's weird to think that we standing where many had died, spooky, come we need to lead the others into the large chamber," answered Zack. The group proceeded into the chamber, Cody was last

We should have stayed, but someone had to go.

Cody stopped as he heard the voice, he turned nervously and saw at the Boulder the small Blond Boy, he looked up with a tear on his face, it was then Cody realised, they looked at each other, and The boy whispered one more thing that sent a shiver down his spine.

I had to go, only Zack was strong enough to stay, I had to, please tell Zack I love him.

Cody looked on as he disappeared, there was a small rumbling noise. Cody walked on, the words still swarming his head. He saw the other in the Chamber, it was reasonable side almost oval, smooth walls, pictures lined the walls. Years of history by all those who spent time down here.

"Hay how old are these Pictures" asked Freddie

"Someone did say there where pictures dating at least 200 years, there's pottery and articles that's been here for over 100years, some have been left here" said one of the adults

"Wow, its like out the movies where they discover a chamber full of treasure, painting etc," said Zack

"Yea, really cool," said Oliver, they all agreed and spent some time looking around the chambers.

"Zack Cody, keep everyone here we just going to check something" said Jeff one of the Adults, they went out of the chamber towards the boulder. It was then there was a crash and a yell, the other stayed put as Zack slowly when to see what it was, but the smoke was thick, but soon cleared, as it did he saw the 2 adults on the floor among rubble. Zack and Cody helped the others, they sat near the chamber and Zack noticed one was injured, it was then Cody saw the boy, he moved towards the boulder while listening to Zack's plan,

"Waite what you doing" asked Zack

"I'm just looking," answered Cody

"But we need to stick together, look ill lead and take the others you follow at back," suggested Zack,

"No wait, maybe it be better we all stayed here, they'll have heard the commotion and when we not answer or come up they'll send someone," answered Cody

"True but the place could caved in then by then," snapped Zack, his heart was beating more, he expected Cody to panic, but he knew he would be strong, Cody knew more than he did, but he was more shocked by what Cody was suggesting

"What's up with you, this is not you" asked Zack

"Look we have two injured adults, 2 young kids and well it's a small tunnel, if it collapses we more air here, Trust me Zack," snapped Cody, at first the words just went from Cody to Zack's mind and nothing else

"So what's your plan" asked Zack

"Look Ill go for help, Ill take one of the leaders, Jeff can make it he not that bad, that way at least if it does crash it's only two, and better chance," suggested Cody

"I don't like it" answered Zack

"Trust me Zack, this is the best way, anyway it be better if you stayed, you're the strongest" said Cody

"But……." Mumbled Zack as he looked into his brothers eyes, something was bothering him and making him unease, it was then the words from Cody entered his mind and sent alarms ringing. There was a rumble of thunder or something and the sound of water, they looked through the Gap and saw water trickling down the entrance, lights where dimmer

"Remember when we did the river walk, and that waterfall, I was the only one who made it to the top in good time, You have to trust me Zack, let me do it, please," Pleaded Cody.

They stood for a while

"If you going to go, then do it now, the boulders will hold for a while, but we need to go now" said Jeff, It was then Zack's mind remembered something the old man said

Let Cody do what he has to do, help and trust him, it's the only way.

He told Cody to go and helped him get ready, ropes where tied around him, Jeff had brought a lot of stuff, just is case, they then started to move towards the Boulder, Cody saw on the Boulder two carvings, one he could not make out, but the date was 100 years ago the other, well seemed newest

In memory of my brother, Cody, I will always be here, Zack 2062

It was then he saw the blond boy, he turned to zack who was near him

"Zack, Ill always love you, you know that right" said Cody

"Yea, but ill see you later, right" said Zack, they nodded and Cody proceeded through the gap. Zack turned and proceed towards the Chamber.

The water was building as the rain fell like Niagara, the earth was not ready and it began to tremble, a stone came loose and the walls rumbled, history was repeating itself. The walls where solid as rock but now cracked, the sound of falling rubble was heard in the passage way behind the boulder, and water began dripping from the cracks. Zack turned and shined his yellow torch, casting enough light to see the way, but it only outlined a boulder but there was something else, he saw the boy. It was then in an instant the passageway collapsed, smoke filled the room, he called for Cody but there was nothing but darkness, rock and smoke, water trickled faster and one last bang echoed the caves, rock was crumbling above him as he reversed into the chamber, he then heard the scream, a scream that sent shivers through his spine, he realised it was Cody, he screamed for him as tears fell ……………..

To Be Continued


Reviews please, Is it dragging or confusing, good, you worked out who is who yet

(Next Chapter - Brothers Love- coming soon)