Thanks for your reviews here's chapter 3


Samus continued running until her goal was finally in sight. Her bright orange ship sparks flowing through stood feet in front of her. She leaped through the air landing on the top. The ships plank lowered allowing her to enter the ship.

"Greetings Samus have you had a nice day?" Adam greeted in a perky voice.

" Not now Adam I need a recharge." Samus stammered thrusting her gun into the recharge socket.

Adam beeped and energy flowed into Samus's armor. Samus could feel the armor surge with power and lift from her shoulders with renewed power. Samus jerked her arm away and ran to the plank and was lifted away from the ground floor of her battle ship, She jumped into the warm dessert and lifter her arm cannon and searched the open space for Alatar. Remembering how they had ambushed he she switched on her heat visor but was blinded by the enormous heat signature in the dessert. She switched to her dark visor. For a second she could see nothing but darkness but she was positive she spotted a tiny read dot on the left corner of her visor.

Samus returned to her combat visor ad locked on to the coordinate and ran for it. Once again speed booster ensued and she blasted to the point on her map.

Alatar walked to his pick up point he was abandoning the mission. He had lost too much on this day. He looked at his scanner he was 2 miles from the point. All of a sudden his vision was blurred and he was hurled through the air. He landed on the ground and was breathless. He looked up to see his prey looking down on him gun blazing with hot golden energy. Samus fired her charged blast and it shot towards Alatar he rolled out of the way and threw his electric disk and it pieced her armor. Samus jumped back and ripped it out.

Samus shot a barrage of missiles. The predator jumped and extended his battle spear. He destroyed most of the missiles but was let three through his defenses and was hit dead on. He flew back but flipped and landed on his feet extending his arm blade. Samus threw her arm forward and let out and short-range explosion. Alatar drew back and fired his shoulder cannon. Samus was flung back. Samus placed he arm on the ground and pushed upward landing on her feet. They both charged at each other. Samus pulled back her cannon and Alatar pulled back his spear. Samus shot a super missile but Alatar switched weapons and fired his shoulder cannon. The result was an explosion throwing both of them back. Back Samus was first to recover and she aimed again and began shooting missiles. Alatar looked up. He lowered his eyes and lifted his arms. He was flung backward. Samus charged the predator lifted up his head he took his spear and jammed it upward knocking it into Samus's head. Samus staggered back the predator aimed his shoulder cannon and blasted Samus back. Alatar stood up. All the predators together couldn't have taken on this warrior. Only four in their whole colony have the ability to even give her a challenge and two of them are dead the only ones left were he and the chief.

Samus stood not wanting to make the first move. Alatar stood and stared ready for anything. But the Samus had a spark of intelligence. The one thing Alatar didn't expect. Samus fell backward and curled up and shrunk into a tiny sphere. The morph ball began to glow and shot at the warrior smacking him in the legs. His shins were struck with pain. The predator went invisible. Good move. In morph ball Samus couldn't use her visors. Before she could change back he was struck by an armored foot and sent flying through the air. Samus changed in midair and was hit by a shoulder cannon blast she flew ad hit the ground. Samus lifted her head and managed to see the predator striding over to her spear raised. Samus raised her cannon.

" Chew on this."

Samus launched a diffusion missile. Alatar moved his spear to block the missile but when it hit his Metal spear the missile froze him over instantly. Samus began to walk over to the predator and looked into his mask. She knew she shouldn't hesitate she knew he would get away she raised her arm cannon and blasted him he the ice broke and he flew to the ground and didn't move. Samus walked over to him and took his arm she ripped his self-destruct device from his arm and let him fall to the ground.

Samus turned and began to walk away.

"Mmmmpp-phh" Samus turned around and ran to his body.

"Mmmmpp-phh" Samus looked at his arm and scanned it.

Language control upgraded

"Alatar we have arrived at the pick –up point come or be left behind"

Samus entered the map control and a replica of his surrounding was displayed. And sure enough a mile or two away a gigantic ship awaited the return of their warrior.

Samus closed he map and raced toward the coordinate. Samus looked around but saw nothing. But two blasts were shot inches away from her feet.

"I don't know what you did to Alatar." A predator said shoulder cannon charged.

"But your gonna wish you'd never put on that little cannon of yours and stepped out of your ship,"

And behind him thousands upon thousands of predators came into sight.

" Well at least it's not a giant slug," Samus said charging her cannon.

" Attack."


Chapter three for ya plz review. And I'm thinking of putting the space pirates in and dark samus.