Yay! Chapter 5! ZThe story in my head is evolving, thanks to you reviewers. It's because of you all that my story doesn't suck more than it does already! Ahh, I kid. This is turning out awsome. I', getting excited here! But first, to tickle a midget in a tree. Tehe! tehe hehe. Awww, midget tickling. OK, on with my story. After this I'll start on my third story because I just can't not do it. The plot bunny eggs in my brain are hatching!
Anyway, likealways, I own nothing, but I do illegally download anime DVDs. Why didn't you say FMA Vol1 was French! bastards...
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Hinata stood infront of her cousin, panting heavilly, and she was winning. It's been a week since Hanabi's death, and Neji was still off. It was true that she always wanted to beat him, but not like this. Needless to say, however, she was gladly enjoying her victory, however tainted it was.
"Come on Ni-san" She tauneted, "You're just going to let me beat you?" She smirked, decided it was time to finially try out her move in her cousin. It was true that Hanabi was unable to see past it, but her father could and with his experience, Neji could too. Hopefully, he was still too out of it to notice the flaw. She got her hands ready for a set of seals that only one gennin knows.
"Kage Bunshin, No Jitsu!" She proclaimed. It wasn't a true kage bunshin, but a combonation of ninjitsu and gentitsu. She used a regular bunshin technique to make a pair of clone and used her gentitsu to create a chakra circulatory system in the clones. The weakness to the move against the Buyakugen is that there is a moment, however brief where the clones have no chakra where a kage bunshin comes out with chakra.
She smiled. Judging by Neji's reaction, she had fooled him. He stared at her in disbelief. trying to form words, but the only thing escaping his mouth was incoherant syllabols ending with an exaterated 'Whaa?'
"Thank Naruto-kun for this one." She revealed the 'teacher' of this move. The clones threw fake kunais at the branch Hyuugan, which appeared to have collided right infront of him. Hinata came in as he focused in the kunia, giving her the opportunity. With a surge of chakra, she slammed his chest, sending him flying.Using her superior flexability, Hinata slid on her back to get under Neji.
From the distance, hiashi finially smiled at his only, no, eldest daughter. He recognized the positioning, Lee's infamous Secondary Lotus. Grabbing on to her cousin, Hinata sent jets of chakra out of her hands to send them spinning. His inner ears confused, she went to work.
"64 Strikes: Lotus Style!" Her hands worked the front, closing down his chakra holes. The second step took the most concentration of any move she has ever seen. She sent out streams of chakra out of her holes and punctured Neji's skin, burrowing to his chakra cirlatory system. Some she directed to the chakra holes in his back, while the rest went to his heart to temprarily stop the source of his chakra. Being her cousin, she didn't full out kill him, but just knowing that put a smile on her face.
They landed, Neji face down, as he was incompacitated from the attack. With a close look, she saw that it had worked properly. All other attempts had 'killed' Naruto's kage bunshin. He would survive, and she had won. Though, if he would of been at his full potential, he would never of been caught off gaurd. It was over, and she won. The move to destroy Hanabi, was instead practiced on her cousin.
"Bravo. What an attack. I guesse that your," Hiashi paused, trying very hard to not say the next word. "boyfriend, is not completely worthless. With practice I'm sure that you could kill sopmeone with that move." She heard something he never associated with her. Pride.
Hinata was taking a stroll at the training grounds. Then there it was, the mysterious chakra. She recognized it, from the day Hanabi was murdered. Activating her Buyakugen, she raced to it's unmoving location. She ran, and ran, and ran some more. Time seemed to slow down as she tried to close the distance. She just ran, not getting any closer. Then, it was right there. Her eyes widened as she saw who it was. It was red. It was evil. And it was,
"Naruto-kun..." There he was, standing there with blood dripping from his claw. The chakra took shape as a nine tailed fox, like Kyuubi. Slowly, he turned to her, with a stare that would make Hell freeze over. His fangs glistened red with what looked like blood and her blood froze in her veins. A weird sound caught her attention as a ball of chakra slowly formed in his claw. Death was written all over his face as he lunged at the Hyuugan.
"Kieten!" She yelled as a dome of chakra surrounded her. With her flexability and chakra control, it was the strongest defense. It was even stronger than Gaara's sand. She had to buy time. Someone would come to help. With the immense chakra outpu, someone just had to. But to her surprise, the demon possesed Naruto passed unphased through the dome and struke her in the chest.
(end cliffhanger)
I wanted to go one more paragraph, but I just had to put in a cliffhanger. unfortunally, you probolly will be disiapointed with this one. As Bender said "You bring my hopes up only to destroy them just as quickly" Then he probolly got drunk. I love Futurama. I'm gonna upload this, go to the bathroom, then either start story three or update one of my stories. Ok, bathroom first.Hehehehe, Family Guy kicks ass. It's peanut jelly time! "We just traveld three hours on a plane to Florida for god knows what." Sign Disney Land: 5 miles. "OMG Disneyland!111! Rant) ...I still hate you"
