Thank you all! Whoa, I updated faster than I thought. I read my reviews and more people wanted me to change my title then those who want me to keep it. So, I am going with the people who want me to change my title. But a big hugs to those who like my old one!
I changed my fic back to a T. So now it's more suitable.
I can only come up three titles for now and its
1.'Love Triangles'(Second to Problems of Loving You)
2.'Problems of Loving You'(I like this one the best out of the three. Suites the future chaps.)
3.'Restricted Love'(Third.)
cuz theres a lot problems in the future and I mean A LOT! Its not the end yet.Please vote if you like or just tell me if you have a title for me.I am planning to write 28-30 chapters for this story, so don't worry I won't stop! But once again if you have any suggestions please tell me.
Also, now bringing back to my earlier problems about my story being similar to snow-maiden13's 'Once Upon A September' well it wasn't Sasuke that surrendered but Sakura! Nobody told me that my idea was similar to hers now, and I'm very happy. But I would just like to tell you the differences if you ever thought I plagiarized or something. Luckily nobody flamed me and I am so happy!
Chapter 17- The Famous and The Infamous
"Sakura-chan, look!" Her friends all cried as they caught up with her and her new found boyfriend, Sasuke.
"Sakura, I'm going to go first okay?" Sasuke informed, he's having his last basketball game for the semester in a few minutes.
"Okay, see yah. So, what's up?" She asked turning over to them.
"Oh my god Sakura-chan, you're like famous all over Japan! Everyone in Japan knows you!" Katie exclaimed. Sakura gave her a confused look.
Not knowing where to start they handed her three different magazines. Sakura looked at the first page and soon began skimming through every article at top speed.
"But...how? I mean-" She was on the verge of being speechless. "Since you're now 'officially' Sasuke's girlfriend, and Sasuke being rich, famous, and that is being loved by everyone/girl, the news just had to get out. So now the whole Japan knows you're Uchiha Sasuke's girlfriend. Big impacton girls all over the country. And that's not all; even the Icha Icha series have posted the news in its issues!" Tenten explained.
"News travel really fast here and it's really hard to keep something in secret." Hinata noted. "I-Oh my god, I never knew it would become like this...Now every girl hates me!" She groaned still shocked by the news.
"Don't worry Sakura-chan, we're girls and we don't hate you. But we will if you decide to break up with Sasuke...Just joking, but seriously we will be really mad if you do." Katie said sternly.
"Besides, the number of fan boys and girls will die down. Poor you and Sasuke, being chased after, all the time. It must be hard." Tenten added.
"We better hurry; we don't want to miss the game. Let's go!" said Hinata. They went and watched Sasuke shoot most of the baskets. Sakura kept her gaze on him and no one else; scared that if she did, she'll receive death glares.
Though less fan girls were cheering on for Sasuke, they wereall glaring at her back.Of course being one of them is Yamanaka Ino. She was glaring at Sakura icily.
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How dare she? She was supposed to be Sasuke's fiancé and yet some girl managed to stole his heart. What had she done to deserve this in the first place? It wasn't fair! She doesn't deserve this! How could God do this to her? What does she lack? Kindness? Patience? Looks?
She had all of those virtues before and still had the looks, so why hadn't he liked her? She wouldn't be like this now if he had rejected her all the time. But the past is the past and it cannot be changed.
Now in the present days she had become the president of Sasuke's fanclub and turned from a sweet loving girl to a snobby spoiled lady. These childhood virtues are gone now, stored away in the depths of her heart. Now the goodness is replaced by envious, pride, and anger.
It would take a miracle for Ino to finally snap open and let those childhood ways overcome her again. Now was now, and Ino was as mad as ever, what is she going to say to other people now?
"Oh hey, I'm Uchiha Sasuke's fiancé but he's already taken by some other foreheaded bitch."
Lame! Shameful! Useless!
She's not going to let that happen. No way is a mere girl going to ruin her life….
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Sakura bid her friends goodbye and walked across the school's field towards home. Sasuke had a year end dinner party with the basketball team so he couldn't be with her. Although it was really sweet of him for offering her a ride home and skipping the dinner. She somehow managed to persuade Sasuke to go to the dinner party at the end.
She had stayed around school chatting with her friends until she saw it was almost 8:00 pm. It was dark out but it didn't really bother her, because the stars were bright tonight.
Her cell phone went off breaking the silence of the stilled night. She saw that the call was made by Sasuke and she flipped the phone up to answer it. Just as she flipped it open, somebody grabbed her from behind and pinned her down on the grass.
Sakura let out a scream but it was muffled when someone covered her mouth. She opened her eyes and saw unfamiliar faces. One on top of her and three around her.
They looked evil and dark. The one on top of her tightened his hold on her as she struggled; the others snickered and crowded around her stroking her hair and cheek.
Their eyes traveled greedily down her body as their hands slowly followed their gaze. Sakura felt angry and scared at the same time. She tried screaming but was once again muffled by someone.
Tears started running down her cheeks at hearing the men's purring and taunts. Summoning all her energy, she managed to jerk one of her hands free and punched the guy that was on top of her, square in the nose.
The guy instantly brought his hands to his nose and cussed. Another guy angrily grabbed her by the hair and jerked her around. She gave out a painful cry and tried to free herself from him.
But to no avail, the other two guys started coming towards her. She shut her eyes and prepared for the worst. The worst never came, and she opened her eyes and saw the very person that would make her heart soar with happiness.
"Sasuke..." She whimpered.
Sasuke was mad, really mad, so mad that he could actually kill somebody. He held one by the collar and punched him in the abdomen.
"Fucking bastards!" he cursed, and kicked another one in the head.
The three tried to fight back, but Sasuke dodged all of their attacks and fought them until they would rather see the devil themselves than him. They cried with pain, and ran away.
Sasuke turned around until he was facing the last guy of the gang that was still holding Sakura by the hair.
"Let go of her." He said in a cold murderous tone. The man shivered with fear but tightened his hold on her, "N-No, y-you little brat!"
"I said let the fuck go of her!" he swore angrily.
"Not a chan-" Before he could finish he had earned a deadly punch in the head and a kick to the side. "Nobody messes with me or my girlfriend!" and he sent him flying over the field.
He quickly knelt down beside Sakura. "Sasuke!" She cried and hugged him tightly, crying softly. Sasuke's arms went around her, holding her into an embrace while slowly stroking her head.
"Are you okay? Did you get hurt?"
"I-I'm okay...thank you so much... I was s-so scared, you have no idea how happy I was to see you." She whispered, still not letting him go.
"I called you but nobody answered. So after the dinner I looked everywhere for you and found you here." He replied, "C'mon, lets get you home."
He helped her up and apologized on the way, "Sorry I'm late."
"No, its okay. Oh and Sasuke, I love you..."
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"YOU WHAT!" Ino exclaimed out loud, shacking with anger. "I told you to PRETEND to rape her not REALLY rape her!"
"But y-you-"
"Aargh! You guys are so disgusting! And I'm glad you got those injuries! Now get the hell out of my mansion!" She screamed angrily.
"But what about our money?"
"Money! You still have the nerve to ask for money! YOU DIDN'T FRICKIN DO WHAT I TOLD YOU TO DO, AND YOU'RE STILL ASKING FOR MONEY! Guards! Kick their stupid asses out of my mansion!" She screeched.
And the guards did kick their stupid asses out of her family's mansion. Ino collapsed on her bed and rubbed her temples, the plan had not come out the way she expected. Even she wasn't that cruel to do something like that to her worst enemy.
Okay finished! Short chapter I know, Sasuke too OOC in my opinion.
Oh and here's a thought to those who still think Ino doesn't deserve Shikamaru in the end, well look at it this way. If you have an awesome gorgeous fiancé and somebody has taken him away from you, you will get super mad. I know I would. Has that changed your mind?
And now answers to my fellow reviewers from chapter 16, (Once that are not underlined are anonymous reviewers, others are those who have signed in):
fREnZ 4 EveRbabykitty2270, kouzumi 4eva: Thanks for the reviews! Your suggestions and comments have been very helpful to me. But more people would like me to change my title so yeah…But thanks again!
flowerangel050, nixxie1430, Minako Aino, NoweManah, K.Fields, BENJEM, munchy, nan de mo chibi otoko, Onna Ooji, Mrs.Uchiha, left-alone, neu chi no nai u, Zuan, Kiie-chan, Herald Of Valdemar: Thanks a bunch! Whew, finally they're a couple. The next chapter will be based on just them. And I will try to update soon! ...Goes on cursing my school and all the homework...
Charl: Lol, I love Kakashi! He is like the best ever! And cute too. Also I'm glad that you like Ino too.
mystical shadow angel: Wow, you got your sister to read it! You're comment really made my day! Thank you! I have step siblings of my own and they are really annoying. So I share you pain! But also thanks to your sister for reading my fic! I can't help but feel really, really proud! XD
vamprincessmiyu: lol, Yep Ino is still a bitch.
MochiLuvinGirl: Thank you for telling me that. Now I'm really sure that my fic won't get banned.
Celestartial Blossoms: Thank you for your suggestions, and as for the pool thing. Well Sasuke is back to his evil pranking side so he decided to push Sakura into the pool; he's not always that romantic, lol, although I try to make him romantic. But that would be too OOC. And only Sakura fell into the pool, not Sasuke. Sakura was just trying to splash him. Hope my chapter makes more sense to you.
CrAzY-SiLLy-Me, Celestartial Blossoms, animeforever24, sweetmaiden: THANKS! Okay, now that I decided to change my title if you have any suggestions about the title, please feel free to tell me. Or if you just like 'Love Triangles' then tell me too.
lexy499: Ha, I actually finally updated after you. Yay, there a couple! ...Streamers everywhere, blowing party horns...
sakuryn: Your such an awesome reviewer!
Kuroneko Ume, IsLandChIck3: Don't worry this fic goes on and on! Well I'll stop around 28-30 but there is still long ways to go! Thanx for the review!
little wolf blossom: I'll give you some spoilers of this story, XD! Sasuke's mom is going to come into the story at chapter 19, but not the family. The whole family will come like around 20 something-ish. Here's your Ino chapter, although not a real pleasant one. Thanks for your review!
sasukefurever: Lol, some people from the past of this story likes to pull pranks so they decided to bring a cow. I dunno, the thought just came to me as I saw a whole field of black and white on this poster. Lol, thanks again!
Blue Werewolf Boy: You're one of my favourite reviewers! Did you know that! I always look forward to your reviews! I have to thank you so much for reviewer for every one of my chapters and my gundam seed story, 'Love Founded.'
white-rosekiss: Yes he did have to push her into the pool. XD! Or else, he will be too OOC with all those romance in him. Thanks, I'm glad that you like this chapter!
Saki-16: THANK YOU! But I don't think I will be writing lemons, in this story. It would be very bad if I do, and I don't think I'm ready for those kinds yet, sorry. But thanks for your review!
pei-chan: Wow, you actually guessed that Sakura would be the one that's surrendering. Most people thought it was going to be Sasuke! Go you!
raven: Thank you for your reviews. I'll try to update soon, but I'm planning to continue this fic. Like I said it will be probably end in somewhat chaper 28-30. Because problemsare going to arise soon. Hope you're okay with that.
animEvivvErz: Thank you so much. I mean literally! Because somebody told me where I wrote wrong in the story. Most of the time people just says oh you have grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes. Thank you so much for telling me that! And wow, you read it till 6:01 am! I know a lot of people like my story because its good but I didn't think it was that good. Thanks again! I loved your review! I'll try to correct my mistakes.
sum3thing: Thanks! I always try to not make people too OOC. I just don't like a OOC Sasuke. XD!
jAi0rOKu : Thanks a lot! for the rating info! And yeah, I sort of had the neckless in mind since earlier chapters. Don't worry, I won't get my fic deleted, because I've seen another fic that is also rated T but swears a heck more than mine. And plus I've put a warning for language in my summery. If I rate this fic an M, people will think thereare lemons in this fic but Thanks for your concern!
kayla: aww...sniff...sniff...you want me to end my story? JUST KIDDING! Lol, I understant what your trying to say and I have to say your right. If I stop in chapt 16, it would be a good ending since I'm usually bad at endings. But other people want me to continue and I have already planned to write this fic to at least chap. 30, at thevery start. I can't let those people down and I can'tlet you down! Don't worry, I'll try my best to make this fic as best as possible. More conflicts to come and moreromance too! Thanks for your review! I'm really glad you liked it!
Well that's all the reviews. If you can't find your names in this page then, look harder because I combined some reviews together and answered them into one comment. Or you just didn't review for my last chapter, because I only answered the ones that are in chapter 16. Hope I haven't missed anybodies. If I did, please tell me!Wow, I said a lot ofthank you's in this chap.Well cyah! I'll update as soon as I can.
