(responding to question-type reviews)
DSK said, "Do I really need to tell you to keep up the good work or that Kyoshi is my Fav avatar because of you."
Me: Yes, you have to tell me. I'm not a mind-reader, you know. 8)
Deamon Fire said, "Is Kyoshi on something?"
Me: Well... she is partial to Ginseng Tea... it has certain very interesting side effects. XD However; seriously, just think of her as the sort who has a very blunt way of speaking whatever's on her mind. I thought it would be fun to give the Incarnations very different personalities.
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To everyone who reviewed, thank you thank you. 8) Also, I would appreciate it if you let me know which chapter least amused you or not at all.
Yes, you read that right. I want to know which chapter is the least funny or not at all for you. You don't have to explain why; just point out which one. And don't worry - my ego is pretty tough or flexible. Have to be if I want to survive in the hospitality industry.
As they say, one of the best ways for a writer to improve is to know where improvement is needed. I'll start off: What I don't like the most is this one, the 5th. Yeah, this one gave me a lot of trouble. Edited it so many times I'm sick of it. Still, here's hoping it will tickle your funny bone even slightly.
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Avatar Kyoshi - bold text
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Female Airbender Avatar - underlined
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Summary: What the Incarnates thought of Jun, the Bounty Hunter.
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Oh no. It will be so much harder for Aang and his friends with that bounty hunter helping Zuko track them.
... True, but it should encourage Aang to be more on his toes.
(slowly) I agree.
? (stares aghast at the two male Avatars) ... Don't tell me you two like her!
(defensively) Well, you said you like Zuko.
(stumped) ... Kyoshi, help me out here-
(looks contemplative)
? Oh no, not you too!
(is disturbed) Huh?
(is in despair)
(is smirking)
(is curious) You are also intrigued by the bounty hunter, Kyoshi?
Hmm? Oh. I was just wondering if she uses that whip for anything else.
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