well, we're under construction again, i cant delete this story 'cause a fellow author, who as changed her name more times than in can count... okay so i can count but anyway... any continual readers i would appreciate some tips. i just have to make this story better so i get more readers... sigh oh well, tell me what you think of the re-rewrite

This is the story of a once thought ordinary girl…

It was pretty much a normal day in the life of a girl named Kristi, except when she got up, she tripped on a pile of laundry and finally decided she would have to clean her room. after rolling her eyes and cursing quietly at the floor, (quietly because her parents didn't think she swore at all, there's a long story behind that...)She got up and fed her animals like always, three dogs, acat and two horses, one of which loved attention and promptly licked her."eww, Aligross!" she yelped wipeing the horse slobber off on the offending horse.Afterwards she headed of to be on her way to school, on one long ass40 minute ride, most of it she slept so it wasnt so bad.once at school sheslowly managed to dredge through her first half of the day until lunch. You know what i mean,those uber dull classes in the beggining of the day when your still not really awake and aware. She was at least thankfull it was second semester and she no longer had gym to contend with. She was happy to see her friends; they were few of the only people who didn't make fun of her. As the strange girl who everybody scoffed at in her earlier days, she previosly had no real friends. She was , at her old school only a couple years ago, as unpopular as they got. Often finding gum in her hair and once getting hit with a halffull soda can in middle school, her kind and fragile psycie snapped and she would cry, which only led to more teasing. She was thankfull to her parents for moving, because now she did have friends, finally.

At the table they were on an old standby topic, their favorite manga characters.more specificly thier favorite manga guys. Her friends had introduced her to the wonderful world of manga and she felt she could finally fit in somewhere." Oh I like that Sesshomaru, he's just so, so, so hot! I wish I could meet the real Sesshomaru, not that he is real. But still…" the rather imaginative girl thought stareing blankly into space, drool beginning to pool in her cheek.

" Hey are you awake? Is any one there"

"who what? Oh sorry" she grinned at them sheepishly.

"there she goes off in lala land again. I think your getting a little obsessed there."

" And this coming from a girl who just short of worships some evil doctor dude" she said in retaliation to her friend across the table. they were right though. She had been thinking about her dreamboat wonderman even more than usual recently. She figured it was anxiety from the fact the end of the year was coming, and being a senior, would soon graduate. Her whole life was school, so it was a menacing and exciting thought to her. The rest of the day passed quickly,and as always and she made her way home half falling asleep on the bus. trudging along the more than half a mile to her house, greeting her insainly happy dogs when she got there. Fourtuantly for her, she had no homework that day, hooray for not having math!Once settled she did her chores until her parents got home.( you know that mundain crud like vacuum and dishes, eck!) Then spent some time watchingher favorite shows on tv with her parents, which consisted often of csi and reality shows. And when they were well and over, went to bed and tried to sleep. like i said, a mostly ordinary day, but that night was to be different.


At this same time, ormaybe a little before... a grand stallion of a man,( a/n can you tell i like him?)was trying to make sense of something. "What was that? Who was that woman in my dream? Why does she keep appearing to me?"staring up at the stars the man wondered, "I only see here on the dream plain. Perhaps if I sleep again this night, I will see her again, and maybe this time get some answers" this was a little troubling on him because he was not used to sleeping this much. As a matter of fact, he rarly slept at all, but he just had to know. Although he was feeling very refreshed, his companions were curious why their lord had taken to sleeping so often. The man took to wandering and pacing, it was eating him up, this image kept appearing in his dreams. An image of this same human woman, it even began to appear in the daytime, but this night he would find out more about this person, this night he would get answers he just knew it.
Kristi's sleep brought her to a foreign dreamland. She felt very conscious in this world, despite the fact she was clearly not awake. She walked aimlessly through this world covered in a dark fog. There was nothing here, yet. Then she saw a figure in the distance. She squinted to try to get a better look at the dark figure, she just couldn't see it any better.

"Hello? Is any one there" the answer she got back surprised her, it was in Japanese! Why would she hear japanese in her dream? She didn't speak it, she was American, she lived inWashington state!"Umm, say again? I can't understand you" she prodded. The figure, who was the man from earlier,only heard, "understand", and some howknew that he had to keep talking for their languages to match. he wasn't sure why though.

"Who are you, what is your name?" he spoke through the darkness, he could see her more clearly than she him. She could understand only 'who', 'you' and 'name'.

" My name is Kri," she stopped, thought about the name she uses in her fantasies and stories,then continued. " K.C. my name is K.C." she didn't know why she used her charactor name, but if somehow felt right. Her image became very much more clear to himthan it had been before.

"I see…you are a woman right, I cannot tell, it isdark." He ended, hoping not to offend her for some reason.

"Yes that's right" they could understand each other a lot more now. It was starting to get more thana little bizzare

"You are human too, yes?"

"Mm hmm who are you? You haven't told me your name yet guy, you are a guy, uhhh man?"

"Oh... yes I am. My name is Sesshomaru." Excitement burned through her, was this for real? Could this be him?for really really real?

"I'm a…"

"dog demon!" she shoutedbefore he could finish,still struggling to contain herself. a huge, "nananananana" grin appeared on her face as she though back to her friends.

All righty! That's just the end of a wittle part! Heres some of my rejected entry What NOT to Say to Sesshomaru. ohhhh and I don't own anyone from inuyasha either! So no suing me! Only KC and here friends.

You know… you look like your brother!

Why don't you have cute pointy ears?

Ooooohh your fluffy!

Here puppy, here boy!

Fetch!

Sit, ok now roll over!

Bad doggy BAD boy!

Where's your leash little fella?

Who' a cuty wooty? He is! he is!

Ooooh a puppy!