Before I continue the story, I noticed that I keep switching perspective between whether the girls are controlling the character and having the character thoughts played out, and mostly I'm heading towards the writing the story through their eyes. So from now on, I'll be writing this story as a reaction then playing, not only to simplified having actions played out, but also now writing it as the girls watching a movie through their eyes. Hopefully this will also help making writing easier as I don't have to type actions performed as controller and instead, performed actions as the game made it to look. Maybe I'll be able to extend on what RWBY are feeling.