Chapter 6: Shadow Island Arc 1 Part 2

Yo guys Geo here and welcome back to the United where the Shadow Island Arc continues strong even though this is a small chapter it's something after what's been going on with the website the last few days anywho this chapter will introduce a few New alternate characters besides the Louds and this chapter even contains a music number that I clearly do not own in anyway so without further ado here ya go and I hope you all enjoy!

Disclaimer: I do Not own the Song featured in this chapter.


"Oh crap, oh crap, oh crap! LINCOLN!"

Magdalena exclaimed as she picked up Geo's crystal ball and went to find Geo only to see him...Dressed as a Pirate while dancing with the Strawhat Casagrandes.


"Do what you want, 'cause a pirate is free,

You are a pirate!

Yar har, fiddle di dee,

Being a pirate is all right with me,

Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free,

You are a pirate!

Yo Ho, ahoy and avast,

Being a pirate is really badass!

Hang the black flag at the end of the mast!

You are a pirate!

You are a pirate! - Yay!

We've got us a map, (a map!)

To lead us to a hidden box,

That's all locked up with locks! (with locks!)

And buried deep away!

We'll dig up the box, (the box!)

We know it's full of precious booty!

Burst open the locks!

And then we'll say hooray!

Yar har, fiddle di dee,

Being a pirate is all right with me!

Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free,

You are a pirate!

Yo Ho, ahoy and avast,

Being a Pirate is really badass!

Hang the black flag

At the end of the mast!

You are a pirate!

Hahaha!

We're sailing away (set sail!),

Adventure awaits on every shore!

We set sail and explore (ya-har!)

And run and jump all day (Yay!)

We float on our boat (the boat!)

Until it's time to drop the anchor,

Then hang up our coats (aye-aye!)

Until we sail again!

Yar har, fiddle di dee,

Being a pirate is all right with me!

Do what you want 'cause a pirate is free,

You are a pirate!

[spoken:]

Yar har, wind at your back, lads,

Wherever you go!

Blue sky above and blue ocean below,

You are a pirate!

You are a pirate!

[spoken:] You are a pirate! Ya gobshite!"


"GEO!" She screamed while smacking him

"OW...Oh...Uhhhhh this is Normal...for me" He said defensively as the Casagrandes cleared out leaving the two alone."

Never mind that we have a Problem!" she exclaimed as he rolled his eyes.

"For the Last Time I didn't stick my dick in the Mayonnaise!" he said crossing his arms defensively.

"No no…wait, you did what?!" Magdalena spoke utterly confused about what he was talking about.

"Nothing so what's up?" he said instantly As she showed him the Crystal ball, making him freeze up. "Shit!"


*Shadow Island*


"LINCOLN!" Lori screamed In Pain as her dome was destroyed and she was sent flying back.

"OHOHOHOHOHOHO!"

"You need a new laugh." She groaned with a glare and a smirk As The Egg dragoon grabbed her.

"Any Last words?" Luan Robotnik sneered with a smirk on her face. "Yeah, I do." Lori groaned with a grin creeping on her face As she freed her One good Arm and slammed it on the Machines Exterior,causing it to go haywire as a large pillar spawned from under her egg mobile.

"What the hell?!" She exclaimed as she was sent rocketing into the sky and Lori fell to the ground tired but not willing to give up.

*Lincoln*


"Ow, my freaking head." He groaned while rubbing his forehead which had a cut on it and Was still bleeding, despite having some stitches, surprising him.

"Where am I?" He muttered weakly as he saw the Lori from before sitting across from him.

"So you're awake?" She growled.

"Who're you supposed to be?" He asked with a raised eyebrow As she started to grow And aimed her arm cannon at him, making him gulp In fear When she got slapped. "Put that trigger finger down."

Succubus Leni growled with glowing eyes. "Tch Whatever" Lori scoffed unphased by Leni's glowing eyes until the Succubus grabbed her by the throat. "O-Ok! Ok!" She stammered Before she was Onto the floor as she walked over to Lincoln and gently patted his head Making him Blush at her cleavage Which was dangling in front of his face making his nose bleed.

"Hey you Dick Sucking Whore we need you on the upper deck!" A Lynn with a Long spike tail with Fiery red hair and horns on her head growled.

"Hey, I am not a whore!" she snapped at the Koopa Girl who rolled her eyes. "Oh gee, it's almost like I don't believe you." She said sarcastically as she noticed Lincoln having a confused look on his face.

"Can someone tell me where I am!" he exclaimed as he saw the lynn pull out a pineapple.

"You're aboard the Egg Carrier Brat" the Lynn spoke gruffly while munching on said pineapple…rough skin and all.

"Egg...Carrier?" He said weakly As he noticed the Lori was still aiming her arm at him Menacingly and very eagerly.

"Enough Lori the Boss Wants him Alive!" A Ronnie Anne said with Red eyes and Jet black hair with Red Streaks going down the sides while glaring at her.

"Ugh Fine!" She said before teleporting away.

"Whats her deal?" lincoln asked in a calmer tone.

"She hasn't been the same since Dr Wily Killed her Brother" The Ronnie said, shaking her head.

"Wait, what?" Lincoln said with wide eyes And looked up at her As she kept staring into his eyes Making him Look down uneasily from her gaze As she slowly walked away And left him alone. 'Where are you Lori?' he thought as he felt the Egg Carrier beginning to descend.


*Geo*

"What do we do?!" Magdalena exclaimed in a Panic with wide eyes and fear in her tone as placed a hand on her shoulder.

"Calm down Leni I'll just warp down and get them" He said before snapping his fingers and vanishing from sight, prompting Magdalena to sigh until he reappeared, covered in burns and smelling like ashes. "…Ok we may have a sliiiiiight problem." He coughed. "I can't enter the Barrier"

"WAIT WHAT!?" Magdalena screamed

"The Barrier seems to have been designed to prevent me from Getting inside it" he said simply with a shrug.

"We need to do something Geo!" She told him in a panic

"I know!...Give me the crystal ball" He ordered As she did so Geo peered into it and Saw everything that was going on.

"Damn it! How'd they make a Barrier that Blocked me?" He growled before he raised his eyes.

"...He's Back" he said under his breath.

"What?" She asked.

"Nothing Look Call an Emergency Meeting Now! We need all hands on Deck!" He ordered as she gave a nod and started to leave.


*Back with Lori Elric*


"Where are those whores!" She growled with pure anger As she punched through trees and boulders that stood in her way With her One good Arm.

"When I get my hands on them, I'm gonna wring their necks!"

She growled as she looked at her Now Missing Automail Arm and sighed before continuing to run through the forest To find Lincoln Unaware she was being followed.

"Dammit if I was an Evil Bitch where would I be?" She wondered to herself bitterly Until.

*EXPLODE!*

"What the hell?!" She exclaimed as she saw an explosion off in the distance and found herself wrapped in vines and hanging upside down. "Well well well" She heard as a Lola with green skin and red hair sitting on a Massive vine came down.

"Piss off!" Lori growled

"Relax Honey I'm here to Help you. The Trees on this Island have told me that they're holding your brother on that Ship" She said pointing to the Egg Carrier far above them.

"Lincoln" Lori spoke in a Worried Tone. "Wait, how did you get here?" She asked the alternate version of her Sister.

"...We came here for Lincoln, our 'boss' wanted him. She responded in a Grave tone as Lori raised an eyebrow. "And who is this 'boss'?" She asked her.

"...I ...I can't tell you" Lola responded.

"Can't or won't?"

"I can't…truthfully even we don't know their true identity."

She sighed while setting Lori down. "Let's go see and have no time to waste!" Lola told her As they saw the ship slowly descend into a deep artificial trench.

The two approached the Large Trench and saw it was really a large hangar for the battleship

"So that's where he is?" Lori muttered as Lola gave a Nod. "Yeah he's in there" She responded as she noticed Lori's frown.

"What?"

"How'd you get wrapped up with these Guys anyway?" she asked as The Lola gave a sigh. "My friend she was poisoned by a Man who she believed loved her and had her best interests but he didn't and the boss promised He'd cure her if we brought him Lincoln" she said as Lori frowned.

"I'm sorry"

"Don't be let's go" she spoke as the two were about to head down into the Trench but they found themselves frozen in place by some weird energy.

"What the hell?" Lori growled as a Lisa with white hair and wearing a white jacket and skirt along with greyish balck and light blue boots as well as white gloves with odd symbols in the palms floated downward towards them with her hand outstretched and glowing a blue energy.

"How Predictable out of all the Lola's I knew you were the first to betray our cause!" The Lisa exclaimed with a smirk as the Ronnie anne from before appeared next to her.

"Lisa take the Traitor to the prison hold, I'll deal with the cripple" she spoke as Lisa dropped Lori and teleported away with Lola in hand.

Lori gave Ronnie a scowl as the girl crossed her arms as she charged her fist drawn back but Ronnie frowned and pulled out a yellow jewel.

"Chaos Control!" Ronnie shouted as she slowed the time flow around Lori causing her to move at a snail's pace as Ronnie casually walked behind the Eldest Elric and delivered a Strong Roundhouse Kick to the back of her head knocking her out unconscious.

Ronnie pulled out a walkie Talkie and spoke into it. "This is Ronalda Let the boss know we have another one"


Man Lori Elric cannot catch a break can she? anyway guys what's gonna happen next? what caused that explosion? where did Luan Robotnik fly off too? how is geo gonna save the day? why am I asking YOU all these questions!? also there were a few references in this chapter see if you can spot them all and see if you can guess which character was which this go around but anyways Next Time is when the Arc really begins to pick up as the heroes start to loose hope but luckily backup arrives!

but before I end this chapter I wanna announce something major because I am accepting Heroic Louds now! as a sequel to my evil louds as for the rules simple I Need heroic versions of either the Loud sisters or one of their friends but no Lincolns are allowed but you can submit heroic versions of Rita and Lynn sr if you all want too i'll be picking out the 7 best choices and whomever I pick will show up in the Penultimate chapter of Arc 1 so submit away and i'll only be accepting Suggestions via Reviews and PM's however I'll only be accepting 5 PM Suggestions you can submit your heroes in the reviews as many times as you want.