Authoress's Note: Hey, sorry for getting your hopes up. This is just a filler chapter so I can go back and make corrections to the first chapter without having to delete the entire story and re-post it. Mostly it's just a few minor corrections, such as trying to weed out unnecessary formal nouns (such as saying Skinner over and over again). Also, I noticed a few parts of dialogue from Tom that seemed too formal for a drunk American, so I'm editing that.
Thank you to those who have reviewed so far. It really means a lot and I hope it will help spur me along to continuing to write. That's right; I haven't actually started writing the second chapter yet. I've got a note-sheet with some ideas of what I want to happen and I've had the whole thing going through my head for about a month now. Unfortunately, at the moment college is starting to catch up with me. As the year is winding down I'm being forced to actually do homework every night instead of messing around or writing my story. What has the world come to?
Interestingly enough, even though I originally said that the fic would be based solely on the movie and not on any of the characters' respective novels I'm currently reading Stoker's Dracula for my literature class. Mina's a bit different at the moment… But, then again, she's still normal and doesn't know of vampires as of yet. Consequently I might unconsciously work in something from Dracula, but I swear it won't be assumed that any of you have read the book, and so anything I do add will be explained, or I might include a footnote about where I got my info. Then again, if I contradict anything from Dracula, keep in mind that I started this fic and had the idea in mind for it before I read the book. I suppose I should just end this rambling now and get back to revising and possibly start on the next chapter… Well, until next time!
Oh, one last thing, PLEASE I'm looking for some advice for Nemo. If you have any insights on how an interaction between him and Skinner would go, it'd be very helpful. If his portrayal in the first chapter is any indication, I honestly have no idea how "chummy" he would get around the league, and Skinner in particular. Thanks again!