Im sorry it took so long for me to update my story, but I just feel like it is…umm how do I say this…….THE WORST STORY IN THE WHOLE FRICKEN UNIVERSE!

Sorry bout that, anyways here is the next chapter, read it if you want and please if you read it, REVIEW IT.

And the reason I sound crabby is because I have gotten a couple of reveiws with falmes in them. So here we go:

BbyChick- Im so sorry did you not like my story? Well heres what you do if you don't like how I write it

don't read the story!

IF you think you can YOU write a better version

or you could just keep your stupid comments to your self

though I do appritiate the constuctive critisism I don't like the way YOU wrote it.

Then:

Kirusuchinu-

YAY I AM SOOOOOO HAPPY FOR YOU AND YOUR ….fiance? I think that is how you spell it? Well good luck!

So please NO flames (Kirusuchinu you didn't falme me I just wanted to say congrats!)

Chapter 16

Pain and Suffering

"Ahhhhhh!" Pain full screaming could be hard through out the whole science complex from a small room on the very far side.

Soldiers neer by cringed after every scream wondering what was happening in the room. Some…didn't even want to know.

"AHHHHHHH!" This time the scream was so high pitched (well for a male's voice) that the whole building shook!

Vegeta hit the corner of the room bleeding everwhere. Never had he felt so weak. He wipped the swear off his forehead and struggled to stand.

"Oh Vegeta that isnt smart. Do you want to die?" Shinklow stalked over to him from the other side of the room and raised his weapon. It looked like a iron pitch fork but with only 2 spikes.

Shinklow slamed the sharp edges into Vegeta's side and laughed cruely. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Vegeta screamed yet again in pain and fell back to the ground clutching his stomach for dear life.

"Wa….what..does that….do to..to me?" Vegeta managed to ask while squinting open one eye.

"Why Vegeta I thought you could tell by all your pain. No? Well every time I hit you with this it drains half of the energy you have and since you had little to start out with it isnt taking your Ki energy anymore." Shinklow got down on his knees and got into Vegeta's Face. "Do you know what it is taking from you?" Shinklow asked him while draggind his razor sharp nails across his face.

Vegeta slowly shook his head and coughed up a large amount of blood all over the floor.

Shinklow frowned at the site of blood and stood up. "Vegeta Vegeta Vegeta So naïve. You don't dserve your wonderfully briliant mate." Rage passed his eyes and he hit Vegeta again. "EAAAAAAAHHH!" Vegeta fell backwards onto the iron floor barly containing his consusness. He had to find Bulma and get out of here.

"Every time I stab YOU, I take your LIFE energy!FOOL! You are inches from your death!" He raised the weapon again loving the site of the saiyian squirming.

"NEVER DID I SAY YOU COULD IMPREGNATE HER! NEVER! When I placed you in the room did I EVER SAY YOU TWO COULD HAVE SEX!" Shiunklow stabed Vegeta twice who upon contact passed out from the pain. Blood was leaking every where and Shinklow wasn't even satisfied.

He grabbed his wrist and hit a button. The wall behind him lifted and the room was enlarged and was filled with a HUGE space ship.

He went to the wall by the door and hit the intercom button. "Bring the woman to me now!" He braked and walked back to the man on the floor. He still held his energy fork thing and turned to the door when the soldeirs arrived.

"PUT ME DOWN! WHERES VEGETA! " Bulma was thrown to the ground in front of Shinklow and the soldeirs left the room.

"OWWWW!" Bulma rubbed her ass and looked up at Shinklow. She glarred at him then noticed a body laying next to him along with tons of blood.

"no. No. NOOOOO!" Bulma screamed and climbed over to Vegeta she sat next to him and rubbed his face gently crying while she did so.

"WHY?" She she put her face in his chest and sobbed while his blood coverd her face and clothes.

"My dear Sweet heart he deserved every ounce of his torture." Shinklow said roughly and grabbed Bulma by the hair and lifted her up.

"Stop no leave us alone! Ouch!" Bulma was pulled up into his face and was forced to look at his huge ugly face.

"Bulma when I put you in a room did I say you 2 could have sex?" Shinklow asked nicely while slowly moving towards the ship with

"What?"Bulma gulped and darred a glance down at his weapon. "no, No you didn't she3 blinked back some of her tears and looked into his eyes.

"Then who the HELL TOLD YOU YOU COULD?" Shinklow screamed and threw her to the ground by the ship back turned the the fallen Saiyian and stabbed Bulma Roughly in the Arm.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Bulma Screamed in such pain the shattered almost all the glass in the room. She grabbed her arm in Pain and curled into a ball. She fearfully starred up at the monster above her. He had killed Vegeta she knew it and now she was alone. There was no hope for her.

"You Bitch you are mine Now!" Shinklow raised the weapon again ready to stab.

She screamed again. Not wanting to feel the pain again When Suddenly-

"Bu…..Bulma?" Two dark eyes painfully slid open.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOh

That was a sweet chapter!

Reveiws please and I shall try not to take so long updating again.

BlondeVeo2