I Surrender

Chapter 2 Deceived

Sorry its short... but I have alot more chapters ready to be created... thank you TheEvilAshleyness for the idea! cliffy ahead...maybe
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Last time:

Rin bolted up and hugged Sesshomaru tightly. Afraid that he'll only be a dream and will be taken away. He returned the hug just as tight. He too afraid that she will disappear again. This time for good though

"/My everything, I surrender all to you/" said Rin

As quickly as their hug, Sesshomaru captured Rin's lips with his. Giving her the kiss of true undying love… which she lovingly returned it.


This time:

They sat there for hours, just holding each other. But just as soon as Sesshomaru was feeling complete, he felt Rin go limp in his arms…

'Rin…' he looked at her, her eyes were closed and he could barely hear her breathing.

'Rin! Rin wake up!' he hook her gently. 'No! I just got you back! Don't you lave me again!'

'Sesshomaru?' she whispered she opened her eyes., andsaw him holding her body close to his. 'No! No, he kissed me! It was his kiss! His true kiss!'

She saw him lean down an kiss her. She was thrown back into her body.

He heard her gasp for air, 'Sesshomaru…'

'Rin! What's wrong! What happened?'

'I… don't … know…'

'Rin…'

'I …can't …feel you…' she went limp again.

'Rin! No Rin!'

Again she saw him hovering over her body.

"…But…but… wasn't that… the kiss?"

'NO!' he howled.

'Wasn't that enough?' both Sesshomaru and Rin yelled.

'Why can't I be with him!' she cried.

'Why won't you let her stay!' he growled and he hit the ground and attacked the trees with his whip.

"…Sesshomaru…" she whispered softly.

He straightened up, '...Rin?' he looked directly at her, not her body, but her soul.

'It wasn't enough…'

'Rin?'

'You couldn't bring me back…'

'No… but I love you…'

Tears fell form her eyes…

'Rin don't cry…please'

'But I can't get back to you…'

Then she vanished.

He bowed his head, 'Rin…' he then lifted it to the sky and let out a howl of pain, loss sorrow, anger and sadness. Everything went into that cry from his shattered heart.

Rin heard that cry and it ripped threw her.

"No… No! I will not leave!" Again she slammed into her body. Not wasting any time she help onto Sesshomaru with all her strength from her body, and held onto his soul with hers.

'Rin?'

'Don't let me go! What ever you do, what ever happened, you must not let… me… go!'

But she cold feel the soul gathers pull at her, telling her to come.

"No!" she screamed in her mind.

He felt her grip on him loosen, 'Rin don't let go! Hold onto me!'

'I can't feel you…' their grips tightened.

"I cant and I wont LET GO!" but it was pulling her back, dragging her to the other world. Their grip was too strong. A voice was calling to her.

"Rin… Rin… let him go…"

"Never!" she screamed.

"You must… he cant save you…"

"What! Why?"

"He still wont choose to forget…"

"Forget what?"

"What happened to his father… when he fell for a human…"

"No…"

That's when her world went black…

TBC…