here's a new chapter! I reread this chap., and I'm amazed at how bad I wrote it! o well, I'll just leave it in my original writing...hope you still like it even though my writing is still horrible!
Chap. 14
I got up to my bunk and collapsed onto it. Mush came over to where I was and sat down next to me.
"Tired?" He asked me.
I nodded, but then decided I should tell him what was going on. "Mush? You know how you'se don't want me ta go? What if you could go wit me?"
"Of course I would! I told ya dat I would do anything I could just ta stay wit ya." He said, "How is dat possible, though?"
"I knows a way ta get home, someone can help me out."
"If we go, though, can we come back?"
"You can…"
"So I can go, and come back without ya, or not go, and never have you."
I just nodded my head sadly. "I'll understand if ya don't wanna go and leave everything you'se used ta."
He sat there for a few minutes, and when I couldn't stand it anymore, I went to walk away. He grabbed my arm and pulled me into a long kiss.
We slowly pulled apart and I whispered, "Should I take dat as a 'yes'?"
We both went hand in hand over to the others who were talking. I asked Dolly, Three, and Copper (who had gotten back from her date) to come talk with me privately. We went over to the washroom where no one else was.
"Kloppman said dat we could go home anytime dat we want." They were very excited and all started to talk at once. "Dere's one thing, though," I sighed, "if we go, we can't ever come back. We'se can bring 5 people back wit us, which is good, right?"
"It's bittersweet, ain't it?" Copper said.
"What about the people we bring back wit us? What happens ta dem?" Asked Dolly, probably thinking about David.
"They can choose ta either stay wit us, or go back home and never see us again." I said, "Mush has decided to come back wit me already, and all of you can choose one person ta bring back wit you. We also get ta bring one more person, since there is only 4 of us."
In the end, they all agreed to come back with me, and Dolly said she would ask David, and Copper was going to ask Spot. Three said she would think about asking Jack, because she was still kind of mad at him about Sarah. I figured she would end up asking him, because of what he was going to say to her tomorrow.
kind of an abrupt place to stop but... it's almost done, I swear! I might put up a new chap. sometime next week! Just stick w/ me for a little bit more!
AND REVIEW! (o yes, please!)
-Sweets
