Ok this chapter gets a lot juicier in the action dpt. hope you enjoy it
It has been expanded a little bit.
One thing I have to explain. In this story I'm using the premise that though and concience may indeed transcend space & time as is depicted in the movie the butterfly effect, because I really want to try to bring Star Wars from fiction into our reality in this story
For those that have seen that movie they probably know what I'm talking about, if you have not seen that movie you should, its kind of creepy, but it is sort of an eye opener as well.
Well that's it hope you enjoy it, until the next update...
Please, please review and drop a line or 2.
It's the only way I know whether its worth to continue with this project or delete it from the website and forget the whole thing.
Chapter 9: Twilight
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant, Imperial Palace
Jacen had just arrived from his away mission in Tattoine as he walked down the main hall he ran into his cousins Obi Wan and Padme SkyWalker. "Well, if it isn't my favorite cousins, how you two doing?"
They responded in unison "Fine!"
"Specially you Padme, I swear you get more beautiful each time I see you after each leave"
"Thank you Jacen!"
"So how's your training going?"
"Its going quite well actually."
"I can't wait to see those hard earned skills to the test, so how about a practice lightsaber match latter on?"
"With you?"
"Why not, you are not afraid are you?"
"No I'm not, none of us are!"
"Ok then its set." Padme added "You know Jacen that anger is gonna eat you whole someday."
"I know that you don't understand this now, but anger can help you survive Padme, if you only knew..."
He reached for her face & Obi Wan cut in "We should go!"
"Of course, remember our practice."
Jacen continued to his chamber to rest and left his cousins alone. Padme went on "We are loosing him, aren't we?"
"No, we've lost him already!"
"Maybe we should tell Anakin."
"Tell him what? That his big brother has a chip on his shoulder the size of a small moon? We got nothing my little sister! The dark side clouds everything, we are on our own."
"Don't call me little Ben! I'm 19 years old already!"
"Sorry! Old habit, come on."
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
The device went active and the stormtroopers guarding it immediately took defensive positions just in case, a holotransmission came through "Attention Yavin 4 station, we are under attack by unknown hostiles, be advised!"
"Yavin 4 station here, we read you what do you need!"
"We are holding our own for now, but we might need more shield generators and defense emplacements once this is over."
Jaina went to the comm. room "I want to talk to Tenel Ka!"
"Yes milady."
Tenel Ka showed on the holoprojection and Jaina asked her "Do you need reinforcements?"
"Not at the moment Jaina, but you need to be in full alert on your side, we don't know if they might be able to dial in to your device, even though the devices on their own don't have the enough power, we must not take any chances!"
"Agreed and Tenel Ka, may the force be with you!"
"We'll talk later Off-Galaxy team signing out."
With that the transmission ended and the device turned off again.
Jaina once again shouted her commands "You heard her people, get moving!"
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Planet SGD: PXZ-698
The death-gliders were swooping from all directions trying to lock on to the power source of each of the shield generators as they did the stormtroopers fired volley after volley of blaster bolts, damaging some and seriously disabling others. All of a sudden one death-glider got off a lucky shot and smashed one generator to smithereens, as he did a stormtrooper fired a well placed blaster bolt into the left wing of the glider. As it did it tore it off completely. The wounded glider spun out of control and smashed into the remaining force field, debris from it rained down on the encampment. Tenel Ka shouted "Everybody watch out!"
"Milady the cannon is ready!"
"And not a moment too soon, bring it to full power and fire on that ship!"
"Aye!"
The portable turbolaser cannon went to full power and fired in anger a single shot at the Ha'Tak in orbit above. The blast smashed through the shields as if they were not there and tore off a large section of the lower side of the ship. immediately the Ha'Tak nearly lost all power only moving forward by its momentum.
"The officer at the sensor array reported "The ship appears to be disabled milady!"
"Good! Target the remaining fighters, I want them out of my sky!"
"Yes milady!"
As the cannon took aim at the remaining death-gliders explosions burst out around them, Tenel Ka went on shouting again " They have landed ground troops, they are attacking! Quick set a perimeter around the unshielded area."
Tenel Ka grabbed her lightsaber turned it on and went to meet the oncoming Jaffa troops like a cheetah, evading staff-weapon's blasts as she quickly advanced towards them. As soon as she was close enough she sliced off the front end of a staff-weapon and immediately sliced the Jaffa carrying it in two. Then she began to slice and dice Jaffa left and right. Until finally one remaining young Jaffa dropped his staff-weapon and surrendered
Tenel Ka addressed the Jaffa "Good boy! You made a wise choice today, even though you don't understand a word I'm saying."
The officer at the sensor array gave a final report. "The ship that was attacking still has life support and artificial gravity, but it can't go anywhere and we have not detected any transmissions so their communications array must be down as well."
"Good, but they won't stay like that for long, so dial out and request EVA suits and personal boosters we need to go up there and secure that ship."
"Aye we are on it, milady!"
Location: Milky Way galaxy
Earth, Colorado U.S, Cheyenne Mountain Complex, SGC.
Carter knocked at O'Neal's office "May I come in, General?"
"Carter, Unless Superman himself swoops down or Buck Rogers comes through the StarGate at this point I'd rather not be disturbed!"
"Yes Sir, Sorry!"
"Come in Carter, I'm the one who's sorry!"
"Though day, Huh?"
"I told you guys that I'd much rather be who sticks it to the man than to be the man. And since I became the man I've been given the stick so many times I feel like a pincushion sometimes. How the hell did Hammond handle all this?"
"I guess one day at a time sir!"
"Yeah, Well for now this information about the newcomers stays here until we have something better to relay to Washington."
"We could dial the planet and try to introduce ourselves to find out what their intentions are."
"You are not suggesting we just waltz in there, right?"
"No sir, we dial in. Send a transmission stating our intentions followed by sending a MALP to check out the surroundings on our own and to find out how they would react to our presence."
"Ok I can go with that, we proceed in 48 hours."
"48 hours?"
"Yes 48 hours Colonel, to be honest your theory sounds more like a migraine than anything else and that is what I have now, so lets take at least a day to take it all in. Got it?"
"Yes sir, 48 hours it is."
"Good!"
"Get some rest sir."
"I will, you too Colonel."
Carter exited O'Neal's office while O'Neal also a little latter on proceeded to his quarters. While trying to wrap around his head Carter's theory and the fact that quite possibly something that people until now had regarded as fiction and a hobby could become to an extent a very tangible and real presence in the galaxy. He felt that whoever this strangers turned out to be they were going to change the lives of not just whatever worlds they came in contact with and the SGC but the lives of everybody in the galaxy and on earth itself!
It has been expanded a little bit.
One thing I have to explain. In this story I'm using the premise that though and concience may indeed transcend space & time as is depicted in the movie the butterfly effect, because I really want to try to bring Star Wars from fiction into our reality in this story
For those that have seen that movie they probably know what I'm talking about, if you have not seen that movie you should, its kind of creepy, but it is sort of an eye opener as well.
Well that's it hope you enjoy it, until the next update...
Please, please review and drop a line or 2.
It's the only way I know whether its worth to continue with this project or delete it from the website and forget the whole thing.
Chapter 9: Twilight
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant, Imperial Palace
Jacen had just arrived from his away mission in Tattoine as he walked down the main hall he ran into his cousins Obi Wan and Padme SkyWalker. "Well, if it isn't my favorite cousins, how you two doing?"
They responded in unison "Fine!"
"Specially you Padme, I swear you get more beautiful each time I see you after each leave"
"Thank you Jacen!"
"So how's your training going?"
"Its going quite well actually."
"I can't wait to see those hard earned skills to the test, so how about a practice lightsaber match latter on?"
"With you?"
"Why not, you are not afraid are you?"
"No I'm not, none of us are!"
"Ok then its set." Padme added "You know Jacen that anger is gonna eat you whole someday."
"I know that you don't understand this now, but anger can help you survive Padme, if you only knew..."
He reached for her face & Obi Wan cut in "We should go!"
"Of course, remember our practice."
Jacen continued to his chamber to rest and left his cousins alone. Padme went on "We are loosing him, aren't we?"
"No, we've lost him already!"
"Maybe we should tell Anakin."
"Tell him what? That his big brother has a chip on his shoulder the size of a small moon? We got nothing my little sister! The dark side clouds everything, we are on our own."
"Don't call me little Ben! I'm 19 years old already!"
"Sorry! Old habit, come on."
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
The device went active and the stormtroopers guarding it immediately took defensive positions just in case, a holotransmission came through "Attention Yavin 4 station, we are under attack by unknown hostiles, be advised!"
"Yavin 4 station here, we read you what do you need!"
"We are holding our own for now, but we might need more shield generators and defense emplacements once this is over."
Jaina went to the comm. room "I want to talk to Tenel Ka!"
"Yes milady."
Tenel Ka showed on the holoprojection and Jaina asked her "Do you need reinforcements?"
"Not at the moment Jaina, but you need to be in full alert on your side, we don't know if they might be able to dial in to your device, even though the devices on their own don't have the enough power, we must not take any chances!"
"Agreed and Tenel Ka, may the force be with you!"
"We'll talk later Off-Galaxy team signing out."
With that the transmission ended and the device turned off again.
Jaina once again shouted her commands "You heard her people, get moving!"
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Planet SGD: PXZ-698
The death-gliders were swooping from all directions trying to lock on to the power source of each of the shield generators as they did the stormtroopers fired volley after volley of blaster bolts, damaging some and seriously disabling others. All of a sudden one death-glider got off a lucky shot and smashed one generator to smithereens, as he did a stormtrooper fired a well placed blaster bolt into the left wing of the glider. As it did it tore it off completely. The wounded glider spun out of control and smashed into the remaining force field, debris from it rained down on the encampment. Tenel Ka shouted "Everybody watch out!"
"Milady the cannon is ready!"
"And not a moment too soon, bring it to full power and fire on that ship!"
"Aye!"
The portable turbolaser cannon went to full power and fired in anger a single shot at the Ha'Tak in orbit above. The blast smashed through the shields as if they were not there and tore off a large section of the lower side of the ship. immediately the Ha'Tak nearly lost all power only moving forward by its momentum.
"The officer at the sensor array reported "The ship appears to be disabled milady!"
"Good! Target the remaining fighters, I want them out of my sky!"
"Yes milady!"
As the cannon took aim at the remaining death-gliders explosions burst out around them, Tenel Ka went on shouting again " They have landed ground troops, they are attacking! Quick set a perimeter around the unshielded area."
Tenel Ka grabbed her lightsaber turned it on and went to meet the oncoming Jaffa troops like a cheetah, evading staff-weapon's blasts as she quickly advanced towards them. As soon as she was close enough she sliced off the front end of a staff-weapon and immediately sliced the Jaffa carrying it in two. Then she began to slice and dice Jaffa left and right. Until finally one remaining young Jaffa dropped his staff-weapon and surrendered
Tenel Ka addressed the Jaffa "Good boy! You made a wise choice today, even though you don't understand a word I'm saying."
The officer at the sensor array gave a final report. "The ship that was attacking still has life support and artificial gravity, but it can't go anywhere and we have not detected any transmissions so their communications array must be down as well."
"Good, but they won't stay like that for long, so dial out and request EVA suits and personal boosters we need to go up there and secure that ship."
"Aye we are on it, milady!"
Location: Milky Way galaxy
Earth, Colorado U.S, Cheyenne Mountain Complex, SGC.
Carter knocked at O'Neal's office "May I come in, General?"
"Carter, Unless Superman himself swoops down or Buck Rogers comes through the StarGate at this point I'd rather not be disturbed!"
"Yes Sir, Sorry!"
"Come in Carter, I'm the one who's sorry!"
"Though day, Huh?"
"I told you guys that I'd much rather be who sticks it to the man than to be the man. And since I became the man I've been given the stick so many times I feel like a pincushion sometimes. How the hell did Hammond handle all this?"
"I guess one day at a time sir!"
"Yeah, Well for now this information about the newcomers stays here until we have something better to relay to Washington."
"We could dial the planet and try to introduce ourselves to find out what their intentions are."
"You are not suggesting we just waltz in there, right?"
"No sir, we dial in. Send a transmission stating our intentions followed by sending a MALP to check out the surroundings on our own and to find out how they would react to our presence."
"Ok I can go with that, we proceed in 48 hours."
"48 hours?"
"Yes 48 hours Colonel, to be honest your theory sounds more like a migraine than anything else and that is what I have now, so lets take at least a day to take it all in. Got it?"
"Yes sir, 48 hours it is."
"Good!"
"Get some rest sir."
"I will, you too Colonel."
Carter exited O'Neal's office while O'Neal also a little latter on proceeded to his quarters. While trying to wrap around his head Carter's theory and the fact that quite possibly something that people until now had regarded as fiction and a hobby could become to an extent a very tangible and real presence in the galaxy. He felt that whoever this strangers turned out to be they were going to change the lives of not just whatever worlds they came in contact with and the SGC but the lives of everybody in the galaxy and on earth itself!