Disclaimer- (I TOTALLY forgot about this! *blushes*) I do not own the Black
Stallion. I do, however, own Magick Thunder, Ice, Slate, Poison, and all
the other characters that you do not recognize.
A/N- I am going to start giving my reviewers their own section!
Stormy Lady- You're right, I do need to slow down. But I have so many ideas for this story running through my head and I can't help it! I will try to slow down, though.
Socks the Leader- I'm glad you love my story! I think this one is my best fanfiction out of them all. I know that in a real horse herd there is only one stallion, but who says that... well, never mind, you'll find out. *sticks tongue out* LoL.
Devil Filly666- thanks for saying that my story deserves ten stars out of five! LoL that makes me proud! I'm really glad that people like my story, I thought it was going to be boring and I was going to get lots of flames when I posted it! Oh well, I guess it's just nervousness or something. LoL
Rainbow paradise- thanks for all the helpful hints. I know everyone is wondering what is up with Lilypad, and how she safely arrived. That comes later, so stay tuned! LoL. And I hope you're right that reviews will soon be pouring in (hint hint LoL)
A/N OK are you all eager to find out what happens next? Good! I've made a decision- whenever I post a new chapter, at least 2 people must review it. So, before chapter 5 is posted, I want there to be a total of 9 reviews. You people rock! I only asked for 6 reviews, and I got 7! I'm so happy! ::huggles to all reviewers!:: Oh, and one more thing- nobody (except me) noticed this, but in the first chapter I say that Ice's eyes are blue, but in the second I said that her liquid brown eyes melted. Obviously, that was a typo. But I can't find where I typed them up, so please just over look that, she has blue eyes! OK here's the story!!!
I looked at her questioningly. She nodded, her mane getting in her eyes.
"So... she's lying?" I asked. She nodded again. She shook her mane away from the scar to show me.
"Wait. If you were in a herd, then...." I began. She cut me off.
"They think I killed my mother. She... she fell off a cliff and snapped her neck, and my father thinks I did it. So I ran away. Dream was with me, she was my best friend in the herd. Her mother didn't accept her, but her older sister raised her so she wouldn't die. Dream never really liked Cloud, but her mother didn't want her, so she was stuck. She ran away with me. There have been many times when we needed to hide, because the herd came looking for us. Slate only protected us because he's conceited and he wants to sire our foals," she said.
"What should I do about Lily?" I asked, not wanting to cause her any pain thinking about her mother.
"Well, I don't think she is to be trusted. I mean, there is no way that she could have made it here. I think..." she looked over at Lily, and sighed. "Magick, she can't be your sister."
"Why not?" I asked. She looked sad.
"Because... I saw your father, when he was captured. He killed a man. They... they put him down, Magick," she whispered softly.
"What?" I asked. I had no idea what she was talking about.
"Oh, sorry. My mother escaped from captivity, so she knows about that. The two-legged creatures can 'put down' animals. They... there's no gentle way to put this...they killed your father. Right as they caught him, because he killed one of them. Therefore, Lilypad could not be your sister. Or you half-sister," she said gently. I was shocked.
"Well then...who was that talking to me?" I asked. She shook her head.
"I have no idea," she replied honestly. I sighed deeply. Lily was watching us, her brown eyes shining, and she looked excited.
"I am not going to let her know that I am not going to go because I don't believe her. I need to tell her something else," I said quickly. Angel quickly whuffed noses with me and walked over to Lily. I followed her, wondering if she had a plan. As soon as I was there she put her nose against mine. I was very surprised.
"Well, are you ready, Magick?" Lilypad asked me. I looked at Angel, who shook her head at Lily.
"He isn't going," she said.
"Why not?! Our father needs him," she said, exasperated. Angel smiled at me.
"He needs to be here when his foal is born," she answered simply.
A/N- I am going to start giving my reviewers their own section!
Stormy Lady- You're right, I do need to slow down. But I have so many ideas for this story running through my head and I can't help it! I will try to slow down, though.
Socks the Leader- I'm glad you love my story! I think this one is my best fanfiction out of them all. I know that in a real horse herd there is only one stallion, but who says that... well, never mind, you'll find out. *sticks tongue out* LoL.
Devil Filly666- thanks for saying that my story deserves ten stars out of five! LoL that makes me proud! I'm really glad that people like my story, I thought it was going to be boring and I was going to get lots of flames when I posted it! Oh well, I guess it's just nervousness or something. LoL
Rainbow paradise- thanks for all the helpful hints. I know everyone is wondering what is up with Lilypad, and how she safely arrived. That comes later, so stay tuned! LoL. And I hope you're right that reviews will soon be pouring in (hint hint LoL)
A/N OK are you all eager to find out what happens next? Good! I've made a decision- whenever I post a new chapter, at least 2 people must review it. So, before chapter 5 is posted, I want there to be a total of 9 reviews. You people rock! I only asked for 6 reviews, and I got 7! I'm so happy! ::huggles to all reviewers!:: Oh, and one more thing- nobody (except me) noticed this, but in the first chapter I say that Ice's eyes are blue, but in the second I said that her liquid brown eyes melted. Obviously, that was a typo. But I can't find where I typed them up, so please just over look that, she has blue eyes! OK here's the story!!!
I looked at her questioningly. She nodded, her mane getting in her eyes.
"So... she's lying?" I asked. She nodded again. She shook her mane away from the scar to show me.
"Wait. If you were in a herd, then...." I began. She cut me off.
"They think I killed my mother. She... she fell off a cliff and snapped her neck, and my father thinks I did it. So I ran away. Dream was with me, she was my best friend in the herd. Her mother didn't accept her, but her older sister raised her so she wouldn't die. Dream never really liked Cloud, but her mother didn't want her, so she was stuck. She ran away with me. There have been many times when we needed to hide, because the herd came looking for us. Slate only protected us because he's conceited and he wants to sire our foals," she said.
"What should I do about Lily?" I asked, not wanting to cause her any pain thinking about her mother.
"Well, I don't think she is to be trusted. I mean, there is no way that she could have made it here. I think..." she looked over at Lily, and sighed. "Magick, she can't be your sister."
"Why not?" I asked. She looked sad.
"Because... I saw your father, when he was captured. He killed a man. They... they put him down, Magick," she whispered softly.
"What?" I asked. I had no idea what she was talking about.
"Oh, sorry. My mother escaped from captivity, so she knows about that. The two-legged creatures can 'put down' animals. They... there's no gentle way to put this...they killed your father. Right as they caught him, because he killed one of them. Therefore, Lilypad could not be your sister. Or you half-sister," she said gently. I was shocked.
"Well then...who was that talking to me?" I asked. She shook her head.
"I have no idea," she replied honestly. I sighed deeply. Lily was watching us, her brown eyes shining, and she looked excited.
"I am not going to let her know that I am not going to go because I don't believe her. I need to tell her something else," I said quickly. Angel quickly whuffed noses with me and walked over to Lily. I followed her, wondering if she had a plan. As soon as I was there she put her nose against mine. I was very surprised.
"Well, are you ready, Magick?" Lilypad asked me. I looked at Angel, who shook her head at Lily.
"He isn't going," she said.
"Why not?! Our father needs him," she said, exasperated. Angel smiled at me.
"He needs to be here when his foal is born," she answered simply.