Disclaimer- (See chapter 4)
Hey this is my fifth chapter! How TOTALLY exciting! LoL. I'm really sorry the last chapter was so short but I really wanted to update and I didn't have much time. ::frowns:: sorry.
Reviewers- Socks the Leader- Still one of my biggest fans, I see ;-) LoL. I know it was a little short but I was eager to review, and I was busy. Sorry!!!!!!!!!!!
Solo Rider- I am not going to tell you what happens with all the siring. LoL. You'll have to wait, like everyone else. ::sticks tongue out:: LoL. This is the best story you've read?? ::faints:: LoL. Ttul!!
Devil Filly666- I will add more detail in this chapter! You'll be relieved to know what their surroundings look like. I picture it, and it's really pretty. Anyway, I'm like, itching to write, so I will!
Writer*of*Stories- When Ice told Magick that she loved him, it doesn't mean that she's IN love with him. It just means that she has a strong emotion for him. I know she said that she wants to be his lead mare. Let me tell you about Ice. She's a vixen. I mean, she seems so innocent, but she gets more and more flirtatious with Magick as the story goes. You'll see.
Lily's jaw dropped, and I could hardly restrain mine from doing the same. Then, after remembering that this wasn't real, I turned to Lily.
"Sorry, but she's right. I am not going to be like our father, who my mother said wouldn't have ca-"
"Lilypad! What are you doing here? I've been looking all over for you! And who is this?" a mare was yelling, running towards us. Lily looked upset. She tried to run away, but the mare stopped right in front of her.
"Who is this?? and where have you been? Dammit lily I've been so worried!" the mare exclaimed. Lily didn't look in her eyes.
"Lily, you will answer your mother!" she yelled. I widened my eyes at her and she looked away, ashamed. The mare lightly pushed on Lily, and they turned and left. That's when I turned to Angel. She looked sad.
"What's wrong?" I asked her.
"I feel bad having had to tell you that your father is dead," she replied. I gasped.
"My father is...dead?" I asked slowly. She nodded grimly. I gave her a disbelieving look.
"No. He's still alive. You're lying to me, Angel!" she shook her head. I was getting angry. I kicked her.
"Dammit! YOU'RE LYING!" I bellowed. I ran away. I ran through the thick trees, until I came to a stone cliff. I ran up it, my hooves clattering like mad. I could hear something behind me, but I didn't turn around. I just kept running. MUST KEEP RUNNING, I thought. There was no way my father was dead. I mean, it didn't matter to me what became of Lily, the little flea-bitten, lying piece of scum. But Angel wasn't right. They didn't kill my father. I finally reached the top of the stone structure, and stood on the ledge, looking at the long fall. I could hear slow, steady footsteps coming up the structure, and saw a flash of white. Ice had come to get me. She stopped abruptly right next to me. We stood in silence for a while, and she finally broke the silence.
"She'll be OK. You only got some skin. But she's OK," she said. Obviously she was talking about Angel. I just stared ahead. She gently nuzzled my face. I turned my head quickly and missed biting her by half a second. She looked at me, puzzled. There was hatred in my eyes. She backed away, looking at me as if I was some kind of monster.
"ANGEL? ANGEL WILL BE OK? WELL THAT'S FINE, BUT WHAT ABOUT ME?! MY FATHER IS DEAD! I WAS FOOLED BY A STUPID LITTLE FILLY! MY LIFE IS POINTLESS! I'M GOING TO THROW MYSELF OVER THIS FRIENDLY CLIFF," I screamed. I turned back around, and was about to jump, when she stepped up next to me. She looked down at it, looking very unhappy.
"What are you doing?" I asked her.
"Well, if you're gonna jump, I'll have to jump with you, of course," she replied.
"As will I," said a voice from behind us.
Hey this is my fifth chapter! How TOTALLY exciting! LoL. I'm really sorry the last chapter was so short but I really wanted to update and I didn't have much time. ::frowns:: sorry.
Reviewers- Socks the Leader- Still one of my biggest fans, I see ;-) LoL. I know it was a little short but I was eager to review, and I was busy. Sorry!!!!!!!!!!!
Solo Rider- I am not going to tell you what happens with all the siring. LoL. You'll have to wait, like everyone else. ::sticks tongue out:: LoL. This is the best story you've read?? ::faints:: LoL. Ttul!!
Devil Filly666- I will add more detail in this chapter! You'll be relieved to know what their surroundings look like. I picture it, and it's really pretty. Anyway, I'm like, itching to write, so I will!
Writer*of*Stories- When Ice told Magick that she loved him, it doesn't mean that she's IN love with him. It just means that she has a strong emotion for him. I know she said that she wants to be his lead mare. Let me tell you about Ice. She's a vixen. I mean, she seems so innocent, but she gets more and more flirtatious with Magick as the story goes. You'll see.
Lily's jaw dropped, and I could hardly restrain mine from doing the same. Then, after remembering that this wasn't real, I turned to Lily.
"Sorry, but she's right. I am not going to be like our father, who my mother said wouldn't have ca-"
"Lilypad! What are you doing here? I've been looking all over for you! And who is this?" a mare was yelling, running towards us. Lily looked upset. She tried to run away, but the mare stopped right in front of her.
"Who is this?? and where have you been? Dammit lily I've been so worried!" the mare exclaimed. Lily didn't look in her eyes.
"Lily, you will answer your mother!" she yelled. I widened my eyes at her and she looked away, ashamed. The mare lightly pushed on Lily, and they turned and left. That's when I turned to Angel. She looked sad.
"What's wrong?" I asked her.
"I feel bad having had to tell you that your father is dead," she replied. I gasped.
"My father is...dead?" I asked slowly. She nodded grimly. I gave her a disbelieving look.
"No. He's still alive. You're lying to me, Angel!" she shook her head. I was getting angry. I kicked her.
"Dammit! YOU'RE LYING!" I bellowed. I ran away. I ran through the thick trees, until I came to a stone cliff. I ran up it, my hooves clattering like mad. I could hear something behind me, but I didn't turn around. I just kept running. MUST KEEP RUNNING, I thought. There was no way my father was dead. I mean, it didn't matter to me what became of Lily, the little flea-bitten, lying piece of scum. But Angel wasn't right. They didn't kill my father. I finally reached the top of the stone structure, and stood on the ledge, looking at the long fall. I could hear slow, steady footsteps coming up the structure, and saw a flash of white. Ice had come to get me. She stopped abruptly right next to me. We stood in silence for a while, and she finally broke the silence.
"She'll be OK. You only got some skin. But she's OK," she said. Obviously she was talking about Angel. I just stared ahead. She gently nuzzled my face. I turned my head quickly and missed biting her by half a second. She looked at me, puzzled. There was hatred in my eyes. She backed away, looking at me as if I was some kind of monster.
"ANGEL? ANGEL WILL BE OK? WELL THAT'S FINE, BUT WHAT ABOUT ME?! MY FATHER IS DEAD! I WAS FOOLED BY A STUPID LITTLE FILLY! MY LIFE IS POINTLESS! I'M GOING TO THROW MYSELF OVER THIS FRIENDLY CLIFF," I screamed. I turned back around, and was about to jump, when she stepped up next to me. She looked down at it, looking very unhappy.
"What are you doing?" I asked her.
"Well, if you're gonna jump, I'll have to jump with you, of course," she replied.
"As will I," said a voice from behind us.
