Fox: Hey ya'll sorry I deleted my story last time, its just that I couldn't deal with first person. Anywho, we are dealing with the same plot and charators, it just might be a little different. Now for this first chapter, all I want to hear from ya'll is a Yay or a Nay.give me your oppinion. If you like, third person stays, if not, well, looks like I'm gonna have to deal with it. Anywho, ENJOY!

Disclamer: You know it. I know it. End of story.

Chapter 1

Today is Wednesday the twenty-fifth at 2:50 A.M. The night was silent in Chicago, Illinois. Four shadows were the only things moving. Their plan is to steal the last piece of the Warrior's Paw in the Field Museum. The shadows climbedup a sideladder on the side of the building. They climbed up to the roof, looking down in a skylight.

From the dimlight that was left on in the museum, we see four foxes looking down at their prize. Flare was a pure bred fox; wearing a blue long sleeve shirt and black jeans. She had different colored eyes; her left eye was green and her right was blue. She had brown fur, tail, ears and hair.

Maxx that was to her left was part raccoon and had emerald green eyes and a raccoon tail with light green at the end. Her ears were black with green ends. Her hair is also black with green ends. She was wearing a dark green long sleeve shirt with black jeans and a grey thief mask over her eyes. Zephyr was a taller (just by a little) fox like wolf. The difference between her and the other two is that she has no tail (why she doesn't is beyond me). Her fur color is a dark brown; her hair color is white with black ends. The fur on the outside of her ears is white, while the fur in the inside is black. Her eye color is midnight black. Zephyr usually wears an all black long sleeve shirt and black jeans.

The last of the foxes is the youngest out of all of them. Amara was the most unusual fox out of all four of them. She was part human. Why she is part human is in another story, but she is a fox. She had few patches of dark brown fur on her skin; she has jet black hair and tail. She had hazel colored eyes, and what she wore was a red long sleeve shirt with a beaded gold dragon in the front and over it she had a dark blue jean jacket. With that, she wore regular jeans to match her outfit.

Flare nodded to Maxx; taking out her lap top, Maxx started hacking the security codes to open the skylight. Once that was done, Zephyr opened it and jumped in first. Next was Amara, then Maxx, and after her was Flare. All of them surrounded the Paw, which was in a glass case.

Flare was about to break it when Zephyr stopped her.

"What?" exclaimed Flare, "I just gonna break it and get the Paw."

"That's just it," Zephyr explained, "We don't want you to break the glass yet."

"And why not?"

"Have you ever thought that are alarms and Guarddogs around this room." Maxx said, taking something out of her pocket.

Flare was quiet on that remark. "Are you serious about the Guarddogs?" Maxx nodded her head.

Security was a lot tighter ever since the Vixens group name) came together and stole precious items from museums, historical sites, and…you get the picture. Guarddogs are security guards with a dog's DNA in them. So that means they now have sharp hearing, sharp eyesight, and very, very sharp teeth. The only advice that I'll give you is don't mess with one that's in a bad mood. They also have a very short fuse, just to warn you.

"All right," said Flare, looking scared now. "I'll be quiet."

It's about time." Zephyr muttered.

"You got something to say?" Flare's voice was stating to rise.

"Yeah, its five feet tall and smells like cheap shampoo." Zephyr's voice was also rising.

"Guys, please." Amara whispered loud enough for the foxes to hear, "no more mean-talking." She was giving them the puppy dog eyes you see when you're walking by the pet shop and some puppies in the window are giving you that sad look that says take me home with you.

Both foxes calmed down but still glared daggers at each other, then back downed. Amara sighed and smiled; those two, she thought, they argue so much it's like a Saturday morning show.

"Can you guys come to the wall please," said Maxx, interrupting Amara's thoughts, "I want to try something I saw on a movie last night." Maxx was holding a video camera that was on pause. The three Vixens moved to where Maxx was. "I need you guys to keep quiet for what I'm about to do."

"What are you doing?" asked Amara, looking at the camera screen.

Maxx put the camera right by the security camera and recorded the room with the same motion it was making to survey the room. Once that was finished, she hooked it up to her lap top and modified it. A window popped up on the screen.

"Zephyr." Said Maxx

"Yeah?" she answered.

"Do me a favor and stand by the Paw." She had a hopeful look on her face.

Quietly, Zephyr went to the glass box. She looked up at Maxx and saw a surprised look on her face. "What." Zephyr asked, looking around to see if she tripped an alarm.

Maxx looked up to her with a wide smile on her face, "We are now the Invisible Vixens"

"Right then," said Flare, "shall we get started?"

While the girls were planning on how to get the Paw out of the glass box, the room started to get darker and darker; Amara was the first one to take notice. She heard a low mumble in a corner where it was mostly shadowed. Amara tugged on Zephyr's shirt. "Zephyr."

"Not now Amara." Zephyr said.

"I think we have a problem." The shadow started to get bigger and bigger until it couldn't fit the room. The fur on Amara's tail stood up.

"We're fine Amara, there's no reason to fret." She sounded annoyed now.

A pair of red eyes popped out. Amara's eyes were as big as tennis balls. "Oh, there is a very good reason to fret."

Zephyr turned around to see what she was talking about. When she saw the shadow, her mouth just dropped to the ground. She tapped on Flare's shoulder just when she was about to break the glass container…again. "You guys, I think we need to drop the heist."

Flare gave her a mean glare as if she was about to kill her. "What do you mean drop the heist'?" she found the answer by seeing the crimson eyes. Flare tapped on Maxx's shoulder and pointed to the shadow.

Maxx looked up at Flare and saw what she was pointing at. She gasped. "What now?"

Flare took out her sword, "I say we take it down, get the Paw and get out."

Zephyr took out her boe staff, "For once I have to agree with you on this one."

A deep chuckle came from the shadow's eyes, "You have no idea who you are dealing with," Amara's tail fur standed on end hearing the cold voice, "nor what power you'll get with that charm." The shadow started to grow tentacles. Maxx and Amara got out their weapons. Maxx had a cane that had a sharp golden hook. Amara had a bow and arrow for her weapons. The tentacles came closer.

"Zephyr…" Amara said in a shaky voice.

"It's ok Amara, stay strong." Zephyr was trying to keep voice steady.

"It's coming closer!"

"Stay strong!"

In a flash, the tentacles launched itself at the Vixens and the charm. Everyone fought back the shadow to keep it away from the charm. Amara heard the glass break; before she saw who took it. She then heard a yell and everything went black.

Fox: So? what cha'll think? Yay or Nay? Please review and let me know.