Fox: Ok, I;m not to proun of this one but i need to know from the audience if I should redo this or not.

Maxx: Fox, this is fine just leave it.

Fox: Iknow, but i need to know what other people think.

Zephyr:seesus argguing,sighs Please enjoy.

Chapter 4

Sapphire blue was all around Maxx when she woke. Her emerald eyes starred up to the sky, wondering how in the world she got there. She felt herself moving with something wet realized she on her back floating on water. She sat up and looked around for land. Then, maybe out of pure luck, she found an island! What was even better was that she was close to shore.

Maxx started to swim. She was so excited that she swam faster than she thought. Finally, she made it to shore. Panting, she dropped on all fours, soon dug her hand in her pocket.

"Please be there, please be there, please be there," she whispered to herself. At last, she found what she was looking for, feeling a cold metal; she took it out and lay down on her back. Maxx held the item into the sun.

"You guys…are…so lucky…that I got this just in time," Saying that as if the Vixens were with her. What she was holding was the last part of the Warrior's Paw. It was shaped like an eye and had a blood red-colored pupil.

Out of the corner of her eye, Maxx saw a flash of grey. Turning her head wondering if her head was playing games on her; to her left was a small village. Slowly, she stood up and put the charm back in her pocket and waded to the village.

When she made it to the gate, she found it was locked. Seeing that that it was closed and no one was there, Maxx climbed the gate. Now that she was in the village, she noticed that taking a closer look, the huts were made out of sea weed, and most of them were on fire, besides that no one seemed to be here running in panic or taking the fire out like home…weird. Trying to find what happened, Maxx wandered round the village

Just when she was about to pass a hut that was ripped to shreds, she backed up and hid in it. Looking up a little, her eyes widened, she couldn't believe it. A Guard dog! What in Kistune's name is that thing doing here? It was looking down at these little blue people about waist high to the dog from the tops of there heads. All looked like biomechanical creatures (she couldn't at a distance). The Guard dog kept them in line for some reason she didn't know. One of them tripped on its feet and fell. The Guard noticed this and took out his whip and slashed t on its back yelling "Get up!

Struggling, the person slowly got up. With a flick of his wrist, he slashed the air, "Faster, fools," the dog barked. Maxx looked ahead to where they were going; all of them were going in an air tight hut. Not good. Maxx heard the crack of the whip again. She covered her ears; oh, such an ugly sound it made. She knew that she had to do something, but the question is "How?" Hearing the crack of the whip again and this time with a scream, she knew what she had to do. Maxx took out her cane. A devious plan was forming in her mind. She has to get rid of that whip.

Fox: Hope you liked it. Please review and no flames.