Falling Down (DC SI)

by DerKopfloseHesse

No answers, no idea where to go. A young man has to start all over again in a world, that was both familiar and painfully confusing. Falling Down, a story where I find myself on the side of organized crime in the city of the world's greatest detective. (Male SI)

26. Author Note Re-write

Here's a bit of news regarding William Panessa's adventure in Gotham City.

Omertà (id: 14054375)

A young boy growing up on the wrong side of the law in the city of the World's Greatest Detective.

A story, that is just as much influenced by The Joker and Batman: The Animated Series as it is by Goodfellas and The Sopranos. This is going to be a re-write of my SI story Falling Down, which I intend to transform into a proper OC while simultaneously trying to trim the unnecessary and 'weird' bits, that ended up in the first iteration since I had been flying more or less blind on that one.

I already struggle with putting down the words in a significant number, and really wrangled (still am) with the re-writing process, but I dearly want this to be half-way decent so please criticize to your heart's content.

Author Note: I intend to keep William more firmly in the Panessa corner and go with more 'fitting' choices (E.g. Boxing instead of Judo). I will tone down or do away with the SI-induced weirdness and make the entire process of William growing up and the various situations more believable (E.g. I aged him up by four years).

I hope you can forgive me/understand, but I really want this DC story to be good.