Chapter 1 Who is…
(note I say it good and if i had my way I would make it happen>
Jack was walking through the forest, and he heard things never heard by him be for. Also he saw an ent at this time all he knew was it was like an evil tree, it was running towards him, it was scary, and he fled.
He was getting nowhere and it, entty 1that is what I shall call it from now on, was gaining on him with friends. So he ran faster. Trees seemed to grab at him. Then his saving grace appeared out of nowhere. A purple fast broom swept him up. Strangely there was no one on it. It was flying by its own self! "Wow, that was just in time, but why is a broom flying by its self and how?" Jack thought. Soon after a thing was spotted by Jack. They, Jack and the broom, were flying towards it. It jumped and caught the broom by its hand. Jack studied its back features. "It is a girl how strange. Why would a girl be here of all places? She kind a from my position is cute. I wonder if a girl of her strength would like a guy like me?" Jack inquisitively thought.
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