Just somthing I wrote on a wimp reveiw please. Flames ignored.
Why I wait
Obsession. The very thing that has made what is between us possible.
Hatred. The thing that started it all off to begin with.
Love. The very thing that would destroy us if anyone found out.
Lust. The thing that stops us from being apart.
I write your name on a piece of paper before ripping it up. It's the longest night I've spent waiting for you yet. You get later and later each night with more red scars decorating you beautiful chest. I long to lick those wounds again thought it kills me to see them, so I feel them. Healing them in my mind, there, so you know someone cares about you as a person. You're not the boy-who-lived in my mind. You never have been.
I laugh as I see you emerge from the cloak. Your hair sticks up more then usual and your smiling. It's so rare to see that but it means that tonight will be special. We barely whisper a word as we touch each other. Kissing and our fingers roaming each other's bodies, I find those horrid scars and make them mine, mine forever. You won't let anyone else do this. You can't, they just won't understand you like I do.
I complete you with a swift movement and close my eyes against the building need to finish. I want this to last forever…
I love you…
You hiss as I make you climax in the heat of our passion. We lay in the room of requirement with you sprawled over my chest sound asleep, I laugh again quietly to myself. We're so different yet want exactly the same. For someone to care…
>ok, ok i know it's not the best fanfiction you've ever read but be kind! Post contrutive comments please.Feedback gladly recived!