(Reviews from fans)
nice!
update
soon! –White Alchemist Taya
Sengoku- Nice…? I find nothing nice about the torture she plans to give me…
Amy-chan- Sengoku-san, don't be such a kill joy, at least he kept reading the story –smiles-
Sengoku- He probably just wants to keep being in the story…
Amy-chan- Sengoku-san! That's not nice! Apologize!
Sengoku- Hai, hai… Sumimasen…
Amy-chan- -grunts- Honto ni gomenasai, White Alechemist Taya-kun… Alright… let's proceed to our other review…
Nice
story I Love it! keep it up! I hope you update soon!
I hope Kira
tortures Sengoku-san hehe –Saemi
Sengoku- Ohmigosh! Another sadist!
Kira- Actually, I kinda like him... –smiles-
Sengoku- …Uhh… Just a reminder… you're supposed to be with me…
Amy-chan- FYI Sengoku-san, it's just a story…
Sengoku- and FYI Amy-chan, Dan doesn't even like you…
Dan- Yameru, Sengoku-senpai desu!
Amy-chan- -Gives Sengoku an angered expression-
Kira- Sengoku! Don't be mean to the freshmen!
Sengoku- You call this girl a freshman! She's like a demon!
Amy-chan- Kira-neesan… -fakes cry- Sengoku-san's being mean…
Kira- -pats Amy-chan's back- Awe… Sengoku!
Sengoku- Jeezes… next review please!
YAY! I LOVE IT! XD I love anything with Sengoku in it. This story is so cute and funny! Update soon, please! Pretty please! XD –Mazie
Sengoku- so people do have taste in this site… -flashes his million dollar smile-
Amy-chan & Kira- -fakes barfing- As if!
Sengoku- Now I like this girl :D
Amy-chan & Kira- Urusai!
Amy-chan- You're supposed to be with Kira!
Sengoku- FYI Amy-chan… this is only a story…
Kira- -Walks towards Sengoku and hits him on the head- Amy-chan! –turns to Amy-chan-
Amy-chan- H-hai? –scared look-
Kira- Make sure I torture him… horridly… -walks away-
Sengoku- -sweat drop- I'm guessing today is very unlucky for me, ne?
Amy-chan & Dan- -nods-
Sengoku- -sigh- Alright… on with the story…
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(I wonder…)
The next day, "Sengoku-senpai!" said a junior girl, running towards him.
Kiyosumi turned to the girl, and flashed her, his million dollar smile.
"Ohayo… Rika-chan," Kiyosumi said, her name not ringing a bell.
"My name's Ayu, but it's okay, I can change it to Rika," the girl said, nervously.
"Ah, gomen. Daijobu, daijobu. Ayu is a beautiful name," Kiyosumi said, with a smile.
The girl nearly fainted.
"Ah! Sengoku-senpai… th-th-this is for y-you," said the girl, handing him the bento.
Kiyosumi gladly took it, and placed it in his bag, which had other bento's made by other girls.
"Domo, Rik… I mean, Ayu-chan," Kiyosumi said, saving himself.
He then left for lunch.
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"Ohmigosh, Kiyosumi! Can you eat all of those!" Kira yelled, annoyed that a million bento's were crowding the whole roof (me: they eat in the roof).
"No, that's why I asked you two not to bother eating lunch from now on… Anyways, I'm glad you finally took the pleasure in calling me, Kiyosumi. At least now I know you love me," Kiyosumi said, with a smirk.
"Jeezes, do you have to make me sick every time we have lunch!" Kira asked, looking at Kiyosumi smugly.
"Maa, maa, don't you two ever get along!" Kentarou said, annoyed.
"Gomen ne…" the two said, listening to Kentarou.
Kentarou said, and grabbed one of the bento's from Kiyosumi's bag.
"Geez… I didn't think we'd be eating such rich food…" Kentarou said, thinking if he should eat it.
"Daijobu, daijobu, it's not as if it's poisoned. That came from… Narumi-chan… I think… she's that senator guy's daughter… I think…" Kiyosumi said, getting into thought.
He looked at Kira who was not eating a single bento.
"Daijobu desuka, Kira-chan? Are you not hungry?" Kiyosumi asked, leaning towards her to check her temperature.
"Hmm... You seem normal…" Kiyosumi said, ignoring the flash of red covering Kira's cheek.
"Get off me, you pervert tennis player!" Kira yelled, pushing him back.
Kiyosumi got up, an anger vein on his head.
"Yup… she's definitely normal…" Kiyosumi mumbled.
"Why aren't you eating, Kira-chan?" Kentarou asked, politely.
"I'm not comfortable eating what's not given to me…" Kira said, blushing slightly.
"Well… I'm giving it to you," Kiyosumi said, rubbing his head.
Kira blushed at his comment.
"Domo, demo… they were given to you by girls' who are crazy about you. What you're giving merely has no meaning," Kira said, not realizing what she just said.
Kiyosumi went back into thought.
"Hmm… so what you're saying is… if what I am giving you had some sort of meaning you'll gladly accept the bento?" Kiyosumi asked, rubbing his chin.
"I guess…" Kira said, with a weak smile.
Kiyosumi stabbed one of his boiled eggs with his fork and offered to feed Kira.
"Kiyosumi… wha."
"You said you wanted it to have a meaning, right? This is all I can think of," Kiyosumi said, with a smile, not just his million dollar smile, but a warm smile.
Kira smiled, and ate the egg he fed her.
She blushed, but was actually happy for what he did.
"A-arigato, Kiyosumi," Kira said, blushing.
'What the heck is this! …No! I will not fall for this! Later, I will give him the torture I promised! No words or act of mine shall ever tarnish my promise!' Kira thought, returning to normal.
Kiyosumi just kept smiling.
"Would you like me to keep feeding you, or would you rather just get a bento?" Kiyosumi asked, jokingly.
"Ha ha! Baka!" Kira said, jokingly.
She took the bento and started eating.
"So… What am I supposed to do as your assistant?" Kiyosumi asked, not really aware of what he would be doing.
"Well."
"Kiyosumi-senpai! There's a woman looking for you desu," Dan said, with a bow, for disturbing their lunch.
"A woman! Tell me, Dan… Is she… 'ugly'…?" Kiyosumi asked, with a fake scared expression.
Kira and Kentarou looked at him blankly.
"Can't this wait…?" Kira asked, annoyed.
"Iie, Kira-chan! What if this girl is so ugly, that she needs my help to get attention! I'm giving too much attention to you already!" Kiyosumi said, not realizing what he just blurted out.
"Excuse me! Are you saying I'm ug."
"Tell me Dan… Is. She. 'Ugly'?" Kiyosumi faked, waiting for an answer.
Dan took a while to answer.
"…Hai desu…" Dan said, acting.
"Ohmigosh! Lead the way, Dan!" Kiyosumi said, leaving the two on the roof, with Dan.
-Pause!-
Amy-chan- Awe… Dan-kun is so kawaii! He must have had practice!
Dan- -blushes- Domo, Amy-chan desu…
Kira- Awe, puppy love –adored-
Amy-chan- Iie, I have Ryoma-kun…
Dan- -frowns-
Sengoku- Isn't he your brother in PoL?
Amy-chan- stop giving things away! He's not my brother yet! Besides, I just woke up from my sleep!
Kira- Oh yeah… demo, what about Fuji-kun? Where does he go?
Amy-chan- I'm trying to forget him…
Kira & Dan & Sengoku- WHAT!
Amy-chan- It's just that… I'm too obsessed with him… I have all his soundtracks, his contact details, his family information, and I buy everything I see that either has his picture, name or anything that involves him… jeez, I even have a pic saved of Mnt. Fuji in my computer!
Sengoku- Aa… you are obsessed…
Kira- Demo… when you blow Fuji-kun off… who will you go with? You can't possibly have Ryoma-kun…
Amy-chan- Ohmigosh! You guys are way too ahead of my story!
Dan- Still… who would you go with next desu…?
Kira- -smirks- why do you ask, Dan-kun?
Dan- -blushes- betsuni desu… I was just asking desu…
Amy-chan- Hmm… probably… Saeki-kun :D I have had this crush on him for a while –blushes-
Kira- Right now you're still with Fuji-kun, ne?
Amy-chan- In my story I'm currently not with him 'yet'
Dan- -frowns-
Sengoku- Saeki? Kohjirou Saeki? The vice captain of Rokkaku tennis club?
Amy-chan- Very good, Sengoku-san! Later I will give you a cookie!
Sengoku- -grunts- anyways… how'd Saeki-san get in the story?
Amy-chan- After Amy, I, kicked Fuji to the curve with Tezuka, Onii-chan, Amy, I decided to take a little trip with Ryoma, my other onii-chan. We happened to bump in to him while we were lost and he offered to take us back to our hotel and… Why the hell am I telling you this, when we're so far away from that chapter! I just barely started the story!
Sengoku- we don't know… why'd you tell us, if you were going to be angry afterwards?
Amy-chan- -angry look-
Sengoku- -shivers-
Dan- How about Fuji-kun? What will happen to him as you and… Saeki-san go on?
Amy-chan- Hmm… He'll discover Saeki and I are engaged and try his best to give up, I guess… I may make some changes, so don't trust me, please –smiles-
Dan- H-hai desu...
Sengoku- Umm yeah… I think we should go back to the story…
Amy-chan- Oh yeah! This is where Ann-chan and I make an appearance!
Sengoku- …I can wait after all…
-Unpause!-
Kira and Kentarou didn't care anymore and just continued eating.
"That was his way of saying the girl was intensely beautiful, ne?" Kentarou asked, putting some sushi in his mouth.
"Hai," Kira said, simply.
Meanwhile, Kiyosumi and Dan, "Are you sure this woman is gorgeous?" Kiyosumi asked, eager.
"Hai desu. Almost as pretty as Kira-senpai desu," Dan said, with a smile.
"Okay, then she's perfect! You're a big help, Dan," Kiyosumi said, patting Dan on the back.
He then ran as fast as he can, down the stairs.
"Oh! I forgot to tell him where desu! Matte kudasai, Kiyosumi-senpai desu!" Dan said, running after him.
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"Pretty girl… I'm gonna get me a, pretty girl," Kiyosumi sung, as he walked down the stairs.
When he got to his main point, he found a white (not pale), wavy-haired, girl standing next to the office.
"Uhh… konichuwa…" Kiyosumi said, as sexy as he could.
"Konichuwa," the girl answered, with a gentle smile.
Kiyosumi just smiled, and so did the girl.
'I'm not getting this girl to feel anything… Wow! That only worked towards Kira-chan till now… she's not 'as' pretty as Kira-chan… She's ever prettier!' Kiyosumi thought, not realizing that Dan was tugging on his shirt.
He turned to Dan finally realizing it, and asked, "Nani, Dan-kun? Can't you see I'm with the girl who called me?"
Kiyosumi signaled him to beat it.
"Amy-chan? Iie desu. Amy-chan is here for me desu. Who I'm talking about is over there desu," Dan said, pointing at the reporter who was looking at some plants.
Kiyosumi knew her… She was the clumsy Saori Shiba, of pro magazines.
He had cursed himself mentally for making such an unlikely mistake.
"Gomen ne, I thought It was you who called me," Kiyosumi said, with a bow.
"Daijobu, there was no harm, Kiyosumi-kun," Amy said, with a smile.
'How did she know my name? Ah! Maybe I went out with her once! Wait… I could never forget a face like that! It can't be! I don't know this girl! Ah!' Kiyosumi thought, panicking.
"Ano… Daijobu desuka?" said another girl from behind Amy.
'Ah! She's pretty too!' Kiyosumi said, eyeing the orange head, behind Amy.
"Hi… I'm Ann Tachibana…" the orange head said, with a weak smile.
"Tachibana? Any relation to Kippei Tachibana of Fudomine?" Kiyosumi asked, curious.
"Aa… he's my Onii-chan," she said, with a smile.
"Sokka… How about you?" Kiyosumi asked, looking at Amy.
"Ah. I'm Aya Amahime Tezuka. Nice to meet you, Kiyosumi-kun," Amy said, with a smile.
"Tezuka! Don't tell me you're his sister! I've heard a lot of rumors about you! One is that you're a newbie in tennis and yet you're as good as your brother!" Kiyosumi said, shocked to have finally met her.
'And there was this other rumor that you were ho-ott! I guess rumor's don't lie, after all,' Kiyosumi said, with a smirk.
"Sengoku-san! Sengoku-san! Over here!" Saori Shiba said, waving to him.
"Ah… That's me… I should go now… It was nice meeting you, Amy-chan, Ann-chan," Kiyosumi said, motioning for Shiba.
Amy, Dan, and Ann giggled.
"Shall we go then? Ryoma-kun, Kuno-chan (me: Sakuno), and the Trio are waiting for us," Amy said with a smile.
"Hai desu," Dan said.
They then left to their destination.
-Pause!-
Sengoku- you don't need to say pause anymore… the chapter's done…
Amy-chan- I know, demo I should warn the people that this kind of thing will happen again
Sengoku- okay… why did I end up flirting with you and Ann-chan…?
Ann-chan- Nande? Are the things you thought, not true?
Sengoku- … Never mind…
Dan- where were we going anyways…?
Amy-chan- since it's already late, I didn't bother to continue the chapter, saying where we went, but I'll just tell you
Dan & Ann-chan- -sits down and listens-
Amy-chan- We were going to talk about this fund raiser that Fudomine was holding. Ann-chan asked us to help her, by performing some entertainment. All of us, were practicing, though Ryoma only did it because Amy, I, begged him. Gets?
Dan & Ann-chan- -nods-
Sengoku- It's late right…? Go to sleep!
Amy-chan- Aa! Don't yell so much!
Sengoku- look who's talking…
Kira- Urusai, Sengoku! I'm trying to sleep! –closes eyes again-
Sengoku- -grunts-
Amy-chan- thanks for joining us, Ann-chan –smiles-
Ann-chan- no problem, Amy-chan –smiles- I should be going now, Onii-chan will get angry with me
Amy-chan- Oh yeah! Onii-chan will too! Gomen ne, minna-san's! Sayonara! Oyasumi Dan-kun, Sengoku-san, Ann-chan and Kira-chan! –leaves-
Kira- ZZzzzzzz –whistle- ZZZZzzzzzzz –whistle-
-Unpause-
Owari