MerendinoEmilano: I also tried to put some work into Johan's culture, but you read my RWBY Fanfic, so it's more of a review for you I guess. But I enjoyed writing Sonic and Fiona. They're both fun characters if I can get them right.
Victor Johan Foxfire(I keep getting your first and middle name mixed up, are you changing it every so often?): Sonic is seeing bit's of Johan's past. He's honorable and strong willed, but also ruthless, and without mercy. I don't want him to be seen as perfect, but he's also not absolutely evil either. Your interpretation of Fiona's dream is interesting, but only partially right. The signs are color coded to represent Sonic and Scourge, but the houses don't have any frame or model in mind. Sonic's family lives in a hollowed-out tree. As for the cloaked individuals, your idea would actually have made me a much smarter writer, but as it stands, the cloaked figures aren't quite who you think. Sticks absolutely enjoys Sonic's company. She found him to be fascinating, and also honest. As for Sonic's statement about the Freedom Fighters, it was very large scale. In the end, smashing robots that Eggman will just rebuild has gotten old for Sonic. Helping the widows and orphans who don't have any securities is a big deal. Break for ease of reading
Continuation Fiona was told to wake and realize who she was by the dark cloaked figure, the one who advertised for the jungle. Sonic does make her somewhat happy, or at least the idea of no hard feelings is something. Johan would absolutely love "Orome" for both religious and the instrumental. His issue with Mina's music wasn't the electric guitar, it was that it lacked a clear purpose to him. Music for Saxons serves the purpose to inspire or tell a tale. Love songs don't really have a place in their culture. Johan also understands the idea of leader-follower relations. Where he comes from, people were expected to follow a chief. A chief's power lies in his followers and legend. If a chief dismissed a soldier, then it's usually regarded as a serious shame, one where the warrior often kills themselves. Johan also knows that being straight forward is a reliable way to salvage a relationship. He's told Sally everything she needs to salvage her relationship, but she continues to try for quicker, easier fixes, so Johan won't waste anymore energy on her.
/*-*/
Sonic wanted to say he was fully prepared for the volley of rockets that flew overhead. Unfortunately, he was caught off guard with the rest of the soldiers. Soldiers who had somehow gotten new rifles that he had never seen before. A lot had happened since Sonic had been gone.
Unfortunately, none of that meant Eggman stopped using big boom-boom rockets, so even diving away did little as he was blasted into a tree. Sonic shook himself off as his head rang violently. His vision stabilized as the sight of a soldier rising off the ground came into view.
A grey wolf, who seemed to actually be fine. Sonic looked closer, and realized he was wearing some sort of crude plate armor. The shrapnel from the rocket was at his feet. The wolf was just as surprised, laughing in disbelief, "This stuff actually works?"
Sonic turned to face the road in the direction that the blasts came from. Most of the soldiers were actually fine. The armor seemed to hold surprisingly well. It almost made Sonic wish he had some.
They scrambled to life, quickly getting behind cover. Johan was quick to move… straight towards the city of Ostlet… where the most defenders were. Still… Sonic actually wasn't too worried. Not because he hated Johan, that seemed to have faded, and been replaced by a sliver of honest respect. No, The reason Sonic wasn't worried was because Johan seemed to be indestructible. Sonic was willing to be he could drink a river of poison and punish the world with a toxic piss.
Sonic however, took to work trying to hit what ever defenders he could… which was fruitless because they all seemed to hole up inside the city, firing down from the walls. Sonic could see why. The city gate was surrounded by razorwire, along with spike traps. The mobians almost had nothing to even get through that. Almost.
They were stuck waiting on Johan, who was bounding forward. He actually had some new gear as well. His face was covered in thick metal, along with his chest area. Large plate armor which bulged out in a diamond shape seemed to guard an already indestructible warrior.
Sally's voice rang out, "Dig in! Keep yourselves small!" She was behind a tree, and picked up one of the old rifles. She was firing up at the wall, while the "Sappers" dug trenches in the ground. Several soldiers seemed to get her idea, and joined in. The interesting thing about these rifles is they seemed to fire slower. Sonic looked closer and saw that they had to pull a strange bolt back, and push it back in before firing, which was clearly new to them.
Sonic felt oddly useless in that moment. Johan was breaching the walls, Sally and the soldiers were providing cover fire. What was he doing?
Sonic heard the sound of two more rockets soaring through the sky. That's what he could do. Sonic waited until they started to dip down, before rushing over to the soldiers that would have been hit, and moving them away as quickly as possible. Ten, twenty, forty, he was being useful… at least somewhat.
After he landed soldiers away, Sonic ran up to the barbed wire that had been smashed by a less than amused Wolverine.
"How's it coming big guy?" Sonic shouted, seeing Tails flying overhead, carefully evading the blasts from the legion.
Johan snarled, and continued to push against the gate, "It is stuck." He growled angrily. That wasn't good. Sonic sprang an idea quickly.
"Throw me up, don-" Sonic was suddenly soaring through the air. Tails accelerated to catching him, and throw him over the walls. Sonic made sure to curl up into a ball as he was descending to prevent breaking a leg.
Once he hit the ground, Sonic immediately ran into a few problems. One, The gate was blocked with everything from broken-down houses to carts. Two, there were legionnaires inside the city. Three… that was a new missile system.
It had singular, rounded robotic grey head with a massive lense, that was heating up as Sonic was making his assessment. Sonic dove out of the way, as torrent of red hot energy ripped through the air, striking the wall. The head slowly creaked to correct its error. Sonic ran around and made some notes. It had two rocket pods, one on each side of a brown, large metal box, which ridges descending downward. It seemed to run on two treads, and the box was tall, about a foot larger than Sonic.
Sonic also noted that it wasn't really built to fight him, because if it was, it would have better rotation. Sonic ran around it and tried to attack from behind. His spin dash should have torn it to pieces.
Should and did were two different words. Instead, Sonic flattened himself against it, only hurting his back in the process. The thing was slow, but it was heavy, and designed to take what ever Sonic could dish out plus interest.
Sonic rolled off, and caught his breath. The chest area was a no-go… so what next? The treads would stop it from moving, but they'd probably rip him to pieces. The head… would stop firing a laser if it was gone. Sonic shot forward, and slammed through the head, cutting it off surprisingly easily considering the torso piece was so tough.
The machine went still. Sonic walked up slowly, "Not so tough now…are you?" He taunted between breaths. Then Sonic heard the beeping noise. Suddenly the world turned orange, and Sonic was blasted back into a building. It blew itself up?
Sonic blacked out for a brief moment, only able to force himself back into consciousness. They were counting on him. Sonic shook himself off, and staggered to his feet. He heard the sound of weapons being steadied. He looked up to find Legionnaires with their weapons ready.
His second wind always seemed to come when things got dangerous. Sonic immediately bolted back to the wall, "Johan! Johan! Stop, they've got like twenty feet of stuff holding this gate!" Sonic shouted as legionnaires fired down on his friends. He didn't hear anything from Johan.
"Listen, you need to go around to the other gate," Sonic started as he heard some of the firing quiet down. From the small cubby he was in, he saw Legionnaires running across the wall in a panicked state, "The other gates aren-" He bared finished the sentence as the wall exploded, as Johan's shoulder plowed through into a building.
The beast let out a roar, and turned to the now shaking Dark Legion members, some were reading their weapons, others were running away as fast as they could.
Johan roared, shaking his plate armor to discard the bits of stone that had fallen between the cracks.
"RUSH IN! GO GO GO!" Sonic heard from the other side of the wall as Johan sprang into action, leaping on a legionnaire who had the unfortunate luck of being in front of Sonic.
Sonic watched as Johan landed on the poor guy, and bit his throat out. Johan snapped up the red mess before scanning the area, and running at the next thing he saw.
Sonic, on the other hand needed a breather. He looked down at the torn up and mangled corpse of the echidna, who had just been destroyed. He felt sick at the sight of it. His chest was stinging from being blasted around, he was tired… but he couldn't just let the legionnaires die.
Sonic powered through and ran in front of Johan as he was about to pounce on his next victim. Sonic couldn't stop Johan, but he could move the target. Sonic quickly ran around, grabbing all of the Legionnaires as they entered Johan's kill zone, quickly moving them out of the way into the center of the city.
Johan did not take to kindly to it, but he simply snarled at Sonic, "Find your own kills." He growled, and turned around to run deeper into the city. Sonic quickly followed. If he stayed still, more legionnaires would die.
Sonic followed him into some of the alleys, where Sonic once again forgot who he was dealing with. Sonic had hoped with the enclosed space, Johan would restrict his own movement. Instead Johan simply smashed through walls to whack Legionnaires.
Sonic called out as Johan smashed another Legionnaire into the wooden building to their left, "Johan stop! Dude, this you don't have to kill them!"
Johan seemed to ignore him, and smashed another Echidna, who desperately held up her hands for mercy.
"JOHAN!" Sonic shouted. The sound of gun shots ringing out filled the city.
Johan turned to Sonic, "They are my enemy. The necessary force is irrelevant."
Sonic frowned. He couldn't convince Johan, that much was evident. So he had to save al lthe lives he could.
Sonic zipped under Johan, and ran ahead. He tripped evey legionnaire he could find, before picking them up and tossing them on each other outside of the alley exit. Then he turned around and ran back in, and around the corner.
When he did, he notice Johan looming over some legionnaires. They were surrendering. Why was Johan so content to kill them all?
Sonic ran in front of him, and stretched out his arms, "HEY!... They're done, there are other Legionnaires still fighting… I got these guys." Sonic tried, hoping that Johan would at least go off somewhere else.
Johan Lowered his body down, and turned around, "Very well, I will hunt more aggressive prey." He lumbered off quickly. Sonic had to keep up.
Before he could run, however, he felt a tap on his right shoulder. Sonic turned around to find a young Echidna man smiling, "Thanks… Thanks so much… Thank you."
"You guys are still getting locked up." Sonic clarified, feeling a bit out of place with being thanked by the Freedom Fighters' enemies.
"That's… better than the alternative." The Echidna nodded.
Sonic felt a little heavier, exhaustion kicking probably. He quickly ran to catch up to the big Wolverine, tripping over a body. Sonic was too… That wasn't a Legionnaire.
Sonic saw the rifle on the ground. He rolled over the body. His heart ripped open as he saw the horrible sight. It wasn't anyone he knew, but the uniform told Sonic he was volunteer. He had burns from blasts along his stomach and neck. Sonic saw a trail of blood, and some large foot prints in the snow.
Sonic ran as fast as he could. Was Johan getting vengeance? Why? He clearly didn't care about them. Sonic caught up to Johan, who loomed over a wounded echidna, who had been shot in the leg.
"I Surrender! I surrender." The Echidna cried, and wolf legionnaires quickly came out with their blaster rifles.
Sonic ran in front of Johan, "HE'S DOWN! HE'S DONE!"
Johan let out a strange groan. It sounding like he was sound an alarm-
Sonic suddenly felt all of his muscles clench up as volts of electricity rippled through his body. He collapsed, barely catching a glimpse of the echidna. He appeared to have a switch… which meant…
His shoulder! Sonic hadn't checked, but the echidna from before had put something on his shoulder, a tazer charge?
The wounded echidna quickly fired at Johan's plated face. Johan remained stoic as he crawled slowly towards the retreating echidna. Sonic could only watch as the wolves desperately tried to stop the force of nature that approached them.
Johan grabbed the Echidna's weapon, and held it. "Do you know how to build an engine for a flying fortress?" He asked it so clearly, even as the echidna struggled against his strength.
Johan waited a few moments…before the echidna's head exploded from contact of Johan's fist. Sonic's eyes finally succumbed to being tired.
When he awoke, Sonic saw smoke, and a red fox looking down at him, "Hey… Are you good?"
"Fiona?" Sonic blinked, starting to sit up, but his back let him know how unhappy it was with his last few endeavors. Sonic fell back, letting out a gasp.
Fiona smirked, "That's the name I was born- gave myself." She stretched out a hand, looking away from Sonic to avoid his laugh at her failed dad-joke. Sonic took the hand and rose up, feeling her pull him off the snowy ground. Fiona also handed him a coat.
Sonic's body finally caught up, and Sonic huddled up in the coat to offset the fact that had been lying in the snow for who knows how long. He staggered forward, his body slowly rebooting itself after the shock.
"Sheesh, you look like an old man." Fiona snorted at Sonic, crossing her arms with a smug grin.
"Ehm gettin too old for theius stuoff." Sonic exaggerated to best potential he could.
Fiona let out a smooth giggle, one that reminded Sonic how trust worth she could seem. But, she was trying to chance, or at least she said she was. Sonic saw a few very important reasons to be doubtful, but she also made a fair point. He'd have to trust her a little more if they expected to get anywhere.
Sonic staggered off, watching as he passed the soldiers who were searching the city, and getting set up in the few houses that remained. Sonic also passed buildings which had groans and whines echoing outside them. He dared to look inside, and saw bandaged figures. The poor guys where batter rough, but their chests were only lightly oiled if any treatment was applied.
Sonic thought about walking in, but he was tired, and so were they probably. Instead, he kept walking, until he got to the west gate. The gate had all of the blockage removed. Johan, Sally, Antoine and Tails seemed to sit around the gate.
Sally was in the middle of talking about strategy, "If we keep pushing east, we might encounter Eggman. If we can hit him hard, we might scare him out of the region."
"I'm down for it!" Tails jumped up, "Let's knock him out."
Antoine nodded, "Yes, yes. We can get him and end this charade once and for all." Antoine was moving so quickly, before jumping away once he saw Sonic.
Sally turned, "Oh… Sonic, you're ok? Are you, I mean?"
Sonic nodded, "Yeah… Just… took a nap."
"He slept after sustaining damage that could have been prevented." Johan cleared up, much to Sonic's mild… pretty serious anger.
"You kept killing them. Even as some of them were surrendering." Sonic growled, "You are brutal. Too brutal for us."
Johan slumped deeper in the snow, as if ready to take a nap, "You will understand one day that you have to kill to win wars. Any other belief is a lie made by indecisive fools."
Sonic growled, but he didn't really know how to respond, but fortunately Sally did it for him, "Alright, that's enough. I think we keep pushing east, and try to get Eggman."
"That is a gambler's plan." Johan growled, sitting up and pawing at the dirt.
"It's the only plan I have that doesn't involve us splitting up." Sally growled.
"Why not split up your men? Send men north and south, and have them return to the main lands." Johan proposed.
"We would enclose the remaining legionnaires, I know. But those men need supplies, and we can't help each other if something goes wrong." Sally explained.
"Put faith in your men, and they will believe in you. Where I am, you won't fail." Johan assured pushing his back down to stretch.
Sally frowned, but nodded "It would be more consistent than hoping we catch Eggman with his guard down. Still, I hope isn't planning anything big, because if so, we're giving him plenty of time to work out the kinks."
Johan snorted.
Sally looked up, "Alright, we will split into three teams, two teams of two hundred, and one team of four hundred. Alpha will push north, Bravo will push south, and Echo will keep the front safe from anyone attempting to break the pocket."
/*-*/
Fiona was assigned to Echo, for not so subtle reasons of "Sally is super-duper control freak who doesn't trust Fiona farther than she could throw her."
So, while Sonic and the other Penal solders were out fighting, She was stuck on guard duty within the city. Still, there were some benefits. Eggman hadn't pulled out all of the good food yet, so they found the sausage and wine stores.
Did they drink the wine? No, of course not. Why drink a good wine, when you could just throw it in the bottom of the pan with the sausages. It tasted good, but Fiona honestly wouldn't have minded a drink, especially with her company.
Sally kept a watchful eye from the tower, mainly on Fiona. Fiona kind of hated her, and also kind of understood. Granted, it had gotten old when the campaign started, and now it was outright frustrating. Still, the princess was probably not used to being the second prettiest thing in the room. That's what Fiona told herself jokingly.
Of course, Fiona wanted to get some sleep after dinner, but someone had to take watch. So she was in a tower with a half-eaten plate of sausage with wine sauce and stale bread, sitting up there with her rifle. Fiona looked down at the rifle, and pulled the bolt back.
It was oddly fascinating. Fiona leveled the rifle on her shoulder, and jerked back like she felt when she fired it, then pulled the bolt back. The whole bullet flew out and landed on the floor of the tower. Fiona pushed the bolt forward and pulled back. Another bullet. Another, and another. It was an odd form of entertainment, but it was entertainment.
Fiona reloaded the bullets, a sat in the chair. The odds of a night raid were… actually higher than she would like. If memory served correctly, Eggman was literally working with ninjas.
Fiona had to remain on alert incase-
The air vibrated and Fiona's ears perked up. She looked down past the wall, and saw the Green hedgehog, grinning up at her.
Fiona smirked back, "You've been quiet." She talked as quietly as she could. Fiona didn't exactly want her shadow finding out about this.
"Yeah, it's kinda hard to find time with you when you keep movin. So, what have you been doin so far away?" Scourge asked, looking up at her.
Fiona grinned slyly, "I've just been doing little things, getting their trust back one little bit at a time."
Scourge nodded, "Ah… I see. That's all right? My girl hasn't started a goody two shoes streak again… has she?" Scourge accused her with such a blatant tone.
Fiona snorted, "please, I know my spot. They've made it very clear I'm still a bad girl." Fiona grinned her best.
The truth was… she actually liked it there. Sally was a total pain to deal with, but getting back at Eggman and the thought of seeing her nephew again made the troubles all worth it. And Sonic… was an interesting case in her life. She felt terrible, terrible about hurting him over a misunderstanding, terrible about what she had become to get her revenge.
Scourge smiled at her comment, "You're my bad girl, and I love it when you're bad." He paused for a moment, "Alright, let's go." Scourge gestured to the open field that he was standing on.
Fiona looked down at the wall, probably a twenty-foot drop, "What?" She asked, laughing nervously. She found herself hesitant to go.
"Come on, there's got to be like two feet of snow here to break your fall. We'll be home free?" Scourge grinned.
Fiona wasn't quite ready to go just yet, "They put me on guard duty. Sonic is here, and the Wolverine is here."
"Wolverine? The big brown thing, yeah, I took care of him once." Scourge grinned, but he was slowly changing his demeaner.
Fiona shook her head, "He's not the same. He's gotten faster, and stronger I think. Look, I can't leave here just yet. We need a better plan that, "We'll just surprise them." We need something more solid." Fiona explained, hoping he would just run off with it.
Scourge frowned, " Yeah… What'd you have in mind?" He began to tap his foot. Just like Sonic.
Fiona licked her lips, "Well, you said you had a plan to come up with a big distraction. Set it up in a few weeks, and go nuts. Then, we'll leave. Just… keep it under control. I don't want them to hate us so much they come after us." Fiona explained, nervously. She really didn't want Frederick to denounce her over an escape plan. She still loved her family, but they had to accept this was Fiona Fox.
Scourge tapped his feet, "Just don't forget you're acting. Acting." He made that clear and ran off. She'd made him mad. Fiona would make it up to him later.
Fiona looked at the clock. Her shift was technically a minute over. Fiona descended down the spiraling stairs of the large tower. Each step seemed to creak as she slowly walked down, and got to the door.
"So… have an interesting conversation?" An annoying voice growled from behind Fiona.
"With myself, sure?" Fiona turned to face the Princess.
Sally nodded slowly, her eyes squinting at the fox, "You know… I was actually starting to think "Maybe she's not plotting against. Maybe she actually wants a second chance." Now… I'm pretty sure you're up to something."
Fiona glared back with a smug smile, just to get under her skin, "Maybe I am, maybe I'm not. But you don't have proof of either. So you'll hurt yourself a lot more than me if you try anything."
Sally licked her lips in frustration, "When you finally betray us, I'll make sure we never find your key."
Fiona snorted, and walked out. It'll be too late then. Fiona thought smugly. A part of her thought otherwise.
/*-*/
Cool wind howled through the air as the hunter's moon rose. Johan stood as the vanguard. The sudden shift north had created confusion among the men. These were the bastards of this society, and Johan had to say that there was truth in the belief.
These men carried themselves so confidently, so arrogantly. They wore armor they had not forged, and wielded weapons they did not make, yet they acted so invincible. The small wolf, leading them… Antoine… carried himself with the most arrogance.
Still, they had their uses, just like their fool of a king. Christ foretold that men could be changed and redeemed. Perhaps these men would redeem themselves in true courage and valor, as opposed to this false sense of power they thought they held.
He would not mind if they were Saxons, for Saxons were born into battle. They loved war almost as much as they loved food, mead and… pleasures. Some more so.
These men were not Saxons, they lacked the warrior ethos. Instead, they were born into a soft land, weakened by its own wealth and prosperity, corrupted by complacency. They would always have that love of wealth as opposed to glory. They needed discipline.
Still… Johan found one to be rather intriguing. A white fox, same as before. He kept his head low, and seemed to keep marching, angry and sad.
They camped out for the night, and Johan simply dug a hole in the snow. The fires placed all around let to some men laughing about telling stories. One was thief, before becoming a rapist. Another, a murderer who saw no fault in killing unarmed men in surprise. An Arson, which Johan saw as barely an offense.
Then, a couple heads turned to Johan. Johan closed his eyes, and prepared to sleep.
"Aw come on big guy, tell us your story. Why are you in the suicide army." A bear, the rapist, laughed.
Johan opened an eye, "Lived my life." Johan answered. That was all they truly had imprisoned him for. Now Johan lived as a mercenary. Next step was a king.
"Oh sure… We all lived our lives." The bear goaded, walking over, and daring to touch Johan with his filthy, uncontrolled hands.
Johan rose, feeling his anger rise, but holding it steady. He gripped the bear's arm, which had moved to touch Johan's side. The bear seemed shocked that he was suddenly in a tight grip.
"You claimed to defile the women of your lands with such pride." Johan growled glaring down at the smaller creature.
The bear jerked away, "Come on man, Sheesh, no touching it get. I had urges ok-"
Johan growled, a bore his claws in front of the bear's face as he jerked away, "Do you know what my people did to people like you?" Johan growled, baring his teeth.
The bear locked up, terrified.
Johan growled, dragging his claw down the forehead of the bear, not enough to draw blood, but enough to demonstrate their sharpness, "If you defiled an enemy's wife, there was no consequence. After all, they were weak and died as the weak should."
The bear shuddered as the claws made their way to the chin, "But if you dared to defile a woman of the tribe, we had a rare punishment." Johan's claws made their way down the bear's neck, "We'd tie you up-"
Johan held his claws at the base of the throat, "And give you to her family." With that, Johan pushed the bear with his gripped arm, and the bear scrambled away. Johan settled in for a rest… when he heard the movement to his right. Johan opened an eye, as it was clearly not a surprise attack.
The white fox approached him cautiously. Smart.
Johan sat up, pushing sleep aside, "Alright, I've heard them drone on and on about their accomplishments, why are you here. You lack their confidence, their fire about their sins. What makes you so different?"
"Nothin… nothin at all." The fox muttered, and walked away. Johan took the time to get some sleep. While he was skeptical that he would need to be at 100% for the coming battle, Johan saw it fit to be cautious. This commander seemed confident, yet cowardly. Those were not commander characteristics, at least not favorable ones.
When he awoke, Johan saw it only fit to stretch out. The camp was quickly packed up as Antoine seemed to taunt his soldiers with orders to "speed up". Johan was fast by nature, and quickly stamped out any fires and dung them under the snow.
Then it was out to march once again. This time, towards the city. Johan saw it fit that the defenders didn't even seem to have the gate closed. Johan had kept any stragglers from escaping the last city.
The smart thing to do would be to advance quietly into the gate while they were unaware, and their guards were down.
"Charge!" The Small Wolf shouted.
Johan growled, and quickly ran at the gate, as only a few seconds later a siren went out, screeching through the air, alerting the world to their presences.
As the gate seemed to close, Johan sped up, and wedged his paws in between the two doors. He pushed through the tightened defenses, finally pushed off the Red Garden Defenders… and strangely yellow rodents, which seemed small and quite powerless in the sense of strength.
"Quickly! Get the Teslas up!" A voice shouted from pillar that had been constructed.
Johan simply found himself enjoying life as he smashed these "Legionnaires" into the ground, crushing their bones and ribs.
Gun shots fired around Johan, although most of the enemy seemed focused on him.
Machines also worked their way out, the rigid bodies of the mechanical warriors making their way into stagnant formations, which Johan could easily bust. He was an Ulfheidnar after all.
Johan slammed into the row of metal warriors, feeling their light show against his steel plate armor. Of course they did nothing as their limbs were severed from their bodies.
Johan found it all… boring. It was the same, there was nothing coming from these fights. The same tactics, the same if not weaker enemies, the same weapons. Johan found himself slowing down, even Saxon honor fading in the monotony of inevitable victory.
What was the point of going all out if half way was enough. Johan decided, to turn around and see the advancing forces. His allies were quickly approaching, the battle was over. Johan focused on the white fox, which seemed… strange. His movements were jagged, and he seemed very focused on his targets: machines. The white fox seemed to completely exclude the fleshy targets.
Johan found it mildly frustrating, but it was-
Sudden a shout came from the pillars, "HAHA! NOW TRY THIS ON FOR SIZE"
He felt a fire jerk within his body as blue lightning erupted from pillars all around. Johan was…actually hurt. That stung. Johan wasn't sure whether to smile or snarl. It was nice to be hit with something new, but the actual pain was annoying.
Johan snarled as a large yellow Rodent in a suite of strange armor came out, "Haha, how do you like that one big boy!" She seemed to sneer.
Johan felt his arms jerking as the volts stung and jolted his muscles. But this would not be his end. Johan forced his limbs to obey. They moved, slowly as Johan raised a heavy leg towards the nearest pillar. Then another.
"OH… YOU THINK YOU'RE A TOUGH GUY HUH?" The Rodent roared in laughter and dared to throw a punch. A mechanical fist collided with Johan's face. Nothing moved.
The Rodent backed away, "GRRRR. LUCKY BREAK!" She shouted and threw another punch. Johan had made his way to the electric pillar, and forced his arms to disobey any natural sense of protection they had. He grabbed the pillar at its base and pulled up.
The pillar rose out of the ground, the metal veins connecting it snapping apart. With his Body twisting, Johan hurled the pillar into the other ones, striking the large rodent along the way.
Johan panted as the Electric current stopped, along with the enemy, and his allies. Johan approached the rodent that dared to taunt him.
She… was tiny. She had a whole suite to make her look big. This little rodent dared to try and run away from the wreckage, but Johan quickly brough down a fist, creating a new stain on the road. Still panting, he turned around to the shocked faces of everyone around.
Johan's eyes narrowed onto the cowardly white fox, who hadn't shot at the Rodent while it tried to attack him. He wanted some clearer answers.
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So…Uh… I think my computer my actually be dying. It stopped responding to anything, writing the next chapter. If I don't post for a month, just know that my computer probably burnt out and I'll be trying to get a new one.
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