New A/N: I realized a few errors from my first three chapters all of them are reposted read if you want to. The reason why Nel did not recognize anything is because everything is different:the evil/bad stuff/ppl are worsened and the good things (like certain elves...) look much nicer. Nel obsession is also limited to just watching the movie a few times unlike some of us...Ahem ,anyway the changes I made are small in the first ch. There is an incomplete sentence here so if u remember it just scroll down to it.Anyway I need a Beta reader.If any of you want to help me pls leave ur e-mail addy.
And to Are you kidding: I have no reason to lie and if I was someone older perhaps 16,17? I would be too embarrassed to post this up…I guess if I know how to think like them.
A/N: YAY! Reviews I would like to thank all of you who reviewed I almost considered taking it down and would have it weren't for your reviews. And to those (reviewers) who don't like it well, I guess you would not be here then anyway I appreciate your honesty. I feel so depressed. I failed my English and in my country if you fail your English you will be retained for year but this just the beginning of the year there is hope. And I took your advice Lauren (I think, was it you?) Anyway I would like to recommend the following really good stories which some you may have read.
The Traveler: Lord of the rings by (not sure but tell me if u know)
The universe in her eyes by Weena
The Dorothy shoes by Three amigos (I think)
Fortress around the heart and it's sequel Pentimento by (forgot too...)
The Bachelor, Legolas style by (this to...)
A girl named Jack and Jack Aldaron by ...
In wonderland and Through the looking glass by overcastday(I think..)
The bluest eyes (I think...)
Ley
Shadows of the soul
If you want me to read your stories please leave your penname(if you have not signed in...)
Disclaimer:What you don't recognizes mine unless of course u have never read the book or something but do not worry it is not going by the book. I have read it twice and all I can say is that it is too difficult for my small little mind to comprehend.
Italics: Thoughts
It was exactly a year ago when she first woke up in this room. She remembered thinking that maybe it was a dream or that she had bee kidnapped upon her awakening. Voicing out her thoughts were a mistake she should never have made.
Nel's point of view (A/N: She's not exactly the quiet type of person but she only talks when she feels like it and this part was what happened a year ago so it will be in present tense and her character would be a little bit different...)
"...where am I?" (the famous question to oneself out loud in any G.D.I.ME. fic)
"If you answer my questions, I will answer yours."
I don't remember anyone standing by the doorway when I checked ten seconds ago...Okay this have to be a dream something just entered and He is currently talking to it.
"Is this a dream? " I asked, interrupting his conversation with It.
"A dream? Donella, I understand this world might be new to you but I assure you this is no dream!" Did he just say world?
"You know my name! And what do you call this world anyway? Is that an alien? How about getting home?"
" Your questions will be answered after I get mine!"
"Which is...? Wait, don't answer that. Why should I answer your questions anyway? Will it help in some evil purpose of yours? Maybe this is a dream and I might wake up anytime soon..."
"Fine, since you believe it is a dream it will be a dream but only a year in your world..."
'In your sleep it will be
In your dream you will see
...Blah blah blah' (A/N: Lame I know but it is 3 am now so you see...)
Okay... that was weird!
"Why me anyway?"
"Actually there were others but they never made it alive. Some died on your world, some got lost along the way and some died here. You are the only one I manage to transport from there to here and therefore I believe you are the one, so I am sending you to and fro hoping nothing would happen"
Narrator's POW
He chanted some kind of spell and then she disappeared. And each night those dreams come. Perhaps it is from the past or maybe the future or the present. She doesn't know and hoped that it will remain a dream.
NOW
Nel looked around the room, it wasn't the room that scared her but the dreams that arise after the encounter. Nel wasn't sure what to do now, so she decided that taking a peek out of the door wouldn't hurt...she hoped. A long narrow hallway greeted her. She was confused, she expected to see a stone wall and a lantern. She closed the door trying to recall what exactly she saw when he entered.
A/N: Just to clarify some stuff. She is in two different places that's why there is confusion. She also likes to hide her negative feelings around her friend and be cheerful and all that.And to those who hate this story, I understand but please if you want to tell me atleast make it constructive it would help. Guess now I have to find a comp with internet connection. You know it is already late and my father is playing my Xbox game third age which I bought yesterday. (YaY) He's been playing it for the past five hours (its 4 am) and I thought he said it was boring...
