Okay, I really need feedback on this story. My sister said it was good but if it's not, I don't want to be wasting my time. Please?
Disclaimer: No owning of Gundam Wing
"Duo! Get up! Your fever broke and you've got to go to school!" The girl's voice broke into Duo's sleep. "Mom says get up!"
Duo blinked and stared up at the brown-haired, uniformed girl bending over him. His brain fought to figure out who she was and then it clicked and he groaned.
"Yeah, yeah, I did the same thing this morning. Get up. Mom just washed your uniform and it's in the closet."
Duo pushed himself up and staggered to the closet. Arashi stepped out and Duo pulled on the uniform. The uniform was black pants (Arashi had a black skirt), a white, button up shirt, and a black tie. The uniform matched Arashi's, except for the skirt, so Duo assumed they'd go to the same school.
"Duo!" His mom yelled up the stairs. "Hurry or you won't get breakfast!"
Duo darted out the door and down the stairs. The lovely smell of bacon wafted through the door and Duo paused. Arashi and a younger boy with darker hair sat at the table. A man with pale brown hair that was receding at the top was standing and kissing Arashi, the boy, and their mother. He smiled to Duo as he walked past and clapped him on the shoulder.
"Bye, Dad." Duo smiled at him and sat at the last empty seat.
"Feelin' all better, Duo?" The boy had clear, pale blue eyes. He couldn't have been more than seven years old.
"Solo, pass the syrup." Arashi interrupted, pointing.
Solo passed the syrup and turned expectantly back to Duo. "Yeah, Solo, I'm fine." Duo felt a pang at the boy's name, but let it pass.
"You two had better go, you'll be late." Their mother nodded to Arashi and Duo. Arashi jumped up, grabbed a pancake and ran out of the room. Duo followed more slowly and waited while Arashi dug through the front closet. She came up holding two pairs of shoes, one she threw to Duo, the other she pulled on.
"C'mon, Duo! We're gonna be late! Your backpack is in the closet." Arashi darted upstairs and Duo dug through the closet and pulled out a black and red backpack.
Arashi sprinted down the stairs and slid the last few feet to the door. "Duo, we've got to pick up you little friends."
Duo followed her out the door to see the blue sky stretching above them. "We're on Earth?" Duo spoke without thinking.
"Duh, same as every morning. Duo, I'm beginning to think you are sick, and more than just physically." Arashi ran up the steps and grabbed hold of Duo's arm. "We're not usually late for school, let's not blow it."
Duo followed Arashi down the street, staring around. The place looked somehow different from the point of a normal teen.
"Heero! Relena! How's it going? C'mon, Duo, don't drag your feet." Arashi ran to the brown haired boy and blonde girl waiting at the intersection.
Duo looked up to see Heero staring back at him. He opened his mouth to say something and Heero smiled. "Hey, Duo, Arashi."
Duo stared at him open-mouthed while he talked with Arashi. Something was wrong, Heero (smiling!)
"What's your problem, Duo? You look like you've never seen me." Heero raised an eyebrow slightly as the "Don't Walk" sign changed to "Walk".
"Don't worry about it; he's been acting weird since last night. You know, I found him collapsed on the floor." Arashi led them across the street. "He couldn't figure out where he was."
"Did you have a fever?" Relena leaned around Heero.
"That's another weird thing. I checked when I found him, and he did after mom checked." Arashi turned at the sound of someone calling her. "I'll see you guys later." Arashi ran across the street to her friends.
"So, Duo's the sicky now?" Heero laughed and Duo shuddered. "What's your problem?"
Duo shook his head. "Hey, what about Trowa, Wufei and Quatre?" Duo hadn't really thought when he asked the question but Heero just shrugged.
"We should see 'em at school, same as always. Oh, guess what Bloom told me?" Duo stared at him for a minute and Heero sighed. "Trowa?"
Relena laughed and turned to Heero, "What'd he tell you?"
"Say's we're getting an exchange student. Someone from colony L1."
Relena looked up at the large school as the first bell rang. "I wonder who it could be?"
"Class! We have a new student." The teacher spoke over the noise, waiting for silence. "She's a student from colony L1."
A girl about Duo's age stepped through the door. Duo coughed as he tried to gasp and the air got caught in his throat. It was Hilde. She had the same blue-black hair and dark eyes.
"Hello, my name is Hilde Une. I lived in Colony L1 with my two sisters and mom." Hilde shifted slightly and smiled around.
"Thank you, Hilde." The teacher smiled at her. "You can sit next to Mr. Maxwell, up there."
Duo snapped out of his shock as Hilde walked up towards him. Heero poked him in the back of the head with his pencil. "Duo, are you feeling any better? You're still acting weird."
Duo glanced over his shoulder. "I got a feeling of déjà vu."
Heero shrugged as Hilde sat next to Duo and pulled out a textbook. She smiled shyly and Duo smiled widely back.
"Hi, I'm Hilde." Held out her hand and Duo took it.
"I may run and hide, but I never tell a lie. I'm Duo Maxwell."
Hilde laughed and turned to Heero. He held out his hand and shook Hilde's. "Sorry I don't have a speech like Duo's, I'm Heero Yuy."
Hilde nodded to him and turned back to the front of the class as the teacher began the lesson. Duo yawned and leaned his head forward onto his hand.