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Heart in a Bouquet
Pt.1 Intrigues & Infatuation
"Okay let's move it to the left." To everyone else everything was perfect but Kagome; she's a bit of perfectionist at times. "Again?" Miroku said letting out a loud sigh full of pain and aguish which Sango shook her head at. Shippo giggled at the response from Miroku and then went back to the lollipop he was enjoying.
Kagome smiled at her friends and patted Shippo on the head affectionately and said, "Okay, Okay it's fine."
But the room was more than fine it was beautiful beyond words. It was snow white and the blue flowers tied to benches and the petals scatted about made it even more so.
InuYasha who came back later with Sesshomaru who had the same express he always wore but, was amazed that three people and a kid could fix up the room like this. InuYasha watched as the girl whose face was almost mirror image of Kikyo glide over to him.
"We finished so were going to take our leave now." And all of them began to walk to the door. "We'll be back in a week or so to pick up the money, just tell us the day." And she pushed open the door.
"Oh!" she said suddenly and dashed over to Sesshomaru and InuYasha. "For the groom a red rose the color of love," She pulled out one rd rose and placed it InuYasha's hand. Smiled the turned to Sesshomaru and took out a yellow rose and places it in his breast pocket. "Yellow the color of happiness, smile more and be happy." She laughed and slipped a business cad into InuYasha's other hand.
"Please tell your friends of us."
And she waved flashing a brilliant smile.
And she was gone, back to her flower shop downtown, but the odd felling of infatuation wasn't and unfortunately for Kagome Sesshomaru only felt this twice in his life both ending in disaster.
-SLAP!"
"I told you Miroku to keep your filthy hands off me!" Sango said arguing with Miroku who had an imprint on his face but smiled sheepishly. "But Sango we're to be married soon." Sango blushed when she heard the word 'married'. And Miroku took this to his advantage leaning over and kissing Sango softly.
Kagome wasn't envious by nature but se couldn't help but be It seemed like everyone around her as getting engaged or married. Her high school friend Ami was going to be married in June and her former co-worker Mai (no relation to YGO) was already married and no longer worked since she had a little boy who in e-mails said was a handful.
Not being able to listen to couples anymore she closed the back window and Shippo slept peacefully leaning against Kagome while e slept.
Dear Diary,
Today I met two people, two brothers in fact! Te older looking of the two was handsome but seemed cold he was intriguing though. The other was getting married, he seemed to be stressed but he called me by a name a recognized, Kikyo.
Is that where you are Kikyo, Inu-Taishio manor? Is that were you've been?
That all!
Love, you're never too old to write,
Kagome
"Kagome there's gentleman downstairs who wants to see you."
It was a week after the delivery Kagome picked up the check and the older of the two brothers handed it to her.
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"Thank you very much." Kagome gave a polite curtsy with the check in her hand. "You are welcome." He said. Kagome smiled like she always did, but then something happened, their eyes met and a spark went off.
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Kagome came down wit a sigh, 'Please don't let it be Hojo again.' Hojo was polite but to persistent.
"How may I help ...you?" Kagome lifted up her head to meet with piercing red eyes. "Naraku Onigumo." A smirk and Kagome's mother retreated upstairs.
A wave of tension and confusion spilled through the air and Naraku opened his mouth to speak
I know the capter are short...but are they satisfying? and...Once again Continue Yes? No?...Suggestions?
