Wow, I was 15 when I posted this story, and then I went off to college and forgot all about it. So sorry. I am surprised by the number of reviews I've gotten, because this story is- really bad. That's the euphemistic review of one very blunt reviewer. But hey, they were being honest and truthful. On the other hand, I was 15, give me a break.
I don't know if I'm going to some serious rewriting here, or call it quits and start something else afresh. To be honest, I've forgotten what I had in store for my protagonist, and her relationship to Trunks. But I'll sit on it, and if anyone out there has any opinion on the matter, besides that the story is bad, I'm open to it.
Thank you so much to all that have read and reviewed. It is greatly appreciated, and please check up and see if I have posted anything new. I'll email anyone who really cares.
Until next time, koneko212